IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 29

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The consumption of vegetables and fruits are gradually increased in some parts of the worlds. That is, individuals are looking for more healthy diet. I believe that, this way(trend) is more beneficial for humanity and wildlife which (that) outweigh the its drawback.

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In your opinion how can government of each country eradicate or lessen the crimes committed by their own people use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

To effectively reduce or eradicate crime, governments must adopt a multifaceted approach that addresses the root causes of criminal behavior, strengthens law enforcement, and fosters community engagement.

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Some people think that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss bothh these views and give your own opinion

Today, it seems that people are often judged by their social status and material possessions, rather than by traditional values like honor, kindness, and trust. This shows a growing focus on wealth and outward success, but it is important to consider whether this is a fair way to measure a person’s worth?

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should people set personal goals, giving reasons for your views.

Is it really beneficial to set goals?

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The best way / the only way to reduce poverty(INDIVIDUALS / GOVERNMENT) in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, people have argued that the best method to decrease poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education in order that they can at least read, write and use numbers. From my point of view, I consider myself as an advocate of this idea.

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Open plan offices offer a better working environment for staff than a normal office. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that open plan offices are more advantageous than normal offices. In my opinion, normal offices have many more advantages than open plan.

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Some people believe that it is beneficial to play sport in a team rather than playing an individual team. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals acknowledge that team play has more significance than personal one. Although people who busy with the sports that are carried out by one person have an opportunity to take greetings for themselves, friendship and cooperation make group sports superior.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In today's world, we are approching with an advancement of scientific kowledge to improvise the people's lifes. It's a harsh truth that the aim of science is to offer a better lives to all human beings. This is a heated argument nowdays among lot of peoples, some are favour with statement whereas some reject this notion. However, I agreed with the aformentioned statement. This essay will further emphasie on my perspective with suitable examples and leads to possible conclusion.

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Q: Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, most companies' technology orders personal data for access to software. Some people argue against this trend. While others say it has demerits. In this essay, I will explore some foremost pros and cons.

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The bar chart details the amount of waste that was disposed via landfill, burning and dumping at sea, in a particular European country between 2005 and 2008.

The given bar chart shows the data about the average amount of disposed waste disposed of by three different methods in one European nation from 2005 to 2008.

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Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Research has presented that the people and transfer products are the major polution source, someone thinks that government should be in responce for this, while others say that it is the fault of workers. The government can not control all processes, however I think that all processes is on workers then their are to blame.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others beleve this may have negative effects on a child's development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

An argument has araisen on whether watching televison, video and computer games have a positive impact on children lives', or are they inducing a sense of harmfulness in their development. In this essay, I will discuss both the merits and demerits of this situation and conclude with my own perspective.

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young people who commit crime should be treated as adult who commit crime ? to xetent do you agree or disagree?

Juvenile offenders should not be treated as adult criminals. I disagree with the statement because of the following reasons. Youngsters are not mature as their counterparts, peer-pressure is high among them, and transformation of behaviours in teen is easy.

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Social media is popular and used by many people. However, some people think that social media can be bad for mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The social networks is known and loved by many people. The social networks have positive effect to lives of same people and some people have negative effect on lives. In my opinion everybody uses social networks differently.

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People doing dangerous sports like bungee jumping, scuba-diving should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives for these people. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe rescue workers should not save people who do dangerous sports. They should be responsible for thier own life. I disagree to this because the job of the rescue workers is to rescue people who do dangerous sports.

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Some people think that children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while others believe that adults should prevent them from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As I have mentioned previously, in Colombia there are many courses or training which are related to ‘Public Health’. Nevertheless, there are no programs with a similar well-structured curriculum without offering core subjects with specializations to learn specific skills. It should be emphasized that the ‘Graduate Diploma Public Health’ is balanced among social and behavioral factors, economic health characteristics, epidemiology, and health promotion.

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Many students choose to complete at least some part of their university studies in a foreign country. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad

My interest in studying the ‘Graduate Diploma of Public Health’ at Torrens University comes from different reasons. First of all, Public Health is crucial field to manage and control healthcare systems as well as introduce health promotion and disease prevention policies. Secondly, it is required to dive deeper into healthcare research implementing public health techniques to implement precise methodologies and accurate results.

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The char below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The bar graph illustrates the change in average family spending for a week with per cent of their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

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Today,people are using the things and rhrowing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion . Do the disadvantages pf throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage ?

now days people are using the stuff and converted it with brand new models

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Sports play a significant role in promoting physical and mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Sports play a crucial role in boosting not only physical and mental health but overall wellbeing of an individual and has created unprecedented benefits. I completely agree with the statement as sports help in enhancing muscles of the body, improving focus, and ameliorating mental health conditions like depression and anxiety.

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