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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Why is this so? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the recent time, it has been observed that individualism is increasing in many communities around the globe. People are choosing their personal goals over the benefits of the society. There are a few reasons behind this development, which are causing some negative impacts in our world. Both of these aspects are further elaborated in the essay.
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums and educational centre play an indispensable part in everyday life. Despite the fact that charging for entry may have some positive impact on the economic status, it on balanced achieved the negative outcome in deteriorating the academic performance in educational department.
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Many city centers these days have traffic flow problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build fast ring roads on the outskirts of a city, taking traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Many downtowns have traffic jams now due to congestion and pollution. One solution is to construct fast ring roads on the edge of a city, diverting traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new issues. This essay agrees with this statement. Ring roads are built far from the city by the government, so that they eliminate the congestion forever, develop the economy and ecology, a security, and infrastructure.
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Many people think that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this view? ( TL )

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone think that living in the city is more beneficial than staying in the small villages. In my opinion, cities may provide more opportunities for people who are highly qualified, while living in countryside can give better health and more option for farming.
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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional and their personal lives. Do you think the advantage of taking risks are outweight the disadvantages?

It is important for people to take the chance, either in their working lives, or their private lives. As my point of view the advantages of outweigh the disadvantages and it worths to to do a risk for what you want to achieve .
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Some schools are very strict about school uniforms and student appearance, while others have a more relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of students wearing school uniforms?

Many educational places have strict rules about uniforms, others prefer more relaxed fits. In the text below, I will explore these opposite points of view. In my opinion, a special dress code is unnecessary in schools or universities for reasons which I will outline in he following essay.
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Some museum and art galeries charge admission fees while other have free entry. Do you think the advantages of admission fees outweigh the disadvantages.

Atr galeries and museum are the show history of the country, some are chargeble and some are free entry, in my view it has to be free for everyone. In this eassy we see about advantages and disadvantages both side.
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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

The tipe is difference frome cuntiry to others because of that some of them prefer to teach the students what he will need at university, however there is a systems depends on providing students a lot of informiation.
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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world developed rapidly through the telecommunication and air travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that in the last century, technology has revolutionised the way people communicate and travel around the world. This essay will dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before . Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Others believe there are benefits is society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantage of having old aged people outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, some people believe that over population of old people could make several issues for government, while other people argue that those eldery citizen could also be advantage for society. In this essay I will examine both views and provide the reason why I think this is a negative trend for our society.
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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read entertainment books because they think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why?

The question of whether parents should allow their children to read entertainment books along with academic books is very debated nowadays and has divided public opinion. This essay will try to shed light on my disagreement to the question.
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Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion,others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone believe that the government should invest more fund on transportation to reduce traffic on roads, while some people think that expanding road to wider may help to overcome problem of congestion. In my opinion, it depends on the city and the area of the downtown, some cities have enough space for broader lanes and few cities have limited space, due to underground railaway can be the best option.
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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school ti. me. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question whether school syllabus should include news of the world or not, is a very debating one nowadays and has divided the public opinion. In this essay we shall try to spot the light at both sides of the opinion and will try our conclusion.
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Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Trees are one of the most essential elements for a human being's survival. As people are evolving, trees are being cut down by a massive rate to make them use for various purposes like housing, furniture and etc. This becomes a major issue in the cities where environment is effected due to imbalance of ecological structure. This makes people beleive that planting more trees are important than the provinding house in the developed towns. I agree with the statement that societies need to grow more plants to have less polluted air and water sources.
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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The happest period of the life is the teenage years or the adult years is always a topic.Some people believe that they felt much happier in their chidhoods but the other people do not agree with that.I will discuss both views and give my own opinions.
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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Lifestyle pattern changes over course of time and it changes from generation to generation. Our earlier generations, their living patterns were completely differently than ours. And probably the generations afterwards would follow some other way of living completely different from ours.
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In some countries, the use of renewable energy sources is being encouraged. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Energy, it's what that runs the world comes from various sources. But we can divided the sources into two large sector, the renewable sources and the non renewable sources. Nowadays many countries promote using renewable sources. This essay will try to depict about the positives of using renewable sources with some relevant example.
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Some people think history has little to teach us, but others think that studying the past can help us better understand the present and predict the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some are believe that past not teach us more much however some other think that study ancient times can be helpful in nowadays and upcoming time according to my opinion learning previous era may be helpful for better for coming soon time
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Admission fee for enetring museums is definietly has its advantages for the museum andfor the individual experience,there is no doubt that the this claim is true but ont the other hand there is many people who argue that it should be free espacily that the point of the museums is entirely cultural education,this essay will discuss both views and provide a conclusion.
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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, A lot of people have been establishing an perfect society but it always does not success. I belive that diffrenence between people is very important, so we shoud not to be ideal at every thing.
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