IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 189

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The only reason for people working hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Admittedly, in recent times myrad people work hard in order to gain money; however this is not the main reason. In this essay I will explain my opinion in terms of againts this statement.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays it is common that people say I will stay in my current job or I don’t need that much money and I’m shouldn’t be worried and I still young ,I don’t want to be rich and making excuses for there incompetent. on the other hand , many people believe that if we try to make progress we will fulfill our dreams and we can improve our daily life . in this essay we will talk about how our mind and our belief makes our situation .

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It has been suggested that everyone in the world want to own a car,a tv and fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweighs??

Due to advancements in science and technology, today each individuals wants to more personal vehicles, Tvs, and a fridges as their daily necessities things which were luxury products a few years ago. There are several advantages and disadvantages to this phenomenon but the disadvantages definitely outweigh the advantages.

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Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think small town life is more suitable. Discuss both sides

Infrastructure is cardinal role play in the society for live a long life. Which is impact on the children as they grow up in the city. While others think country side area is more suitable. My perspective both have positive and nagative side i will discuss both points in upcoming paragraph. It is a logical conclusion.

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is currently unlawful in collective locations in many nations. Many citizens trust that a prohibition is vindicated. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this forbid because it can reduce the amount of people who are addicted to cigarettes and also prevent lung diseases caused by tobacco

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Some people think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era, as all writing can be stored electronically. Others believe that printed books still play an important role in our lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As digital technology can save all writing, people have different views about whether printed books are not necessary. Although this technological advancement and convenience are undeniably significant, I firmly believe that printed books will continue to play a crucial role in our lives.

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Nowadays, students’ behaviour becomes the main concern for teachers. The manner of students is getting worse due to several factors, resulting in negative impacts.

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With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their lists. Do you think that this tendency helps people to find new friends or it's just a mean to increase their self-esteem. Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

At present, there are so many social media platforms , where people make new friends to create more social image . People have divergent opinion about ,whether it is good to connect new ones everyday on online place to help them , or it’s only mean to rise their social values ; whatever it is, I am against with adding strangers to their lists ;this essay will explain further and provide a logical conclusion.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays regarding the advent of technology progress ,the remote study is the most favourite method for presenting courses around the world without a high level of efforts to choose people to enter into programmes,however, It would be wonderful because educational justice around the world is coming true dreams and many populations who has not access to the best academic institution could be able to push on their own keyboards and connect to the academic classrooms in best countries ,however, It would not be a real study program in some important reasons ,for example, poor evaluation electronic systems on assessing learners level and understanding of topics ,poor communication with peers and will promote the solidarity around the world ,so , I believe the disadvantages of virtual study are heavier than advantages and I will explain in detail.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

The aspect of being lived and to settle in a foreign country becomes a decision of some people. Nowadays, people might get travel for the purpose of being enjoyed or to migrate.there are some advantages and disadvantages for young people who have decided to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

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Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism?

Over the last two or three decades, the international tourism industry is improvised due to the globalization. Even though, many claim that international tourism has many drawbacks in countries. There are two main reasons on this trend such as increasing the crime activities and pollution while this essential remedy might be altered this like strict rules and regulations from the embassy.

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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? It is possible or negative development?

Nowadays, the tourism are widen their industry in all over the world. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon as well as the reason why this is a negative development.

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Some people says we should plant trees on free space jn city and town while some says that we should do construction. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate about the utilization of free areas in cities. Personally, I agree that planting trees in those available areas is going to be beneficial more for humanity in the long run than just focusing on building constructions alone.

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Nowadays, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enhance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology is flourished by leaps and bonds in many fields, especially eductaion. Today modernized era, mothers and fathers are permitted to their kids use the modern gadgets like tablets and phones for learning cause enhancing their knowledge. This trend has more benefits outweigh the drawbacks and this essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such place?

The popularity of exploring rural areas is growing nowadays, which prompt both positive and negative effect to local area. While the incremental tourists could boost local economic, the pollution caused by human-activities should not be overlooked since it could damage the environment of those areas, along with it, the risk that bared by visitors.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is a rising issue among societies about how some children use most of their time each day on their mobile phones. This matter caused by various interesting thing which are provided by smartphones and it is lead to two sides of the development: increase children knowledge and raise effect number of unnecessary illness in their stage. I personally deal with the former notion.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many university students yearn to study in the overseas as part of their studies. Even though studying in other countries leads to some drawbacks, I contemplate that it has more merits.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages ot this outweigh the disadventages

Adlescents are the building blocks of any country, therefore, their education aspects are the prime concerns in the present era. A segment of society believes that study of a foreign language should introduced in the begginer period while others proposed, it should be added in their secondary education. This attitude has more benefits than drawbacks which are discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years shopping has become an activity which people are keeping on their hobby list. It's not happening for a single society or a single country but all over the globe. Especially for young person shopping is the most leisurely activity. However, this trend is viewed as positive or negative depending on the individual's point of view. In this essay, I shall try to explain my views on this culture and my opinion on this subject matter.

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Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them .Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days people live in Morden lifestyle. they always think about whether they should attention to them to present something to their friends and family to show their love for them. Another one thinks that there are much better ways to show bonds.in this essay, I will discuss both views and discuss my opinion.

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