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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Read the question below and write an opinion essay. Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan. Only then attempt to write this essay. With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

In this tecnological era, youngsters have limited access to the internet as they are becoming thw primw suspect of cybercrimes this days. Although this essy explain that why web is not a trustworthy place for kids as well as how people protect their loved ones from falling in horrible situations while using internet.
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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the government of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Economy is depends upon the dwellers because every nations have their own strengths of youngsters. According to my prespective government of poorer nations to look after their citizens. I accord with the latter notion discord.

To initiate with the most prominent benefit is that youngsters are pillers of every country have their own talent. Moreover, government need to work in education, infrastructure, and law that makes more upgrades in country. Due to this people's lives more comfortable and creating opportunities for students. Such as, Dubai was no source of water and farming 1887 but now Dubai has own willpower because of authority changes rules and regulations. Authority starts investment their own lands and build many opportunities of citizens and also constructed the modern building and clouds formation which helps to produce rainfall in dubai further with the help of petrol dubai has sell and generate more profits in addition again it has invest to their own country and form globally talent come and work in dubai so that dubai become more independent.
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Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash. Do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

Technology has flourishing by leaps and bounds in people's lives to become easy their day-to-day activities. The electronic transactions provide multifarious benefits, and as a result, many prefer to use plastic card instead of the traditional way which is money. I think this phenonmenon has benefits as well as drawbacks too. This essay discuss it briefly in the following paragraphs.
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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life of city dwellers be maintained?

One school of thought holds that most people should settle in urban areas instead of living in suburbs or rural areas to reduce the traffic issues. There is a wide range of negative effects brought about by the rapid rise in population and several ways to maintain the quality of urban residental life.
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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some parents think that their adolescents and teenagers should engage in additional academic activities during their free time. I completely disagree with this statement and consider that the kids would be under too much pressure. Nevertheless, in this essay, I will discuss both sides of the issue.
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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and joining universities. What are the advantages or disadvantages?

Every student has a year off between finishing school and joining universities. It is becoming increasingly popular than previous years. It has some advantages & disadvantages and which are different from student to student due to their works and procedures.
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There is no denying the fact that computers have positive impact on children. Learning from an early age is an initiative step so it is a good step to use computers, but its time should not proceed so long.This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using computers

The charts show the results of research on adult education. The bar chart provides the causes why matures decide to study while the pie chart gives the information about costs of education.
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The illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The process demonstrates the way in which coffee is manufactured. Overall, there are twelve stages in the process, beginning with categorizing beans and culminating in coffee package.
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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

Cinema enjoyers have a debate about whether people need to bring cellphones or tablets into the room since it can ruin the wtaching experience. We could explain it from both point of views and being symphatize to everyone. In this essay, I will discuss the difference from these opinions.
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In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace.

Although, many benefits effort women have performed in their education and work, they are still detrimental in terms of income and job promotion. This Is because people have different outlooks about women roles in their live especially in the work place.
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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a negative development?

In this contemporary global conversation, the appearance of reusable energy has surgerd as a pivotal topic, eliciting varied viewpoints. A notable segment advocates this phenomeon is negative, while a substanial group counters that it is benefical for human bieng. It is my firm belief that the agreenment for this argument in favor of supporting alternative sources of power are not only persuavie but also grounded in robust and logical foundations.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

All of the things in this world should control for bear something good. It is necessary children to know what is the difference between wrong and right in their young age. penalty is important to health the ucrab this barier.I strongly agree with this because punishment leads them to a right way, they will be get fear, mature in short time and curiecity to analycis.
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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, most of the parents want to observe the improvement of their children and they provide many opportunities for their kids. Some people consider the free time activities should be educational or effective whereas other individual think about this regard children can choose the activities for themselves because that is their leisure time. I strongly agree with first idea and I will explain my opinion with some example.
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Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I think that the issue about whether all students must be required to wear school uniform is the one that is open for debate. Some people think that all students must wear the school uniform. However, others think that students should decide what to wear to school themselves. Personally, I believe that students should wear what they like. For several reasons, which I will mention bellow, I think that school uniforms should not be required to wear at high school.
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People from cities go to university more often than those who live in the country. Some people think that the government should make it easier to enter universities for people who live outside of cities and towns by setting lower entry requirements and tuition fees.

The education is essential in the life for individual. Some argue say that, the developed countries have greater opportunity to go university rather than who live in countryside. Although financial demand, the most organisation interesting to provide education also for outside countries.
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Most of the people in older time used to stay in the same place. Now many people keep changing places and move to various places during their life time. What Are the reasons for this? Do u think that it is a positive or a negative development?

In the past,our ancestors used to live in same places but many people move todifferent type of places in modern society.This two statements have some negative and positive development.Then this esaay will further explore the reasons and relevant this matter.
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Companies engage in acquisitions and mergers because that is one of the easiest ways to secure fast and diversify their investment portfolios. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, in order to achieve rapid growth and diversified investment portfolios, enterprises are increasingly participating in mergers and acquisitions. I totally agree with this view.
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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.

People have different views about whether the internet's effects are useful or not. While some people think that the internet is useful for people's interaction, other people and i believe that people and societies are become more isolated.
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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this?

In time gone by , residents become intrested in finding out about the history of house or building they live in .This essay will examine the main causes of living in historical places and possible solutions to this problem .
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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Athers believes that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most discussed issues nowadays is keeping animals in zoos. It is undeniable that animals become essential part of our life including pets and zoo parks. But there is not absolute agreement on whether good idea that animals kept in zoos or not. I think this essay will lead to the logical deduction.
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