IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 34

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think that these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In my part of the world, crime novel and television crime drama have become increasingly popular forms of entertainment. This rise in popularity can be see across all age group and social back ground, suggesting a white spread appeal. This essay will discuss the reason for this trend and present my opinion on crime related media.

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?

Nowadays, the advantages of walking to maintain health and physical feet have been proven. A number of people who choose to exercise by walking are significantly decreased. There are many causes that lead to this phenomenon. In this essay, I will outline some possible reasons and the ways people can be encouraged to walk more.

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Studies suggest that the rise in the consumption of junk foods is the major cause of obesity. Some people argue that this problem can be tackled to a great extent by increasing the prices of these food items. Do you agree or disagree.

Scientists proved that consuming junk food is the main cause of obesity. Society argues that this problem can be prevented by making theese food items more expensive. In my opinion i the key of reducing obesity, that is caused my junk food, is to increase junk food price, however, another important factor is reucing the accessibility to theese junk foods.

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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Capital punishment is always a warm topic in todays world. Some say that capital punishment is violating the human rights, while the others is insisted that capital punishment should be allowed for the serious crimes.

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As the country develops, does the benefit of car popularization to individuals outweigh the harm to the environment?

The proliferation of private vehicles in developing nations has sparked debates over whether individual benefits outweigh ecological costs. While automobiles undoubtedly enhance mobility and convenience, their environmental repercussions necessitate urgent mitigation measures.

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Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Although many individuals think that cheap airplane tickets are detrimental, others concur that making travel abroad more accessible has many upsides. I completely believe that making overseas travel easier is beneficial.

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some people believe that in order to reduce the rising obesity among children the school administration should make it necessary for every child to participate in sports and other outdoor activities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that do sports and physical activities should be an obligation in schools to reduce the obesity rates for children. While I believe there are some benefits and disadvantages on this issue, I agree with the statement.

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lacke of fresh water is becoming a global issue if increasing importance what measures could be taken to overcome these problems

So water is a main source and a living need for our life, It has to get a real place in our lifestyle. -Firstly we have to notice that-But now in this topic, we see that some kind people give no value to water.The lacke of fresh water is not a good way for our future.Moreover there are some countries,villages that cannot even afford for a cup of water this is called being ruthless or impolite.

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Some people think watching television is bad for children in every way other belive it is good for devolping children as they grow up discuss both views and give your own opinion

the children should have set time to watch the television. The question is, Some people believe watching television is not good for the children, however, the others believe is good for them. In my opinion, I believe the children should have spicific time in a day or a week to watch the movies or catoons. In this essay, we are going to discuss both views and give my opinio.

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Some people believe that what children watch on television influence behavior other say that amount of time they spend on television influence thie behavior

Some are think that what kids consume from TV it effect on their habits other accept that how much quantity of time they spend on TV influence thie conduct in my opinion, time vast on watching screen is more harmful for child

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Market approach as a part from the marketing strategy in recent years, by offering the fresh solution from the product that closest with the buyer needed. The advertising strategy that introduced the newest improvement can attract the customer interest, however this technique are have two side impacts if the management production are lack.

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Television dominates the free time for too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others Do you agree or disagree Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowdays, television is in everyone houses,i think we got used to watch tv every day since we were childrens. but in some people case it become an ediction , they spend almost all of there time in the couch whatching the tv , away from reality , making there social life nearly disappearing ,which i don't agree with.

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Some people believe that museums are mainly a source of entertainment, while others think they are primarily educational. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A museum is a place where people visit to gain education accompanied by entertainment. Museums contain a variety of articles , some are historic and others are antique. Different folks have different views regarding it, many think that it is only a source of amusement and it has no educational value. Bodies come and go; they see different items decorated in glass windows, and enjoy. But others say it has a role in providing intelligence regarding many unknown facts. Both views may be correct, but in my opinion, knowledge is a more obvious thing that we gain by visiting a museum.

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some people think students should learn more practical courses like computer but others think they should learn more about theoretical courses like geography and mathematics discuss both views and give your opinion.

The table gives information about how often Scottish adults of different ages did cultural activities. It shows the percentage of people who took part in different types of activities. Overall, the 16-24 age group did the most cultural activities, and doing performances was the most popular thing. Computer activities were the least popular for all ages.

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Successful people try new things and takes new risks rather than only doing what they know how do well. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that individuals who are accomplished try new things and take on new potential dangers rather than just doing what they are skilled. Personally, I completely disagree with this view for a variety of reasons.

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Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, choosing employees have more personal qualities than qualifications and experience has become a broad issue for the general public. Some people argue that focus on personal qualities is better. However, it seem to me that employers should priority qualifications and experience workers. The following essay will clarify light on these viewpoints. Employers should focus on qualities over qualifications ad experience when choosing someone for a job has been a heated topic in the contemporary society.

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You have recently moved to a different city . you did not have a chance to tell your friend about the move . + Explain why you decided to move + Compare your new home with your prevlous home + Tell him / her about the aera you are now living in

I hope you’re doing well. I wanted to let you know that I’ve just moved to Da Nang City. Sorry, I didn’t tell you sooner. Everything happened quickly because I got a great new job here.

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Some people think watching television is bad for children in every way other belive it is good for devolping children as they grow up discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is beleived that kids have to learn and enjoy their lifes. Some people prevent their children for doing activities that west their times , and others courage their kids to wach TV and play computer games. In my opinion, kids should spend their time in learning and developing their skills in good ways, because in this age the learn is very important to grow their personalities and the TV nowadays is full of bad programs .

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Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

Despite the trend of globalization, quite a few people are preferable for regional produce over international products. A couple of factors are atrribute to this circumstance and I bieve that it's positive for boosting municipal economy.

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Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster and cheaper means of public transport. Some others think that there are important factors to take in consideration like (fuel,cost and environment) Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Public transport plays a vital role in the daily lives of millions of people around the world. Wit rising urban populations and increasing transport congestion, the need for effective public transport has never been greater. However, some individuals argues that additional considerations, including energy use, financial burden and environmental effects, are equally significant. This essay will discuss both views and provide a reasoned opinion.

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