IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 403

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools, while others think it should be avoided.

Religion has always been a debatable topic of history. Some traditionalists believe that everyday in schools separate classes has to allocated for religion. another group of modernist claims religion classes should be keep away from students. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide a personal opinion that religion should be taught in schools or not.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Freedom of choice is everyone's nessecity. Thus, few individuals feel that, small sitiuations such as food, clothes and entertainment can be taken care by children themselve while, others are obligated towards letting their gaurdians to make a choice for them, as it is a matter of their future. I will discuss both points and write my view point in looming paragraphs.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is true that every household produces a growing/ increasing amount of rubbish on a daily basis. (Paraphrase) There are many reasons behind this trend, but governments and societies should make much more effort to address this issue.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the issues being raised is that some people consider that parents should teach how to be good members of society. Others have the opposite opinion. They believe that school should provide the knowledge of a good person in society. However there is no absolute agreement on whether parents should provide knowledge or is it a school commitment

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Although more and more people read newspapers on the internet, newspaper will remain as the most important source of news.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There is a belief that newspaper are stay as the major source.In my view, i totally disagree with this opinion.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that not all data is suitable for free sharing because they believed that data is too valuable, while others think that it is good to share as much information as possible. I myself believe that each party have their own perspective depends on their respective circumstances. If those people were struggling to collect the data then they will give the data a higher value, conversely/by contrast if they got the data easily then they will easily share the data back to others.

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Some people today believe that world’s population increase is unsustainable and will eventually lead to global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the past decade, technology and the internet changed our life so much.,Also life become much easier the world's population jumped rapidly.Society's people are divided into groups and are concerned that as the number of citizens increases that will lead to global crisis while many claim that notion other are rejecting it.

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Some people say that young people should be encouraged to leave home when they become adults while others claim it would be better to remain with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, parents think that their children after getting 18 years old, should leave the house, whereas others argue, that it is worth staying and living in their families. In fact, it is quite better when children will leave their houses as soon as they become adults because of responsibilty and self-development. In this essay, there will be given some statements to this dilemma and have own thinking.

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Students should choose subject in with they are most interested

It’s believed by some that students should choose subject in which they most interested in,while others advocate for studying only superior skills.Despite the fact that i’m partially claim for embodying everyone with right to choose their curriculum,drawbacks of this phenomenon such us lack of adept specialist in different spheres should not be overshadowed.

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Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Globalisation can be witnessed in every sector of this world. Thus, the majority of retailer inlets from various countries trade in similar commodities. There is always a conflicting view regarding this similarity among the purchasers. This essay shed light upon. Ramification and benefits for customers along with my perspective.

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Today many people frequently change their jobs. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

In today's world,finding a secure career is an extremely difficult task to do.It is reported that folks are changing their profession more than ever since to find a good work.This approach is bringing too many obstacles these days such as shortages in one field or over staff in another field.By giving good increments or proper respect,this hazard can be solved.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this solution and give you own opinion

Lately, the life span of an average man is getting higher in different parts of the world. This essay will explain the benefits and downfalls if this particular issue

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the cause of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is undeniable fact that more and more young people come across a number of pressures which are mainly from curriculum, social and also trading approaches today's time. This essay intends to discuss the reasons of this phenomenon and also suggest some ways to allivate the problem. I sure people protect children from danger which is mounting pressures.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Language has an integral part in communication. It is, therefore, not surprising to see how it has caused a controversy among people about whether language should be taught early in school or not. While some people firmly believe that it should be taught early periods of education, others adamantly object to it. I have several solid reasons to agree with supporters one of which is not only an easy way to learn a language but also a life long ability while objectors emphasize that minors might have trouble about confusing the languages. To begin with, the fervent supporters of this matter claim that it is not only an easy way to learn a language but also a life long ability. It is a very convincing argument since the most memorizable things are had gained in the early ages. From an educational standpoint, it may be argued that it is the easiest way to learn a language while the minors’ communication skills are quite limited. Nevertheless, they can learn both their mother tongue and a...

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The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed over time.

The plans illustrate the changes to the ground floor of a specific building over three different periods.

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Teenagers should have regular exams at school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Regular exams play predominant role in preparing students all the hardships they would have to face after the completion of their secondary school .I do agree with this statement but there is still drawback that I would mention in the essay

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? As world is moving forward towards the revolution of science and technological advancements.

Emergence of new research and development is a clear evidence of importance of this matter. However in some societies student's lack of interest in science is a major concern. There are numerous reasons for this problem. One of the major problems that students don't intent to select the science subject for further studies is a level of difficulty. The study curriculum is designed in a tough way which compels students to go for either arts subjects or other information technology topics such as computer studies. In addition to that the outbreak of information technology is another reason, as society offers more jobs related to computer engineering. High scale salary is offered to IT related jobs and its a common perception for the demand of more computer related jobs. Another main reason is now youngsters shows a deep interest in entrepreneurship. Learners are more inclined towards selecting business modules at university level, specially the students with leadership mindset tends to...

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Obviously, some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes, but others are like engines for all around transformations. It is upon everyone to choose what to do when your civilization evolutionizes: stand aside, go with the flow, get involved or lead a “revolution” in general.

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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that we space programs should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

For a long time people thought that outer space consisted of a sun, thousands of stars and a moon, which did not seem that important to explore. But as more and more exploration were done the scientists have found more about our planet creation and raised a debate of if other planets could be new potentially livable planets. For some it was exciting and for some it seemed as a waste of a lot of money which could be used in the other areas. In this essay I will give some points on whether the explorations should be continued or not.

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People have different perspectives on whether schools ought to focus on teaching children to compete or work together as a team. While some people think that competition is more important, others consider that it is better for children to learn to cooperate with each other.

Schools can prepare students for academic and career futures, and they can also teach them how to be competent partners. Exams and presenting some material as a group are two of these activities. Competition and cooperation are equally important qualities for children to learn. By analysing two activities this equal significance can be proved.

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