IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 357

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries, people increasingly talk about money such as how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations. Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?

In many countries , humans talk shop about salaries , wealth and how much they pay for goods in their daily talks. Because today their salaries and financial features are due to their reputation . It is a positive development and several reasons can prove this statement.

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You can not everyone in the world that needs help,so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people argue that we are not responsible helpings other people and the only thing we should be worried about it is our own society. I completely disagree with this view because I believe every lives matter and moreover, trying to solve other countries problems can enhance the communication between them.

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some people think that the world eventually have only one language. do you think the advantages of having one global language outweigh the disadvantages

Many people have been thinking that the world will have only one language in the future to communicate with each other. There are several advantages and disadvantage that should be discussed.

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some people think it is good for student to take a gap year before going to university. what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing so

Many students think that taking a gap year could be a great chance for them. On the other hand, others think that taking a gap year is a waste of time. In other words, taking a gap year has several pros and cons.

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an average of sales of selected food items (hot coffee, iced coffee, ice cream, soup, salad) during winter and summer at the Brisk cafe.

This graph illustrates an average of sales of selected food items (hot coffee, iced coffee, ice cream, soup, salad) during winter and summer at the Brisk cafe.

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7. In some countries, parents expect children to spend long time studying both in and after school, and have less free time. Do you think it has the positive or negative effects on children and society?

Parents expect their toddlers to spend time in their studies as it would be beneficial for their future afterwards. However, it has a negative effect on children. We will be discussing more this in the paragraph below.

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3.Patriotism is negative. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Patriotism has been a subject for debate for a long time now. Some people argue that patriotism is bad and can cause divide among people. I personally agree to this argument. In this essay I will explain the reasons for supporting and not supporting patriotism.

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Some people think that homework is not necessary for students’ development. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, the educational systems can relatively differ from others all over the globe. Some individuals consider that the students can acquire the better results in every quiz without doing homework. I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will illustrate the pros and cons of doing homework based on my point of view and support it with examples as well.

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Growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or countryside?

Population is increasing day by day. Cities are being crowded. It has now become a common feature to get stuck in traffic for 2 to 3 hours. One family on average includes 2 to 3 children. These children when grew up starts living in the same house with their families. This has given rise to joint family system. Due to current economic situation, shared system has become very common in Pakistan.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutiuons can be offered?

Obesity is a common health problem encountered by young children which is more often involving the adults. This essay will discuss about the main reasons of this problem is overeating of junk foods and lack of physical activity among youngsters. The most viable solutions are giving healthy options and performing exercises.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Childhood obesity has becoming major issue nowdays in many counteries. We will be discussing about the main causes and how it become an issue which need to be looked upon.

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Some people believe that all company decision should be taken by managers, whereas, others think it is better to include employees while decision making ? Discuss both points and give your opinion

Making the right decision about the status of the company is very crucial for the company's growth, And many people believe that when making huge decision is a collective effort. Although it is very important to hear some employees' decisions, The final say should be for hiring managers.

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Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The world is currently split between two opposite beliefs: those individuals who sustain that the government must guarantee the right to free online access to every citizen and those who state that it should be paid individually just like many other services. Although internet access may arguably be considered as a service, I think that letting people having free access to it must be considered as necessary.

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In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

It is undeniable that offences committed by young adults are on the rise in our societies. Society as a whole could be blamed for this vice being experienced. This essay will seek to discuss provide possible solution for this issue.

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Someday, the non-renewable energy such as fossil fuels which producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation will reach an end of usageable periode when all the world's fossil fuels depleted. The essay bellow will discuss the background why fossil fuels are become the most consumpted resource, and some examples of the alternatives resource.

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Media surround us,from the shows we watch on tv to the music we listen on the radio. How does media affect the society? Do you agree that the media has more disadvantages than benefits?

The media is such a controversial subject in our today's world.It has been argued that whether it is a positive development or by contrast the negative one.needless to say,the media has made our life more convenient and easier.

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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research

In Several nations, increasingly people are becoming interested to know about house or bulding they live in. Their is an reson behind that, also this essay is going to about effictive way that can follow to know about the house they are living in.In the commence with, the tends to know for the history of a house is becomeing, so populare among people. It is now become a kinds of responsibility for them. Foremost, they show their curcicity is for be familiere with the house, the house can be demaged by the natural diseaster it would be hessel for Someone afrer diseaster. If this is the case or wrong happend it would easer to preparce for next diseaster to illustrate, my father was previously known about earthquakes, When he done Some observation about our house he come to a point that he made a coridor to prevent ourself from this kinds of disasters.Furthermore, this make the house So Strong the value of it the market always get on higher rang.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when traveling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? (give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience)

The question of whether the benefits given by new IT progresses on work flexibility outweigh its downsides has been sparking the debates for quite some time. While many people sustain that it is, in fact, extremely convenient in order to keep up with their own work, other argue that it can lead to a certain misconception of work reality by losing sight of what is considered to be a work environment.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A recent theme has been heating discussions between proponents arguing that finishing tertiary education is undoubtedly the most efficient way to find a good job position and opponents who believes that gaining actual experience can the best one instead. This essay will discuss both views but ultimately side with those that believe in university degree as a way to obtain a good career.

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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

It has come to the attention of a lot of people that an increasingly number of individuals are moving from rural to urban areas aiming for a job. Issues like labor shortages, housing pricing rise and rural depopulation could occur consequently to this relocation trend, depending on how effectively governments will address this phenomenon.

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