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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many supermarket are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. what are the reason for this? is this a positive or negative development?

Many supermarket choose selling products from other countries rather than local products because it can bring low taxes. in my opinion, it lead to negative development which is local products will decrease in sales and it has impact to small business.

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21. In many parts of the world, more and more large supermarkets are opening and smaller local shops are closing down. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages for local people?

Recently more massive supermarkets are making their way into the general consumerism. They are preferred than the smaller local markets, which makes them to shut down. This rapid change contributes to more of a disadvantage to local individuals, then an advantage, because of the fact that many people are losing their jobs by removing the owned stores. Certainly there are a few reasons why these difference in the market may make most of people’s lives easier. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force such as the army while others think women are not suitable for this kind of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the thought about women have to engage navy and the air force just like men. Now people are beginning to realize that women should be allowed to join the forces. From my point of view, i think that this statement is completely wrong.

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Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days ecological issues are problems for everybody in the world. Apparently, each individual must try to contribute into the wellness of our ecology. Interestingly, it is stated that children, at some point become more aware of ecological hardships than adults are. In this essay I will negate on this topic and provide my opinion along with sensible arguments.

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Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

Experts point out that people don't have to spend a great deal of time in office in order to save energy. Therefore,some working institutions close for some days per week. This essay will delve into the details of advantages as well as demerits that regard the given topic.

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In many countries the number of visitors to art galleries has been steadily declining. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to improve the situation?

The number of visitors to art galleries has decreased. many problems and factors, but I try to explain five problems and factors.

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some argue that he quality of product is what matters while others suggest that products should be affordable. discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years, there have been people who argue that quality of product is more important than being affordable. As such advantages and disadvantages to this topic, although I opine that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant arguments based on factual premises.

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Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability, but others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Traditionally, students have different academic performance in the same school, but there's a controversial issue that whether according students scores to seperate the groups.

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your friend from another country is coming to stay with you and your family for a week, for the first time. write an email to this friend about the visit. in your email you should : explain where you would like to take your friend describe who your friend will meet say what your friend should bring your email should be 50 words at least

How are you ? I hope you are doing fine . Then tell me what you were doing in the last exam you told me about.

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Some people believe that people stay fit if they joing gym and sports Club while other think that they stay fit doing walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views along your opinion

Proponents deem that dwellers stay fit if they do joining gym and sports club while opponents reckon that they stay healthy doing walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. I will handout both the perspective along with my opinion.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

First of all the number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatments with usual doctor are growing up, so try to look back for the what kind of health problems they have? If it’s serious health problems don’t trying to check up to your usual doctor. And I think its bad plan and negative for serious health problems patient.

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In many places all over the world, it is suggested to relocate from rural to urban

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An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is this the case, and what solutions are possible?

Nowaways, there is a growth in the supply for consumer goods and it has a negative impact on environment. The essay will examine the causes related to this tendency and the measures could be taken to improve the situation.

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Nowadays people like to use new electronic equipment. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Electronic devices have spreaded fastly and begun to utilizing wide range of field from healthcare assistance to navigation. At this point a question comes to the minds: whether the use of electronic devises is a positive amendment? It can be easily stated that using electronic devices makes people’s lives easier by helping on the road and monitoring general health status without a licenced medical worker.

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Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In this contemporary era, it is quite common that the value of consumer goods has lowered. In my opinion, i tend to believe that it provides both advantages and disadvantages. However there are fewer benefits than advantages. In the upcoming paragraph i am going to explore them fully.

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Many companies are strongly against having personal relationships in the workplace and impose strict policies against it. For example, an individual who involves an manufacturing company,if the place atmosphere is not good such the boss always rude with employees , and working hours Do you agree or disagree with this practice?,

There are so many companies , did not making good relationships with employees , alongwith gives some stricts law for this, may think would be more beneficial. I am completely disagree of this apnoach, will be covered in this essay.

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crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce the crime rate.

These days, crime poses a serious causes in this modern era. Every individuals throughout the world has given their opinion which is lack of opportunity, umemployment, illiteracy these are the main point for such reason. In this essay , I will discuss regarding crimes occuring rate and about satisfactory solution in further paragraph.

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Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances. Otthers believes that most crime is cused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some people say series of conditions is the reason behind most crime. others thinks bad nature of some people is the result of most crimes. In this essay, I will discuss the caused behind of the majority of the crimes and I will provide my point of view.

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Nowadays. More and more people decide to have children in their later life .what do you think are for this reasons. Do the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages.

Majority of nation, more and more dwellers plan to have kid delay in their life. It is easily seen that the financial burden is one of the reason why many spouses tend to latter their childbirth because birth early forces then to tighten the budget. The advantages of this trend outshine the disadvantages which I will hashout in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, technology has been helping very much in people’s today life and we can also talk that technology are playing an important role in our life now. And because of the growth of technology, there are also more and more translation software available in the internet. But in the other side, although the increasing rapidly of translation software, there is still an opinion about learning a language still could be advantageous. And for me, this is an excellent opinion.

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