IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 343

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

Cosmetics industry has gained a huge rise in the market and it has become a profitable business in the world today. These days, beauty standards for people have changed and fair and white skin complexion has gained importance. In this essay, several reasons behind the rise in the market of these products and their affects will be discussed.

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Environmental damage is the problem of mosy countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?

The environment of deterioration is the ruselt from many nations. This essay will discuss the reasons such as plastic stuff or fossil fuel bring harm to the environment and every person should take responsibility to minimise adverse effects.

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In many countries, children are not exercising as much as before and are becoming more and more overweight. What is your opinion of this situation?

Obesity has become one of the common health issues among children as in today's world children have more sedentary lifestyle. I completely agree with the statement and in this essay i will dicuss about several reasons behind it.

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Many countries have compaulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possible for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In other countries, joining the military service is advantageous especially for the young men after they finish school. Some people suggest that worldwide should support this system for both genders. In this essay, I would agree with this point of view and suggest that surely men and women should participate in the public services as an alternative.

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Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performance on the screen and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, due to the development of technology, we can enjoy most entertainment activities through the screen and no need to go outside as we did in the past. However, there are certain aspects that watching online can not bring to the audience, therefore, I claim that I partly agree with this statement.

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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think that this a positive or negative developmen?

The role of language in this present world is inescapable. Many scientists are predicting that individuals will choose the same type of language for communication in the future. I agree with the given statement.

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Some people think that children should start school at the age of six or seven while others think that children should start school as young as possible. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The competition globally is high so parents thought their children starts their carrier as far as possible.yes,it's true but i am against this statement because without knowledge about learning we cannot allow them to learn the children force them to go to the school

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that, regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of the parents because they exactly know the capability of their children. Also, parents understood if their kids can do a certain sports or not.

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Governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on arts such as Music and Painting. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

Most people claim that, the money of the government has to be spent on services, that are in used by their society than on entertainment, such as music, painting and to be exactly, industry of ART. With what other parts of communities disagree. To take into account the fact that both sides of spending can lead to important developments in the country, I support ideas.

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A “cashless society” is one where people use debit/credit cards and other forms of payment. Do the advantages of a cashless society outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary era,technology increasingly popular and delovep to masses daily life.Also people trend to use more convenient way to check out any transaction in their usual. Hence,cashless become a trend in nowadays.Some argue that cashless society will cause a larger number problems ,other debates that have the benefits over drawbacks. In my opinion,I totally agree the latter statement and I will explain.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

The phenomenon of people who can do their dream jobs are better than those who cannot has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I totally agree that there are more benefits for the people who can enjoy his job.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared. Freely discuss both views, give your opinion.

n this day and age, it is widely recognized that majority of citizens believe that sharing valuable data such as scientific things, educational and business-oriented information to the community are good. However, certain section of individuals think that some kind of valuable information is too significant to freely share to others. In this essay, I will discuss both views and eventually I will give my opinion about this statement. To commence with, majority of organizations are not sharing their data to community because of privacy and security regarding to that vital information. According to the recent survey by Tehran University on scientific research, they found that numerous lawmakers are not fascinating to share their research things with people. For instance, Iran government always hides information about their integral things such as nuclear weapons and medical things from other counterpart world. Moreover, it is a dominant thing for that authority to hide t...

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age,it is widely recognized that majority of residents are intriguing about games.However,certain human beings think that sports amenities are the best choice to develop their fitness and health.Whereas,other counterpart civilians think that it would create a detrimental effect on community.In this essay,i will discuss both views and in the forthcoming essaysprovide my opinion. To commence with,there are myriad of positive things with playing games,it would boost their mental and physical health.According to the recent research of Oxford University on public health issues.They identified that majority of civilians are fascinating towards badminton and volleyball games.To cite an example,in Brazil have established a mandatory rules regarding to their health and in that country locals are must and should play in any one game.That is not only benefit for health but also it deteriorates the anxiety and mental pressure at work.Which would create a pleth...

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can is better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?

Spending the time together with children by doing their favorable activities is a more effective way to develop and improve their overall skills and creativity compared to reading. In my opinion, doing enjoyable activities with a child is a key to develop their creativity and overall skills.

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What health issue are linked to modern lifestyle? What answers to these problems can you suggest?

the lifestyle has changed over the period of decades.the way of life is being practised according to the trend followed by most people.the demerit of the modern lifestyle outweighs merit. I added the statement why some flaws in modern lifestyle

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The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart illustrate information about economic growth and household expenditure on goods.

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Some people believe that schools are responsible for improving the behavior of young children. Others think it is the parents' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that schools should take responsibility for improving students' behavior while others feel that parents should. Which is better in the long run? Although schools might have an opportunity to guide how their students have to behave, parents should improve the behavior of their children.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

There are two options related to building a residencial areas. One is constructing taller buildings and another is creating housing in wide areas. In my opinion, having tall buildings are more beneficial since they take less space and can regroup many people at the same time.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importatnt for people. Why misht this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Owning a home is important for the family or the person to remain happy and not bothered towards paying monthly or yearly. While renting a home has many dislikes for some people, because it can be hard to move on from time to time, and not having your own home where you can be more comfortable with it.

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It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason, younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

n today's era, It has been debated that old employees are less flexible towards new evolving ideas than younger ones and so it's better to hire young employees at newly developed workplaces. I don't think this is the case in the real picture.

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