IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 356

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

Some individuals believe that fund is one of the most important factors for achieving happiness. Firstly this essay will discuss the importance of money and secondly discuss other factors which is help to achieve happiness.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed,rather than work for a company or organisations. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

The advent of technology provided multitude of options for people. In the past, the options for employment were limited in the private sector under organisations or in the public sector governed by the governments. However, in the contemporary era, self-employment is gaining its pace and lesser number of people prefer to work for organisations or companies. In this essay, we delve the possible causative factors for this and divulge disadvantages associated with this colossal trend.

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Too much emphasis is placed on going to university for academic education. People should be incouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Higher education has become an integral requirement for school leavers’s future jobs over the decades. Unluckily, people are biased towards academic education than vocational traing while they both take important roles in our life. From my perspective, I agree that we should encourage people to choose vocational training for reasons.

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Although there has been a large increase in the numbers of women who go out to work, women continue to do a disproportionate amount of housework and childcare. What can be done to promote greater equality between men and women within the home?

One of the controversial questions is gender equality that could not been addressed between men and women within home. People would think that housework and childcare are mostly women’s duties. However, in my view, there is much that can be done to address the problem constructively.

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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Computers are very important inventions in our daily communication. When somebody sends messages to his friend or member of the family, he uses a portable computer called a smartphone.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Truly there are a lot of challenges facing the world when it comes to Education, population and environment.The world has changed drastically and it affects us individually and collectively.

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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects while others think that they should concentrate on the subjects where they do the best or find the most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals argue that childs must be trained on all school subjects however others prefer that they should learn the subject which is interesting for them. In my opinion it would be better if children teach the subject which is interesting for them.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

Some folks argue that all governments should unite and fix the environmental problems together. An alternative belief regards that the above problem should be solved on a national scale. In this ,essay both points of view are going to be examined and a particular option will be provided.

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Some people think that uniforms in schools are unnecessary and should be banned. T o what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays in lots of schools is compulsory to wear a uniform, but not everybody is thrilled to do so and there are even people who are proposing to abandon this habit. In my opinion this is a complex dilemma that has its own pros and cons, however I believe that everyone should be able to dress freely. Infact, I think that choosing what you wear is one of the best ways to express yourself.

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some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe ex-convicts people are the best guide for adolescent.And they also can help young generation avoid crime.I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement.And I am going to explain about both sides.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with Other people and news events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages.

There is no denying the fact that the main purpose of social media is debatable. Some communities argue that social network may help in keeping societies in contact and update them with the new informations. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then explain my opinion.

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the only way to cut the crime is building more prisons and make prison sentences longer to what extend do you agree or disaggre with this openion?

Nowadays,one of the most controversial issues around the world is crimes.Some peoplebelieve the best way to control crimesis to increase the number of buildings for prisoners and keep the criminals in the prison for a long time.In my opinion it is not a suitable idea to cut the crimes.Inthis,essay I am going to explain why I disagree and I will give some possible solutions. According to the topic,keeping prisoners in jail for a long time is not an effective way to control crimes.criminals first of all, during their sentences may come into contact with some dangerous people such as smugglers and murderers and they might be influenced by them.Besides dangerous people may encourage them to do something wrong when they are setfree from prison.In addition, long sentences lead to criminals losing their ability to adapt themselves to society as well as they can learn some anti-social behaviours. In order to solve the problem there are many alternatives to help decrease the crimes ...

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The following show the main source of rubbish collected during a public clean-up day in one city and the main sources of rubbish collected from three locations within that city.

Cleaning up rubbish in one city shows many kinds of rubbish. As we can see in the pie chart, there are 6 different types of rubbish. The cigarette butts dominate with a percentage 40%. Not only are the cigarette butts, the plastic bottles also dominate the chart right after the cigarette butts of course. Its percentage is 21%, almost a half of the cigarette butts. Furthermore, aluminum cans got 12% and followed by the glass with a percentage 10%. Other than that, drinking straws got the lowest percentage with only 8%. Less than any other collected-rubbish. Lastly, other types of rubbish that cannot be mentioned one by one –and are classified as “other” got 9%.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

The judicial system is intended to help reintegrate criminals to the normal and civilized life through a constant process of vigilance and control in places such as prisons. However, many offenders retake the criminal path and even uses the jail itself to recruite new criminal ‘employees’. This process can be explained because the are strong incentives to keep doing crimes and the institutions are not doing enough to reintegrate the convicted into the civilian life.

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Money manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.Do you agree or disagree?

Sugary products should increase theit price due to the reason of causing individuals health problems. Food and drink that that are manufactured by money contain high level of sugar. In this eesay i will point out reasons why i argee and disargee. In my opinion raising the prise will not solve the problem. People need to take responsibility about their health in their hand and more actions should be taken during the production of this products.

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Scientists and news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle. What are your views?

Today, the developing manufactoring brings a lot of harm to the environment, and one of them is climate change. Some people argue that governments are not able to solve the problem, so because of that these are individuals who are responsible for it. Personally, I belive it is important for both individuals and governments to take the responsibility. In my opinion, it is almost impossible to solve all environmental issues without governments’ support. Firstly, some threatening problems like climate change, caused by the greenhouse effect, went so far that to fix them they need an unaffordabe for individuals amount of money. Secondly,some key decisions simply could not be made by individuals, they need to be supported by laws and governments. However, it is also almost impossible to fix some environmental issues, including climate change, without people’s own responsibility. For instance, problems like garbage sorting and reducing plastic usage would be solved much mo...

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Some people say many advantages use computers while others say have many disadvantages

Computers are machines that can perform multiple tasks at any given time. Nowadays due to advanced technology, computers are part and parcel of everyone's life. Whether we like it or not, in the early part of the 20th century, computers became a part of our daily activities such as using an alarm in our mobile phone to order a dinner online.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that in many cities around the world. There are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from Owen cars?

It is argued that nowadays, the vast majority of people tend to have their own personal vehicle;Consequently, the traffic jam has increased rapidly and I believe the huge part of the problem can be solved on the governmental hand.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days it is necessary to talk about improve the environment. so, some people think that only governments and huge companies can make a difference, while others believe that anyone can make it. this essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is widely belived that a big number of people wish to live in big cities. In my opinion, I think there are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities because of reasons and relevant.

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