IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 188

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, young people are increasingly excelling in literacy. Numerous people have suggested that this shift was caused by increased competition for jobs, and others have suggested that the additional opportunities for learning in today's junior communities were responsible for the improvement. In this essay, I will discuss both of these points and explain why I think fighting for a job gives more incentive to continue education.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this privileged era that honored with adverted and intricate science, every facet of your circumstance that you can envisage have been revolutionized. Several of these alters ameliorate the human thornier suffering and some of which put a tremendous strain and burden on our shoulders.to my way of thinking, any cutting edge phenomenon that derived from science must have oriented toward human kind life qualities improvement. In this essay will go further and clarify and demonstrate my notion.

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Out of a country health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures To what extent do you agree or dis agree with this statement?

In this era that we have been living in, health and healthily lifestyle have concentered one of the most paramount and momentous concerning topics. Governments have been dedicating enormous budge for remedying patients and whom massive expenditure put a tremendous strain on society administrations shoulder. Logically behind my mind is that, a particular proportion of this funding must have been advocated for preventing of chronic illness. In this essay, I will clarify my ideas and demonstrate it.

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Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

In this contemporary era security is one of the most critical criteria for possessing appropriate circumstance for flourishing in any facet. Governments are in charge and liable to cater this protection for society articles and one approach for attain this aim is determine corporal punishments as a necessary evil for villain delinquent akin death penalty. The way that I see this, this kind of retribution must be implemented in stern cases and in vast verity of situations should be tucked away.in this essay I will explore the logic behind my mind and clarify both side of this coin.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years shopping has become an activity which people are keeping on their hobby list. It's not happening in a single society or a single country but all over the globe. Especially for young person shopping is the most leisurely activity. However, this trend is viewed as positive or negative depending on the individual's point of view. In this essay, I shall try to explain my views on this culture and my opinion on this subject matter.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Organization is a part of life which people doing their job over their by their own decision and which helps to improve overall growth. Many people think they spend all working life in the company. While others say it is good to change another organisation for work. I will discuss my views both positive and negative in upcoming paragraphas. It is a logical conclusion

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The most important aim of science should be improve peoples lives . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

The main goal of science is enhanced living standard of people lives. I agree with this statement because individuals can improve bonding by using scientific inventions and improve their workability.

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Nowadays teenagers are suffering from a lot of pressure. Write an essay of about 250 words to list the cause of teen pressure and give solutions.

In the modern world, the youth has to suffer from a lot of pressure. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and some possible solutions to help tackle this issue.

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Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? #cr

In future, crime rates will decline due to inventions of modern technology which has make easy to detect and control of violence.This essay completely agrees with the statement that upcoming generations will have less crime ratio because of futuristic technology which will help more in capturing criminals and preventing them for crimes.

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Researches shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

On the contemporary era, humans achieve numerous progresses in disparate scheme. One of the most significant inventions of scientists is the internet. These days, we are obsessed with the internet and if we do not have access to it for a couple of hours, our entire life will be irregular. The main question that should be asked is whether this phenomena beneficial for human race or not?

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many employers offer their employees gyms,sports club. Others believe that it is unnecessary. discuss both views and give your own opinion .

These days you could see companies that offer their workers free services hoping to see some increase in the company's productivity or even the hygiene of the employees. One of the most known services that are given to the them is a free gym membership. While this might be a good idea, many oppose this side and think that its not really needed for companies to do so.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's rapidly evolving world, entering to the university is crucial. It is argued that, while many individuals go to higher educational institution for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. I firmly disagree with this statement and believe that drawbacks are far greater.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for . Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation ?

In recent years, many people work in jobs that they neither have any interest at or talent for. This can occur due to many causes whether it is due to pressure from surroundings or society, and as a result, it can have some adverse effects on personality .

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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the advertisement industry growing rapidly, hence, sparking debate that people are forced to view or listen to these advertisements and it affect negatively to people's lives. I partially agree with the statement because there are many negatives that can not be ignored however, there are a few positives as well.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today's evolving world, health plays a significant role in everyone lives. Therefore, many kinds of treatment are available nowadays, including traditional methods of healthcare as well as alternative medicine. It is argued that, number of people who try alternative treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor are increasing. Although this action presents some advantages, I believe that the drawbacks associated with it are far greater.

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Scientist agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly, todays world is the world of diversity. We can vividly see that people have more tendency these days to try new types of almost everything. One of the most crucuial things is about junk food which according to the scientists could be very harmful for our body. There are two groups among people, and one group believe that we should train people, unlike the other group who think it public awarness is not beneficial.

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Some people think that it's easier for adults to learn skills (Ex: Computer skills) by themselves. Others think they need the help of a teacher in a classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion as well.

It is often argued that self-learning is a better way for adults, particularly officers to learn new skills, while others believe that the guidance of an experienced teacher may help them learn that skills more effective. In my opinion, although two ways of learning have their own benefits, it is much dependent on the preferences of learners and context of skills being learned.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In every second of human life, a person will always make decisions. Whether it was small like what clothes to wear or a big decision like a career to choose, it must be decided before moving on to the next decision. However, the accessibility to information makes the option seem to be unlimited and it depends on the person to choose their option. This essay will outline why there are so many choices available.

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Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it is believed by some that zoos are not have important values, others said that zoos have some tangible benefits. This essay will delve into the both points of view and my opinion will be illustrated.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowdays enterprices are egar to provide necessory training of their needed employess. Some establishments obseved that their new employees are non competent for interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. In this essay I shall explore some reasons for this issue and suggest some solutions.

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