IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 33

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the reasons for this? How serious are the effects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Underage obesity is becoming more and more of a urgent phenomenon in many nations, which is causing detrimental effects. This essay will examine the cause related to this tendency.

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there are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?. Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

The given asking about music what does human need from music. It also asks about what’s is more important the traditional music for the countries or the normal music that you hear for fun.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modren area, health menistries are showing increasing interest in the field of research and develpmenet of health care. Focusing on discovering effective medicines to treat lifelong diseases. As a result, the life expectency of people has grown throught the years. As fewer people are dying from untreated chronic conditions that previosuly had no proven medication efficacy and more importantly, had a poor saftery profile.

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Nowadays, technology is being widely spread. In the following years, technology will totally replace the teacher role in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the recent years, there is a hot debate on whether technology will substitute the role of teacher in the classroom as the technology is being more advanced. I disagree with this statement as teacher can provide emotional support to the students and handle the emergencies situation which teachnology cannot.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this discussion To What extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

From an early age, it is crucial for children to know the difference between right and wrong, and giving punishment would be the best way to help them learnt about this distinction. I largerly agree with this statement by inculcating discipline and to handle the tantrums of the children will prove this statement.

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Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop their future, while others think that it is a dangerous invention that will impact society negatively. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is clear to say that; by the development of technology, human being had began to use robots as a daily helper for itself. But as many people think that, this automatic machines can help us to build our future while others figure out robots as a destructive invention. They believe this technology has side effects on population. In this essay I will argue different points.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student'sperformance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree ?

Formal tests are only the suitable and superb method to compare and assess the students. Thus, the students study in the period of exams only . It is disagreed that the exam is only the criteria to rate the students, due to the quiet and the performance of students are given the teacher the perseverance of student throughout the period time of learning. Even , the results in the exams rely on the performance of students are.

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transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. what are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

As we can say that the time is the one of the most important issues in human living; being late to somewhere is acceptable because of not scheduled delays and long duration of voyages in a lot of cities today. Here we can talk about the choices of people that live in an urban. Of course to we can talk about lots of factors that acts as a delation. Especially in crowded , big cities people prefer to use public transportation to get somewhere at the any time of day. So because of the demand of people, the responsibility of capable will be low.

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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

There is no denying the fact that smoking holds many risks for smokers and their families. While it is a commonly held belief that smoking should be banned in the vibrant areas, there is also an argument that opposes it. In this essay, I will explain the drawbacks and mention some examples of this trend, followed by my own opinion.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. People have different views about the funding of creati

There is no denying the fact that artists is playing a crucial role for goverments. While it is a commonly held belief that they should spend money on artists such as musicians and painters, there is also an argument that they need to fund another sources. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people think that success in life is measured by the amount of money a person has. Do you agree or disagree?

A good way to assume if someone won in life is by the sum of cash they have in their name . If we only consider the material gain , and not take in count that that person may have other goals in life - it’s easy to determine if they fulfilled their goal.

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Some people think that urban spaces should be used for parks rather than for housing. Discus both sides and give your opinion

Today we live in fast changing world and major part of people live in the cities. But there is a problem about urban spaces - it doens't enough for everything - people should decide is it for living or business or is it for parks and other entertainment. This essay will discuss the arguments to both sides of the question, with my personal viewpoint on the problem presented at the end.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some say that if you pick a career path earlier in life, you will have a better chance at feeling a sense of satisfication in your working life. Conversely, changing jobs at a frequent rate, can potentially leave you feeling un able to settle down. I completely agree with the that statement, as believe that doing the former helps an individual lead a strctured life with clearity, as well as have enough time to plan ahead.

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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The natural resources like gas, oil and coal are prioritized in many nations but on the other side, the other forms of artificial energy like wind and solar are used by most of regions. In my opinion, it is positive encouragement towards the country as it will help in saving the natural resources for the tougher time and also community will get rid of pollution and saves money on the same time. These points will be discussed by me in the following paragraphs with examples.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activites. Does this situation have more advantage or more disadvantages?

Some people argue that working for a long time and having less time for leisure is beneficial, where others denied that. Although both sides have positive and negative aspects and this essay will disscuse the both.

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In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Write the advantages and disadvanatages in your esasay.

Nowadays, according to the laws that were introduced in many countries, public transport has become free of charge.

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In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, according to the laws that were introduced in many countries, public transport become free of charge.

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Nowadays, everyone wants to have a TV, a car, and a refrigerator. Do the disadvantages to society outweigh the advantages?

In recent years, the issue of the convenience and disadvantages of automation in society has emerged as a matter of significant concern to the general public. While some individuals maintain that mechanics has many choices for society, I contend that. In addition, mechanics bring to people's enthusiasm. This essay aims to provide a comprehensive analysis of the differing viewpoints.

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Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should therefore be stopped. Do what extend do you agree with this?

Nowadays, welcoming outsiders to fullfill the demand of labourforce , which local workes are unwilling to do, can cause cultural and social dispute in the community. Therefore , the foreign workers, however, should be banned. I strongly disagree with this point due to merits that immigrant workers contribute towards on country GDP and baised selection of the employee in the work place.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agree with this sentiment, the development now reach what we haven't though about it before. The science is key to reach and have everything. Although with the development of it all the world try as much they can to be more successful than others.

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