IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 355

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime.

An illegal activities tend to rise all around the world, mostly among the juvenile. There are three main causes and the number of solutions can be possible to discuss. Perhaps the major problem we need to deal with is lack of parental guidance, that makes children feel themselves to have become independent and take up the most important decisions of their life in their own way. When parents don’t pay enough attention to their children’s social and educational behaviour, teenagers can’t differentiate what is right or wrong on their choice. An another problem is peer pressure of teens environment. Some teenagers want to be known or accepted by other children or their social group, accordingly they force others to use alcohol, drive without license, burgle, teen gang and other criminal activities. Finally, there are problems with poor education. Turning to possible solutions, some family members should set clear guidelines and rules, as a result adolescences follow their moral...

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime

Nowadays, number of crime rates is growing in persons between the ages of fifteen and twenty four years. The predominant factor causing the increase in crime is the gap between parents and children. In addition, poor education and peer pressure are also causes. Although three solutions also appear to be possible. Perhaps, teens having negligent parents tend to become careless towards their academics and overall physical appearance. When parents do not pay any attention towards the personal and social developments of their teens, they think they have become independent and take up the most important decisions of their lives on their own. Another cause is poor education, which means education is the process that facilitates learning, or the acquisition of knowledge, skills, values, morals, beliefs, habits and personal development. It can significantly alter a person’s life. A third factor is peer pressure, which comes with both positive and negative influences. Getting in...

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“Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion”

The two pie charts illustrate residential water use in 1988 and 2008.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, a large number of people are moving towards vegetarian diet instead of meat, after considering some detrimental effect of red meat to their health. In this essay I believe that vegetarian diet should be preferred by human instead of meat.

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citizens are required to pay a significant amount in taxes

The financial crisis of 2007–08, also called the subprime mortgage crisis, was a crisis that started in 2007 impacting the world. Since 1929 when the Great Depression began, the economy began to have the worst downturn, then this had crashed in asset values into a "sub-prime crisis" in the US.

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Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that some believe that robots are vital for the people future life, whereas other think they are hindrance and only bring detrimental effects on the community. It seems there are some arguments on both side as we will discuss in the essay.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, governments of many countries invest money on developing railways and roads. However, some people believe that more money should spend on railways. I believe that, this expenses should be utilised based on the requirment of the public transportation, because in some countries' roads require more renovations, while some in need of railways.

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The average number of hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart demonstrates the average figure of hours of teaching per year done by each teacher regarding primary as well as lower secondary and upper secondary in four separate countries, namely Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA in the year of 2001.

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Traffic jam brings a lot of problems to our life. What are the problems? What are the solutions?

Transportation is extremely important in our day-to-day activities. in this fast-growing world the need of humans has increased dramatically leading to an increase in the need for transportation. several decades ago, travelling was mainly dependent on public transport. However, the development of advanced technology, the increased number of automobile manufacturers, long waiting times and lack of comfortable in public transport compelled people to buy their own cars.

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Some people think that advertisements are good for the society whereas others oppose this view. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is undoubtedly true that human life has been much affected by advertisement. Many people hold a strong belief that ads are good for society but others believe that advertisements will badly affect human life. Regarding that, both notions as well as writer opinion will be explained in this essay.

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Some people think that taking care of the environment is the responsibility of individuals but others think that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether individuals should take responsibility of the environmental related to protection has been raising a lot of debates. On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that government should look after environment because they have already pay tax income annually.

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When designing building, the intended use of the building should be taken in into account as important rather than the outward appearance? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The celebrities are surrounded by the world of beauty and wealth, and the same is reflect over their social media accounts. This artificial reflection over the achievements have a negative impact on the youth. This essay is in agreement that the materialistic glorification of celebrities have a bad impact on youth.

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some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisment tell us about new product that may improve our lives. which view do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that advertisements promote the majority of us to purchase products that we are not in need of. Some people support the opinion that advertising may let us have an idea about what is new in the market, which may boost our living standards. In my view, I believe it is important to let ourselves object to some of the advertisements, so we can get updated about new products that may change our lives. One argument for agreement and disagreement will be explained in detail below along with the conclusion.

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It may be a problem for car drivers and cyclists to share the same road. What are the problems and how to improve the situation?

Presently, more vehicle has been used by society which is impacting between two and four wheelers as come to road. Nearly 80% of population using car or bike to go even nearest location. Due to heavy traffic, cyclist traveling around traveller couldn't able to recognise. The below paragraphs has explained causes and solution for issues creating in road.

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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

In recent years, there is a tendency of people feeingl anxious when they are going out or they are staying at their own house. The main reason for this phenomenon of being stolen by criminals even if they stay at home or go to society, and this essay wil point out some solutions to tackle this tendency.

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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. What opinion do you agree and why?

There is no denying the fact that the main role of females is debatable. While it is a commonly held belief that a female should raise her kids and teaches them life manners. However, some people argue that women must have their own rights and she must take their opportunities in the job the same as men do. I strongly believe that women must look after their own offspring and help them to grow in a healthy environment. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view and show why I believe this.

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Many people/students today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people today prefer to live and work in a foreign country after graduation from their domestic university. There are several factors influencing the decision making and it will be discussed in this essay.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps demonstrate the layout of Grange park in the year 1920 and the changes that have place up until now.

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In some developed nations, it is seen that there is a growth in the average life expectancy. Despite the fact that more and more elderly people give society either individuals a host of disadvantages, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

There are a variety of problems for having more older adults, and the society must carry more burden from this. Pension must be financed more to the elderly, and the government has dealt to pay sufficient money for them. However, there is a fact that the number of working adults is decreasing, undeniably, the government receives less money taxes from them to fund pensions. Furthermore, they not only face the payment for the aged, the government also has a tension of labor shortage. In addition, youth adults now are put under more pressure of overwork because of the lack of workers, they have a very hectic schedule to take care themself or to think about the significance of birth rate. By the way of illustration, the number of the aged in Japan is genuinely huge, whilst the birth rate is at an alarming rate, and lots of working adults spend most of their day working. It is a huge tension for the Japanese government and the another government to urgently solve this problem by some fea...

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ordinary people try to copy famous people either magazine or watching tv.why do they do this?do you think its a good idea to copy famous people?

Soical media infulencer has been last decade huge player in may part of our world because people try to cope them and see them as an example.Moreover, affect they way we live.In this essasy I am going to outline the reason and why I believe this critcal isseue need to slove it.

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