IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is argued that people nowadays are travelling more than in the past. This essay would argue that the reason why this happens, is because of globalization and the improvement of transports, this allows people to travel easily, and the benefits of this development is that individuals can know new cultures.
Peer group pressure is the hot topic today in the most scientefic argues that say young people like teenagers are often influnced by others of the same age especially in behaviour and attitudes aspect. That most researches confirmed that it (Peer group pressure) always work in worst way also I have to mention that some researchers found out that it can have excelent aspect too. In one hand, in some of researchs that I mentioned above scintists head to some adults to ask them how peer group pressure affected on their lives, they collected a great number of survies that was done by a huge variety of adults in diffrent ages an sexes. Most of comments that they revied is unpredictable people that completed the forms was belived peer group pressure has a negative effect on their behavior but they loved the way their spent their livies with the colliges. On the other hand, one paper was published by Kansas State university wich takes over 20 years to complete with about houndred of partic...
In recent years the number of employers emphesise more on social skills of job seekers than their acadamic certificats. I completely agree with them due the fact that achiving academic goals it is not a neccery ability that can help the company during the hard situations in addition to someone with great knowldge but with lack of social abilitys can not act proparly in a team.
Nowadays, the development of technology and ways of buying and selling products are changing the consumers’ lives. I strongly agree that they can be beneficial for improving new habits of people consumptions.
Nowadays, developed countries are becoming more developed and poor countries are becoming more poorer. There is a imbalance in the system although, most of the countries are facing the lacking of food supply. In the following Eassy, I will discuss about it and try to find out possitive solutions.
It is often said that the quality of living in the 21st century is higher than for those living in the ealier centuries. I agree with this idea and I’m going to explain some reasons below.
Nowadays, some folk claims that young generation have a wealth life and live in really great conditions but a lack of luckiness make their life unsuccessful. The main reason for this is that social medias destroy their life and spend more time with close people is a viable solution.
In todays technology era, everything is upgraded day-by-day. Some people claims that the priority of public librabries is to serve books instead of digital media such as Videos, DVDs and Software. Library is source of knowledge where people can get everything whatever they want. In my opinion, I am completely disagree with this given statement and i will elaborate my arguments in the trail paragraphs.
Recently, there has a debate about whether university students should spend time on learning other subjects in addition to their main subject or just focusing on their main subject. Some think that learning other subjects will help students gain more skills, while others believe that spend time on certain thig is the only wat to success.
nowadays, most of the communities have been selecting to reside down abroad after their higher degree. As because of, in their home country they donnot have enough oppertunites what they are expecting for. In my opinion, dwell at foreign country is a good option to choose. in the following eassy i discuss about my point of view.
Creative artists must have the freedom to develop their own imagination in whichever method they wish. There must be no authority rules or community restrictions on what they make. In my opinion, I agree that creative artists should have the freedom and that may increase their efficiency. However, government should have punshment if the art is inappropriate.
Nowadays there are a lot of translation software available, however, there is an opinion that learning a language could still be more helpful. In my opinion, both points of view make sense, but in the contemporary world I would definitely choose to know language.
Some people say that it is vital to suffer bad circumstances like unfulfilling jobs or lack of money, while others believe that these situations should be developed. This essay will explore both viewpoints and offer my personal assessment of the situation.
Crime has become a huge problem in the world. While some people think criminals should stay longer in prison, other people have different oipinions.
While some people believe that special plant and animal extinction is the prominent environmental issue we confort today, others claim that there are more vital reasons causing environmental problems. This essay will explore both perspectives and explain why I believe that some other reasons threaten a pleasant environment.
It is told that development of people's lives should be an extremely important goal of science. I think there are various fields for science to concentrate that are as important as the lives of people. So, I somewhat disagree and agree with this statement.
Education has always been a prime concern of the world in time immemorial. In the contemporary era, we have available many subjects like science, arts and commerce while in most of countries, students do not opt for science courses in universities. From my perceptive, there are many reasons of this and this may affect society.
Recommendation Letter November 14, 2023 Dear Admission Officer, This letter is written in supplement of Kailin’s application to your esteemed university. As her director in Meicheng, I have the privilege of witnessing her remarkable performance and understanding of her job. Thanks to her excellent communication skills and teamwork spirit, she is actively making contributions and easy to work with. Kailin believes that English education is important and people will benefit from cultural and linguistic diversity. And after learning about her passion for the language education, I wholeheartedly recommend her for admission to your graduate program. Kailin is highly motivated and eager to learn. She seems to have endless energy to help and encourage job seekers of all groups. She has a positive attitude and always seems happy to do whatever she is asked to do. Kailin is a fast learner, even without having to be told, she always seems to know what to do next and how to do it well becaus...
It is believed that there are two feasible routes to move on your academic career. Compared to getting into a university which possibly raise students' success, applying for a job after high school graduation benefits school-leavers to some extent. In my opinion, studying at university place a firm background for job appliants. This essay will elaborate both viewpoints and illumiate writer's opinion.
The right to vote is being neglected by young people in some nations. This essay will first discuss that this irresponsible behavior can hamper country's development and they can lose their national identity card and this problem can be overcome by the enforcement of strict laws and by creating awareness among general public about the real impact of this.
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