IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 36

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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IT IS IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE TO TAKE RISKS, IN BOTH THEIR PROFESSIONAL LIVES AND PERSONAL LIVES. DO THE ADVANTAGE Of TAKING RISKS OUTWEIGH WHE DISADVANTAGES?

Taking possibility is often viewed as a catalyst for growth, but it also carries potential drawbacks. While danger can lead to significant rewards in both professional and personal spheres, their benefits generally outweigh the disadvantages when approached thoughtfully.One major advantage of risk-taking is the opportunity for substantial progress. In professional life, individuals who embrace risks, such as starting a business or pursuing innovative projects, often achieve breakthroughs that lead to career advancement or financial success. For instance, entrepreneurs like Elon Musk took significant exposure to establish companies like Tesla, reaping rewards that reshaped industries. Similarly, in personal life, risks such as relocating to a new country or pursuing a new relationship can foster personal growth, resilience, and broader perspectives. These experiences often lead to self-discovery and fulfillment that outweigh initial uncertainties.However, peril are not without downsi...

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User Doctors in many countries say that people do not do enough physical exercises. What are the causes of this trend? How can the situation be improved?

User Doctors in alot of countries say that people do not do enough physical exercises. In this page I will talk about causes of this trend.

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some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others believe it does not help shoppers much. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the modern era, the topic of shopping has undeniably become a critical issue for the general public. While a few people acknowledge nowadays going shopping become easier and easier thanks to modern technology, while others disagree this problem, and claiming that it is useless. This essay will provide a thorough examination of these contrasting perspectives.

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The crime rate nawadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that developing technology leads to a significant decline in the crime rate. In other words, it has been thoutgh that technology can perevent and solve cime issue. I completely disagree with this view and I do believe just type of crime is going to chang.

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Today's essay topic: People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Nowadys, individuals consume drogs especially in young ages in all around the world in different modern sociaty. Researches have been showing that mothers, fathers, and all the people around them has the worst impact on youth to use drogs. I will discuss about causes, effects, and i will bring recommendation to it.

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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a noticeable increase in tourism having more negative effects than a positive one on local people and their surroundings. While, some argue that travel related industries greatly stimulate local economies. This essay will explore the advantages and potential drawbacks of tourism.

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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Is this a positive or negative development?

All children has taken a mammoth dimension to be the backbone of foreign language upon research , this issue is a highly debatable one with contrasting views . In this essay both sides will be examined before giving my final opinion .

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The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as poor people become poorer and rich people become richer. What problems could this situations casue??what are the solutions to address those problems??

In many countries the difference between two wealthy and poor groups of people is growing rapidly. This curcimestance can lead to an increase crime rate and unfiar access to county facilities. The governmnet should take measures such as donating the subcids to these people to tackle this issues.

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Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some students from high school doing their part-time job as an addition activity after finish their school schedule. Part-time job will make students to be a hard worker person but also declining their academic result at school. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this views.

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Smart phones are being used in classrooms more than ever before. Some people think that this aids the learning process, while other think it hinders it. Discuss both these views and give your Own Opinion.

Nowadays, smartphones have become deeply woven into society and many classrooms have used them as a source of education. However, many people oppose this, believing it stops the learning process. In my opinion, I completely think that it improves the learning pathway. This essay will discuss the following topic and give reasons as follows.

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Some people think that traditional culture can be destroyed as money-making attractions to tourists. However, others believe that it is the only way to save traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that ancient rituals can be harmed as a money-making atraction to tourists, while others contend that this is the only way to preserve traditions. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and why I favour the former.

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, more people are becoming vegetarians. While some often find difficulties in being consistent with this diet due to limited options when travelling, this essay agrees that becoming one offers more advantages as such a lifestyle promotes healthy ingredients.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

a group of people are having more intake of sugar drinks.it is harmfull for everyperson who have to intake this.while this essay will look two main causes of this issue and suggest two possible solutions.

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Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport.However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of the bicycle among wider population?

Most of the people agreed that cycling is more healther and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries. In this page we will see the reasons, and what could be done to encourage the use of the bicycle among wider population.

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Some people believe that in order to give oppertunities new generations, company should encourge high level empioyees who are older than 55 to retire do you agree or disagree?

In this essay We will raise the topic of employment. Some people claim to encourage the unemployed employees should be retired.

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Most people are so selfish that not to attend social entertainment like a national festival. Still, they spend time on entertainment. Give reasons for the above issues and how to solve them.

In today`s modern era, people are not give their presence in social and national festival, while they still have time to spend on the movies and entertainment. This is because they do not care about nation and other people and in some cases they have own business to handle. The ministry can slove this issue by declare holiday and make all people aware about national duties.

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Many students today leave their country to go abroad and study in another country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

Have you ever thought why several students leaves their country to study? Studying in a different country may have a great vital impact in contrast there are disadvantages that the student and their country go through , in this essay I"ll discuss about that advantages , and disadvantage of this issue.

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Teenagers are spending an increasing amount of time on the internet, and this is having a negative effect on their social skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays teenagers spends all their time on the internet and this is might have ` negative effect on their social skills. in my prespective i agree because internet can makes teenagers addicted and spend all their time in their room using their phones and never get out of it .

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Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some says that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some community believe that free education should be provided by the authority at each level of the educational system. Although, other folk say that it should be paid by someone who wants to continue their studies. I will argue both sides and make my point of view.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Individuals think children should learn overseas languages at primary school. It is more effective than at secondary school. I would argue that there are many benefits and drawbacks about it.

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