IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 32

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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When children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than their parent. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The best way for children to education is neither family nor teachers , because after school, parents begin to play a role kiddo's life. This essay discusses parent's effect and teacher 's precious on children's development.

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#Crime | #Education - In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

I Believe Education Evolves peoples' lives and thus is crucial for each person's growth as well as the human society as a whole.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make decisions on every day choices such as food, clothes, entertainment will result in a society of individuals who think only of themselves, others are of the opinion that decision should be made about issues which affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, parents who several methods for growing children; moreover, a group of the believe that when we let children choose their devices; In fact, we grow children who think only of themselves; however, other people think it is crucial that decisions made about issues which affect them. In my opinion, children must select things that not only they want but also they needed by themselves also, parents can help them in their matters.

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Nowadays. Children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think these activities are not beneficial for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology has numerous benefits, however, excessive use of it can lead to chronic health conditions, particularly in younger generation. Therefore, many people think that children should stay away from using these electronic gadgets, moreover, I completely agree that the use of gadgets such as mobile phones, TVs and video games are harmful.

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Some people think that competition at work, school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There have been growth demand for being successful at work, at school and in daily life. While it is argued that competition in life can lead to get achievements. In my opinion, working together as a team and cooperate with each other leads to better incomes.

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Some people think that because of email and telephone, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with that view? Use specific reason and example to explain to your answers.

Nowadays, many people prefer to communicate through their phones and emails rather than communicating in person . Do you agree with that ? In my opinion, I agree with this statement . In this essay , I am going to mention some of the reasons for why I believe that .

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having large numbers of toys.

Some individuals get their children a good number of toys. Little ones always are happy after receiving a tool of joy, while grown people spend a lot of their money on these playthings which also evolve over time.

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education so that they can at least read, write, and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over whether offering six years of free tuition is the best way to decline poverty in thriving nations. In my opinion, this is not the best way.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While many believe that university degrees are essential for getting better career prospects, others consider hands on learning as the prerequisite. From my perspective, I partially agree with this notion since theoretical knowledge and practical experiences, both are necessary for professional achievements.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why somone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

İt is argued by people to purpose of learn a new language. In one hand, some individuals believe that final aim for learn a new language is travel or job oppurtinities. On other hand, some individuals believe that tis cannot be only reason to learn a new language. This essay will explain both side of the argument.

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The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Over the lest few years migration of people from the countryside to the urbans for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. This essay will shed some light on the main problems of such a phenomenal and provide several plausible solution to resolve the same.

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Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion

There are some public places where smoke is banned. I believe that this prohibition is the best decision that the government and the commerce can make. The decision of smoking is something personal and it is not fair that people that do not have this habit become a passive smoker.

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Some commentator feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandparnts, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is debated among the public whether ederly people should live with their kids and grandchildren or independently. From my perspective, both sides have their own adavantages but I am more inclined toward extended family which I will explain in the next paragraph.

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Robert Snowden: Some people think that people are naturally gifted to be a leader. Others, however argue that anyone can learn leadership. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Robert Snowden is an inspiration for all leaders. As per Robert, there is a divide between people who think that leadership is a natural ability and those who believe that these capabilities can be learned. I personally think that the latter is true.

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Nowadays, there are more and more young people don't like cooking. It becomes a trendy problem in society. How could we encourage young generation to learn cooking? Write an email to the manager of the club. Tell the manager what suggestions you will make and why. Write 120-150 words.

I am writing this email to share my thoughts on the decline in enthusiasm for cooking among young individuals in society.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today

The diagram displays the layout of Port Harbour in 2000 compared to the current look. Overall, it is clear that there are additionals of several facilities, such as another shower and toilet area, a dock, cafes and shops, and a hotel, while the location of fishing boats and private yachts are exchanged between each other.

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Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train, or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion.

Some people prioritize using their own cars to go around to becoming a customer of public means of transport. While travelling by bus or train can save up lots of our money, i incline to the former behavior due to convenience cars bring.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is argued by many people that having a house is an important part of their life, especially for the people of Indonesia since it will be the higher achievement of their entire life. However, others argue that renting a house is preferable since the price of residents is unaffordable.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation? A

In some places , it is important have a private home rather than renting it. Human wants financial stability in their lifes, so they think if you have your own property, everything will be all right.People who are trying to have their own property, might have lots of problem with health on the way of achieving it. I believe it is negative situation because our health is at first.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? wHAT COULD BE THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING SELF-EMPLOYED?

Today a lot of people want to work for themeselves instead of working for anybodyelse, companies or organisations because of people like to be free and try for themselfe for making more many but being in this way have some hardness like worke harder and more time and managing a lot of things that it would be much more harder.

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