IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kine of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.

There is no denying the fact that junk food is serious leading cause of the majority of health problems. Some argue that states must charge fees on the fast food restaurants. I do agree totally with this statement, due to the financial anf psychological affects and the health diseases that association with obesity.

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some individuals suggests that we should rebuild the old buildings and homes in cities with more urban buildings and others disagree. I think that we should change the old structrues into new ones. However, if the buildings were in the rural areas I believe that we should protect them and keep them as a historical building.

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing.

I agree it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. The following content is why I agree with this viewpoint.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisagtion. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge orexperience.

In modern days, an increasing number of people are choosing to work for themselves, rather than to work for an organization. This trend is taking place due to the lack of payment and the freedom of individuals' business choices. However, the negative sides are that their earnings are not regular and fluctuate according to the month.

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In many countries, a small number of people have extremely high annual incomes. These people should be required to pay a much higher rate of income tax. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that citizens should contribute to their nation's welfare by paying the annuity fees, but some argue that the amount they pay is determined by the person's financial state, so high income leads to higher tax. While others do not agree, and see that it must be in the same percentage tax for all humans, in my opinion, i do not agree with this statement at all.

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discussion both views and give your opinion.

Old man and his girlfriend is the one that said that the one was the one who was in a relationship with the people that I don't want you in my car or to get a new one or a few years ago I have a few friends to go with you guys for the next two days and the last two weeks of my job I just want you.

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Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money – making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

there are many people how believ that if the cultural traditions used as a money maker it will be destroyed. other see its a very good way to save those traditions to not despair. in this essay I will enterduos the both opinions is i will geve my opinion .

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differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same film, fashion and tv channels. To what extend do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In recent years, the diversity amonge nations has been decreased significantly, due to the globalnisation. A wide range of governments in defferent societies encourage it's sectors to imitate others countries. This resultes in increase the samelareties between communities in every part in the world. This essay will examine why copy from others is a good way to achieve success.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

I believe that the main problem humans face is the rise in the world’s population due to the decrease in death rates and an increase in birth rates.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the country side is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

there are many pepole in deferent countries moves to live in the cities. that because many things which let the people go to live in the citys . Such as better job opportunities and more standards of living . i will talk about the advantages and the disadvantages also i will geva me personal opinion .

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Some people think that children should not watch television as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Watching TV , some people support this idea strongly . Other society are against it totally . Both points of view will be discussed . I have my own point of view dealing with the topic .

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Due to rapid development of technology children these days are living in a world that is completely different to what it was few decades back what problems can this cause for society and family?

In today`s digital world, the technology has devloped significantly, so children living in a different world than a past decades. Childrens nowadays playing games and stying in home with screen and they do not know about physical games, this can create problems such as eyesight because they use screen too much. This new trend can affect scoiety negatively, as they cannot make good friends, or they may lose bonds with childhood friends.

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Some people believe that companies should be allowed to collect data about customers freely, while others believe this practice should be restricted. Discuss both sides of this issue.

Some details of people are suggested to be saved in the databases of online companies. To some extent, this could have negative consequences, but in general, this is for the better. This essay will explore some details of the advantages and disadvantages of this view.

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Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Recently, some people think that general transportation should be funded by the government. They should allocate a portion of their money for the free transport , so it can be free for the people . However, I personally agree with that opinion , since it should be one of the citizens' privileges, also it can help solve the environmental pollution issues.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The issue of studying nature in school has sparked considerable controversy in recent years . I strongly disagree with the viewpoint , as I believe that the nature its a part of our life that doesnot need to study or to teach , and this essay will elaborate on that .

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Some people like to go to a live sporting event, while others prefer to stay at home and watch it on television. Which do you prefer? Discuss both views using personal examples.

One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is many people like to going to see match event and another people don't see the go to sport event good they like need watching event in TV on home.

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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems in beneficial cities nation from rural areas. What problems can this cause ?how might these problem is solved?

There is no denying the fact that the most countries in the globe are inetersted more in rich and valuable cities than poor cities for their economies and etc. This essay will discuss about the government that paid a lot of money in the biggest community and about the poor cities.

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Some people believe that children should be given homework every day, while others think that it is not necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that children should be given homework every day, but others think it is not very important and that children should have more free time. I personally agree with the second view because children should have more freedom, and homework should be assigned at the end of the week, not every day.

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Today in many countries, people are leaving the rural areas and moving to the urban areas. Give the reasons to explain why they are doing this and give the problems that this might cause.

Nowadays a lots of changes happened so it took the world into different levels.Ther is many people are moving from the small villages to the big city for many reasons.Such as, that usual is able to cause many problems in different ways.This essay will examine that reason and the problems that able to happend.

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Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem, and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, traffic congestion is becoming an increasingly serious issue in many big cities around the world. Several factors contribute to this growing problem, but there are also some effective strategies that can help decrease it. This essay will be dedicated to these both aspects.

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