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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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An ageing population is affecting parts of the world

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The advantages brought by the spread of English as “a global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

The line graph provides information about the number of shops which closed and opened during the period from 2011 to 2018.

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Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that schools should remove non-academic subjects such as music and sports from (the educational/its) syllabus so that students will focus on academic fields which are helpful for their professions. While it is true that intellectual subjects are important, I do not believe that fully concentrating on teaching academic subjects at school is a good idea. Firstly, from the health point of view, non-academic activities are helpful not only for students’ physical health but also their mental health. For instance, after studying and sitting in compulsory classes for the whole morning, it is better for students to do some outdoor or art activities such as dancing, playing basketball to get rid of stress. As a result, their learning ability and concentration in the afternoon will be improved. Focusing only on the academic area is not only harmful to student’s health but also makes their capability decrease. Secondly, not all of students need to be excellen...

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In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

It is true that a wide amount of public money is growingly invested in developing the Internet in some nations. There are different reasons identified for this trend and I consider that public funding should be spent on more urgent priorities. The main reason for this trend toward expanding Internet access in various countries is that citizens are able to access resources of information available effectively at any time, meaning that they can have an opportunity to broaden their horizons through reading newspapers online or searching information on the Internet. In addition, the Internet always offers opening access to those people is willing to learn regales of age, location, and background. Another reason is that the Internet helps to enhance the growth of the economy. Online sale becomes more common these days, hence, improving Internet access helps to boost the domestic as well as international trade. In fact, the Internet enables/allows us to save our time and is co...

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In this sophisticated world, more and more young ones tend towards renowned personalities due to their name and fame. In this day and age, celebrities have become more eminent among adults owing to their lucrative living standards as well as their stunning looks rather than their victories which they gain by determination and hard work. The upcoming will highlight that this certainly not a rational approach that not needs to have opted.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Today, society tends to watch cinematic pictures without friends. On the one hand, there are a number of benefits of this process, but on the other hand, there are some drawbacks and issues which must be discussed and solved. In this essay, both sides will be explained and supported with examples.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is?

All things considered, it may be hard to come to the clear opinion since the fact that congestion is caused by controversial factors. I believe that using public transport by the citizens more frequently instead of the private one, would have a positive impact on the roads' hecticness. All things considered, it may be hard to come to the clear opinion since the fact that congestion is caused by controversial factors. I believe that using public transport by the citizens more frequently instead of the private one, would have a positive impact on the roads' hecticness. However, if the government make an effort to improve traffic system, then the jams issue will not be so urgent. 2) Summarizing both viewpoints' arguments, alcoholism was a major issue throughout all the times, thus resulting to problems as unemployment, early deaths, serious health diseases and etc. I am a strong advocate of a restricting system opinion since alcohol consuming at the young age m...

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visits such places?

In this contemporary era,the topic of tourism is always debatable that in present epoch there are a lot of visitors are visited areas where conditions are very difficult such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.This essay will be discussed both the merit and demerit in the upcoming paragraphs.

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discusee about living in desert , talk about advantages and disadvantages of this matter

Tonight, I'm going to talk to you about that remarkable contenint, aount ...., remot, hustel and it present uninhabited unperminet bases , for early explores it was the altemet survivel context , for reserchers like me it remains the place of great chalenge for modern tourist it simply of grates bautiy first, some facts and figers .... is the place of extreams the highest, coldest and windiest contenet and over 58 time the size of the UK the ice cab contain almost 70% of the worlds fresh water and 90% of it's ice, but with very low snow fall most of the contenet technicaly falls unblievebly into the category of desert huge ice berges brake off the contenet eash year while in winter half the srounding oceien freezes over which means it size almost doubels reasercher and exploration has been going on ....for more than 200 years and has involve sientices from many different countries who work together on reaserch stations Hear sientes and technical suppor...

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life has a several choices comparing to the past, as world today has become one country and almost speaks one Language called a technology language

Today’s life has a several choices comparing to the past, as world today has become one country and almost speaks one Language called a technology language, life became much easier and faster with a several options and facilities, in this essay we are going to reveal the truth about today’s choices.

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In some countries celebrities complain about way about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

Privacy is essential needs for human. Therefore I believe that every person including celebrities should have their own privacy and can choose which part of their private lives that to be shared and open for public.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

People worldwide face with a common issue which may seem not so hazardous since they are not those who are mocked. Bulling results to irreparable harm of students' health and leave the scars for the entire life. I am a strong advocate of the opinion that the fundamental responsibility of the children's suffer lays on the emotional background, and in this essay I will discuss about it and the resolving ways.

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Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?

There is a common fact that exercise can provide a vital role in maintaining people's health, including the elderly generation. Such activity is also highly advised by medical health professionals. Yet, plenty of old people still face several constraints to have good exercise. The following paragraphs will explain the root causes behind this phenomenon.

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At present, the media affects people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

The media has a great impact on people's lives in the present time. This essay will discuss how it affects the public point of view. I believe, it is a positive development where it gives people an insights of what is happening in the world.

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To Learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement? Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?

In modern life, many people believe that children should eat healthy meals at school to learn with a higher lever of efficacy. I like many others, argue that it is strikingly true. In addition, it is advisable that the school and parents take responsibility to provide food for the school.

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El envejecimiento de la población está surgiendo a partes del mundo causa y efecto

La población mundial está envejeciendo: muchos países están experimentando un alto ranking de personas mayores. El envejecimiento de la población está a punto de convertirse en uno de los problemas sociales más importantes de los últimos años, y su impacto afecta a todos los entornos de la sociedad, como la economía, la política y la cultura. Por lo tanto, la disminución de las tasas de fertilidad y el aumento de la esperanza de vida son los principales factores que conducen al envejecimiento de la población en general. Sin embargo, no debemos olvidar que la migración internacional también contribuye a los cambios en la estructura de edad de diferentes países y regiones. En las próximas décadas, gran parte del mundo enfrentará presiones financieras y políticas derivadas de las necesidades de salud, pensión y protección social asociados con este crecimiento demográfico de adultos mayores. Hay más personas mayores de 65 años en todo el mundo que personas menores de 65 años. El envejec...

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to comsume less sugar.

Excessive consumption of manufactured food and drink products can lead to serious disease. The government should increase the sugary tax inorder to lessen the consumption. In my view, I agree that there are advantages due to increasing the amount of sugary food and beverages.

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It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles, and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Educating a children is not a simple thing perhaps having some help of the family could make the process easyer. The experience of having different people saying what it is good or bad on a child education can make the kid more acceptable and less selfish. On the other hand having the grandparents exposing their lifes history can rapdly increasi the kids knowledge. It is agreed that familly such as aunts, uncles and so on involved in the children upbringing is better.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society inter adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there is a growing trend of people moving to foreign nations. I disagree with the given statement, which says that immigrants should abandon their old ways, and adjust to the localized cultures and codes of behaviour. I believe, it is necessary for migrants to adapt to local cultures and ways of life, however, it is equally important for them to preserve their old cultural heritage.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Our cultural heritage can be maintained by doing the traditional ceremony regularly. However, some population of the world indicates that these activities are no longer exist, due to several trigger, in this case globalization and false belief. I personally think that such problem can be overcome government regulation as well as technology adoption.

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