IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 27

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that visiting museums and art galleries is the best way to learn about art, while others believe that there are better ways of doing that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Museum and art galleries are the place where the persons effort and their best piece are placed for presenting for others to see.It helps to see physically the art and to know its depth meaning in person for instance mona lisa which was a master piece created by leonardo da vinci kept securly at france.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.

punishment help children to learn, what is good and right? There are many people belive that punishment is very crucial for children to learn right and wrong at an early age. Others argue that it is not a solution. I totally disagree with this agreement.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days because of global warming become one of the most threats to our society. Global warming is increasing earth temperatures due to air pollution and cause to climate change.in this essay I will write about main reasons of global warming and then I discuss about solutions about this issue.

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Are electric cars better for the environment than fuel-powered cars? Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that electric cars are more beneficial than fossil-fule driven cars for the environment. I personally believe that despite emitting lithium and other harmful chemicals, electric cars are better than fossil-fuel-powered cars.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The high level of sugar problem is being followed from our ancestor's time. However, today's generation is most likely having sugar problems because of the highly fast food consumption. I disagree with the statement that ugar is necessary ingredient in our daily life consumption, making sugar expensive is not the solution. In addition, government the can take action against the company, which produce highly sugary drinks or meals.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your option.

It is argued that in the technological era, people have had fewer communications with friends and family due to Television. I strongly agree with this arguement because watching TV makes reviewers become addicted and lazy.

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In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this?

One of today's most controversial issues relates to the lack of youngsters' spare time. The importance of rest is well-known to everyone. However, nowadays society often tends to anticipate high results and hard work from students, stressing them out.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign

Frist of all, there is no doubt that living or working in a foreign country is one of all of young people’s dreams , to sure up this point, you can easy notice their behaviors, education, and the respecting to whom working abroad or educated there. But do working or living abroad really deserve?. There are two faces for foreign country.

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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.

In the present time, our environment has been alarmingly polluted. It is common believed that people should take action to prevent the environment from being damaged for the next generation. I firmly agree with this statemen because our daily activities cause environmental contamination and we should tackle the problems immediately.

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Some peoplebelieve that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and tho highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

there is no denying the fact that employee should be paid for their job, while it is a commonly held belief that should decrease the gap in payment for workforce, there is also an argument opposes it.

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The information about politicians' family members should not be distributed in newspapers. This essay agrees with this argument because it creates safety threats to politicians' family members and influences the confidentiality of personal life.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People can be split in two gropus. Some tend to have a job in the same place all their life, others prefer to change often.

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With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer.

The technologies rise up in a decades where now a people is familiar about the online dating. The media such as Tinder, Hinge dating, Bumble and so many to used for the dating purpose. Let's discuss the demerit and merits.

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All children should study a foreign language in school starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studying a foreign language generally is considered to be one of the most mind-lightining practices that an individual may experience. In the modern world, being familiar with a foreign language opens the doors for better social, professional, and personal lives.

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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

Many people leave their on homes to work abroad and some of them takes their families with them. Do you think the benefits of it outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development? In this essay i will discuss the both point of view and compare them.

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Write an essay on the following topic. 4 two different future forms 5 two more linking expressions In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days people go to mall for shopping but in the future, it may shopping mall target is going to be for hobby and leisure and be very similar to downtown. Although some people believe that this is not going to be happen more and more in the future. Buy from my point of view it is going to be happen in the future.

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Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

No doubt, we need holidays in our lives, we are not aware of why, or we cannot define reasons, but we just respond to our bodies' needs.

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some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

celebrations make lots of valuable memories for future despite of that it can cost high prices which hard for effort due to some people discuss about spending excessively is just a waste of money.however , other society think it is necessary for the society.I believe that sort of tho seevents memorable circumstances.

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Some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings it or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

celebrations are make lots of valuable memories for the people despite of that it can cost high prices which hard for efforting due to some people discuss about spending excessively is just waste of money.however,rest of the people think it is necessary for the society.I believe that sort of this celebrations memorable circumstances.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

At present,the pressure on youth rapidly increasing to successful in academic life. Because, some people argue that elective subjects like physical education and cookery, should not be included in the school syllabus so children are able to focus on academic subjects.This essay agrees with this statement because pupils have sufficient time to work on academic subjects and their motivation for studies will be increased.

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