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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer. Do you think advantages of this development outweight its disadvantages

Nowadays, because of the medical development humanity can live longer than it used to be. Although, it could allow us to copy with serious diseases, it could lead to decrease mortality rates that lead to overpopulation.
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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern society, people are having numerous health issues and various are factors are responsible for that but imposing higher tax on fast food will not fetch any good outcome. I do not agree with the statement of imposing tax on fast food.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them with this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviors to children?

It is essential part for children to understand the worg and the righ behaviours from such young age,punishment could be use to help them realize their mistakes,their are a lot of tipes of punishments and not all of them would be helpful for children,In mi opinion,young people shoud understand the right and the wrong methods to do thing,also it is hard for them to learn how to behave when they get older,while The parents could sometimes handle the way their children behave stranger will get upset easily by them,How ever their a certain type of human love childrens,the education process needs to start from such a young age accroding to exprets,people with young age are more likely to learn compare with adults,while there are experts encouraging using punishments for bad behaves they are other devoting to handle the situation with other methods,for example like talking with the child or make them fix what the done wrong,If a child learn how to adjust their mistakse and fix them why sh...
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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a subject of discussion that few people believe that being rich provides an oppotunity to help other people. I certaintly agreed with the statement but not every rich person is doing so.
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Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In thsi modern world, money become one of the most valuable things. We can not bye anything without money so that we can notr live our livelihood. So, without money we can not pass our day.Everyday we need many kind of necessary in our home and our work place so wee need mopney to afford our necessity, without money we can not afford them. For this reason, money become one of the most valuable thing in the earth.So, spending money without any need is such a bad habit.Also, spending more money foe actual reason is alright. In our society some peoplr think that spend a lot of money on wedding parties or others celebrations is unnecessary but some some think that such events are valuable so we can invest on them.I think spend lot o0f money is not ok but we can make a event memorable that tim e we can spend little bit more. below i,m going to discuss both view.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and societies To what extent do you agree?

This topic mentioned a crucial issue in the modern society. I would try to explain for my view.
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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adult. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, there is an increasing problem with obesity around the world. The reason of this is the high calorie includings in the food. This issue can be solved by propagandizing the healthy lifestyle.
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You should spend about 40 mins. Write about the following topic: Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people thought of restricting mobile phones on public areas such as libraries, shops and public transport. Though the policy may be beneficial in some ways I disagree with banning of gadgets on common areas.
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Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era everything is growing too fast even our transportation growing on a rapid scale, when it comes to using funds for trains rather than new roads I am fully agreeing with the given statement because they are fast and produce very less pollution. The impending paragraph will enunciate my nation’s need to spend money on trains, not new roads.
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Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others say it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that these days a class of people think keep thier streets clean and on the other hand some people think that government for responsibility .
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Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory jo or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that this days the people think there is no need to try develop there situation . the question is did the stuation its not matter copmarison with get money ? In this essay, iam going to talk about some people who think that money its matter than there stuation . In terms of advantaged people can develop there situation although a multiple methods , First of all , the main reason given to support this claim is that Islam order us to trust in the god in everything , Also the people cant give up in the face of adversity . To illustrate , a many of people there was poor and they have to try to being better to get a lot of money and save their life for future and their can in the face of adversity . In other words , we infer can could any...
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Many people leave the countryside for the greater opportunities which are offered by cities. This move is not without disadvantages for both people and the environment. What are some benefits and drawbacks of urbanization?

Nowadays, folks who live in the rural area tend to leave their villages for better conditions that can be found only in the cities, who offers a number of various facilities. As a result to urbanization, pollution have increased in the cities, while in the rural areas less and less people are living there. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of urbanization.
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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

Universities provide a holistic growth for people. People opt to join to classes in a university for different reason such as new experiences, career prepatation and increased knowledge. But there are more than those reasons.
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the first impression you have of a person is the best way to judge a person. do you agree?

It is said that the best way for the judgment of a person is through the first impression you have of a person. I stongly disagree with this opinion, because of the changes of human moods.
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The tourist industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Over the last fifty years, the tourist industry has increased sharply and there are few places which are undefind by it, while tourism doesn't always benefits the countries which tourists visit. I completely disagree with this point of view because the tourist industry benefits the economy of the tourism countries and they help the citizens to contact with other cultures.
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Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth . However , some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues .

It is an argument whether innovative projects in society should be focused on economy and producing wealth or should consider environmental priorities. This essay will discuss both notions and also shed light on my perspective.
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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, some people believe that it is not compulsory for parents who sent their offspring to private schools to pay taxes for educational purposes. Considering all the advantages educational taxes bring to our life, I totally disagree with this statement.
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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The anthopogenic activities has been destroying global ecosystem services. There are varieties of statments in terms of a negotive effect to plants, farm fields, rivers and all alive species live in it. I personally believe that everything is possible, if a single individual mitigates the environment around them. In this essay I will discuss both sides from holistic point of view.
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Write about the following topic. In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the number of individuals especially newborns has alleviated. One of these reasons is in some countries, parents are putting their first baby at older ages. In this essay, I will elaborate on the reasons. I will also expound on what if it pros overshadow the cons.
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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage? What do you prefer?

Work is the backbone for human survival. Most people exchange time for money five days a week and 40 years of their lives. Some people do this by running their own company while others work for an employer. Although there are benefits to being employed, I prefer to run my own business because I can manage my own time and finance. Since I had my own company, I can decide when to work and when not to work. Either I have many customers, I can choose to work 12 hours a day or, in slow season, I may take a vacation for two weeks. For instance, my hotel was very busy last Saturday, with over 100 bookings, so I decided to work four hours overtime. This is one of two reasons I prefer self-employment. In my own business I set the budget. I can not only how much on rent, salary or equipment, but also where and when to spend it. For instance, since I spent 4 weekend days at work due to the busy season, I decided to treat my self with 1 week vacation to Thailand with budget of 1000 US dolla...
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