IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Overfishing of the world's oceans threatens many species with extinction and is putting the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening ?

Overfishing of the world's seas endangers many types with extermination and is putting the living of millions of people around the world at risk. Nowadays, a theme "Overfishing" is being a problem in the world due to fishing in illegal and uncontroled areas by government. This essay will discuss the main problems caused by this issue and suggest possible solutions.

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Professional sports people are often idolised by young children. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?

Some famous sports personalities are widely recongnised by almost every nation in the world. Some people believe that these stars have a responsibility to become a good role model, as young kids are highly inspired from them. I agree with the statement that these sportsmen have a great influence in the society and they have that ability to spread the good message among the children.

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Some people believe that animal testing should be completely banned, while others argue that it is necessary for scientific and medical progress. Write an essay discussing both views and giving your opinion.

In recent years, with the development of technology, scientific experiments have increased rapidly worldwide. However, this raises ethical concern due to animal testing. Therefore, the topic of animal testing has led to widespread discussions. People are mainly divided into groups, one of which supports the view that animal testing is logical, as it provides significant medical advancements. While the other opposes it. I believe that the former is more logical, since minor health issues may prevent major health issues.

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Band 8+: In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Over the past few decades, the attitude of the pupils towards teachers and the management has changed dramatically in negative way. This change has many causes inculding school managing factors, However there are also some solutions regarding this.

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Some people believe that technology has made our lives more complicated, while others think it has made life easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many People believe that our technology has made our lives more complicated for them, while others think it has made life easier because technology can help them from anyway First, lest talk about people who believe technology can help them and made them life easier. In 2025, we see how technology develop more faster than before, specifically AI, everything seems faster. In a glance AI have new feature, we can talk to AI, we can discuss, we can story tell and ask for advice. Everyone feels help, a student, a CEO, a worker, a teacher, or even a mom feels help with AI in their lives.

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Some parents think that helping their children with homework is good. Others think that children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion

WHILE PEOPLE ASSUME DOING THE CHILDERN HOME WORK IS SUPPORITIVE, OTHERS BELIEVE THAT THEY NEED TO COMPLETE THE WORK BY THEIR OWN. I SIDE WITH LATERAL VIEW.

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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Why is this so? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the recent time, it has been observed that individualism is increasing in many communities around the globe. People are choosing their personal goals over the benefits of the society. There are a few reasons behind this development, which are causing some negative impacts in our world. Both of these aspects are further elaborated in the essay.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums and educational centre play an indispensable part in everyday life. Despite the fact that charging for entry may have some positive impact on the economic status, it on balanced achieved the negative outcome in deteriorating the academic performance in educational department.

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Many city centers these days have traffic flow problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build fast ring roads on the outskirts of a city, taking traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Many downtowns have traffic jams now due to congestion and pollution. One solution is to construct fast ring roads on the edge of a city, diverting traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new issues. This essay agrees with this statement. Ring roads are built far from the city by the government, so that they eliminate the congestion forever, develop the economy and ecology, a security, and infrastructure.

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Many people think that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this view? ( TL )

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone think that living in the city is more beneficial than staying in the small villages. In my opinion, cities may provide more opportunities for people who are highly qualified, while living in countryside can give better health and more option for farming.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional and their personal lives. Do you think the advantage of taking risks are outweight the disadvantages?

It is important for people to take the chance, either in their working lives, or their private lives. As my point of view the advantages of outweigh the disadvantages and it worths to to do a risk for what you want to achieve .

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Some schools are very strict about school uniforms and student appearance, while others have a more relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of students wearing school uniforms?

Many educational places have strict rules about uniforms, others prefer more relaxed fits. In the text below, I will explore these opposite points of view. In my opinion, a special dress code is unnecessary in schools or universities for reasons which I will outline in he following essay.

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Some museum and art galeries charge admission fees while other have free entry. Do you think the advantages of admission fees outweigh the disadvantages.

Atr galeries and museum are the show history of the country, some are chargeble and some are free entry, in my view it has to be free for everyone. In this eassy we see about advantages and disadvantages both side.

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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

The tipe is difference frome cuntiry to others because of that some of them prefer to teach the students what he will need at university, however there is a systems depends on providing students a lot of informiation.

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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world developed rapidly through the telecommunication and air travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that in the last century, technology has revolutionised the way people communicate and travel around the world. This essay will dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before . Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Others believe there are benefits is society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantage of having old aged people outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, some people believe that over population of old people could make several issues for government, while other people argue that those eldery citizen could also be advantage for society. In this essay I will examine both views and provide the reason why I think this is a negative trend for our society.

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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read entertainment books because they think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why?

The question of whether parents should allow their children to read entertainment books along with academic books is very debated nowadays and has divided public opinion. This essay will try to shed light on my disagreement to the question.

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Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion,others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone believe that the government should invest more fund on transportation to reduce traffic on roads, while some people think that expanding road to wider may help to overcome problem of congestion. In my opinion, it depends on the city and the area of the downtown, some cities have enough space for broader lanes and few cities have limited space, due to underground railaway can be the best option.

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school ti. me. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question whether school syllabus should include news of the world or not, is a very debating one nowadays and has divided the public opinion. In this essay we shall try to spot the light at both sides of the opinion and will try our conclusion.

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Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Trees are one of the most essential elements for a human being's survival. As people are evolving, trees are being cut down by a massive rate to make them use for various purposes like housing, furniture and etc. This becomes a major issue in the cities where environment is effected due to imbalance of ecological structure. This makes people beleive that planting more trees are important than the provinding house in the developed towns. I agree with the statement that societies need to grow more plants to have less polluted air and water sources.

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