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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The cost of electricity for the average household is increasing in many countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What are the possible solutions?

The prices of electricity are skyrocketing in many nations. The reasons of rising cost is shortage of raw material and increased dependency on the electricty. While this problem requires urgent attention, the solutions are finding

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Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people. What do you think about this viewpoint?

The maps illustrate the changes that took place in the town of Langley from 1910 to 1950.

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, those who own personal computers and telephones are nor the minority anymore, therefore they afford little difficulty in working at home. For many people, this kind of workstyle has highly increased their working efficiency by reducing time waste on traffic. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons of the ‘domestic producing’ and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let’s begin by looking at the advantage of working at home. One of the main positives is to enjoy a more private and independent workplace. What I mean by this is that average workers who have to share one large room with tens of colleagues are often uneasy and less concentrated, while sitting on the chair near his balcony could improve air quality, spatial comfort and spiritual vigor. For instance, I had my first and second ‘college entrance exam simulation’ at home during pandemic 2020, and due to the absence of sur...

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Today with the improvements in the clothing industry there is a wide range of clothes with different materials being made, which led to the production and the rise of different clothing brands from cheap to expensive.

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Because o f the busy pace o f modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world.

It is a universal truth that today’s children are exposed less to natural world because of the busy pace of modern life than children from past generations. From my standpoint, to spend time in natural world is the best way possible to spend our time during a day because nature can have impacts not only on our physical health, but also on mental health. In today’s life of an average child with school responsibilities, there is not much time in a day that child can spend surrounded by nature. One of the main causes children do not spend as much time in nature as past generations did is development of technologies such as computers and video games. Because of that, children do not need to spend time outdoors to have fun with their friends in their free time. Spending time in the nature and learning how it benefits human health can be educational, helpful and even fun for children. It can teach them that fresh air, physical activity and exposure to sunlight can improve their ...

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It is important for people to take risks, both in theirprofessional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risksoutweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that for the community taking risks for their personal activities and career growth is really important.However,there is no absolute agreement as some societies find it beneficial,whereas others consider everything associated with peril negative.Surely,there are both pros and cons,but I perceive that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some peop/e think it is no longer necessary /'or children fo go fo school because ffiey can do all their learning on//ne. Others gei/ev’e learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give yot/r opinion.

People hold conflicting views about whether children should study online or go to an educational site. While being educated at school is a common form, I definitely agree with the former point of view.

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Some peop/e think it is no longer necessary /'or children fo go fo school because ffiey can do all their learning on//ne. Others gei/ev’e learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give yot/r opinion.

Technology makes virtual education possible for everyone, especially children all over the world. This affects the way children study, at school or at home. In my opinion, despite the versatility of the Internet, school is still vital.

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Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that urban cities trend significantly toward development and well-built infrastructure for inhabitants. A number of societies reckon that it is magnitude for cities and towns to operate significantly in constructing wide public extent. although urban designers pleads for structure open spaces for the public such as public gardens and entertainment facilities, others refute the claim asserting that urban places demand more essential infrastructure like hospitals.

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Some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that urban cities trend significantly toward development and well-built infrastructure for inhabitants. Number of society reckon that it is magnitude for cities and towns to operate significantly in constructing wide public extent. although urban designer plead for structure open space for public such as public garden and entertainment facilities, others refute claim asserting that urban place demand more essential infrastructure like hospital.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages

It has become a quite common practice in morden times for people take risks both on their working place and their living place. Personally, I believe the benefits of this trend out weigh the drawbacks. It is hard to deny that thinking without risks is the most comfortable lifestyle, Such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that It is important to be a little wary in life. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual facilities and it should be examined meticulously. As far as environment and health are concerned, I strongly hold that challenges make people grow. First and foremost, global competition is fierce, which motivates people to constantly improve and surpass others. To be more specific, if people don't have the spirit of adventure, how can there be so many new technologies now. As a result no matter professional lives or personal lives they must be in a state of readiness to prevent themselves from slack. Although it d...

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Topic: a great city should not be confounded with a populous one. Discuss the above statement and give your own opinion

Well, let’s speak about studying in university and especially about university admission. In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. I want to explain why, in my humble opinion, it is.

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Many students think school classes are boring and useless. What are the factor leading to this problem? Use specific reasons to support your opinion.

Most students think school classes are monotonous and ineffectual . I suppose school classes are boring because there are lots of unimaginative things therefore I do not agree with this opinion . I will put my thoughts into words in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Job opportunity issues are controversial. Discuss both viewpoints.

Vietnamese (Native), English (Fluent) Develop novel and efficient machine learning models to process the large‑scale dataset PCQM4Mv2, which contains more than 3 million molecules Optimize deep learning models to reduce the computation cost by 10% ‑ 20% Improve the architecture and setting of existing machine learning models for graphs to boost the accuracy by 5% ‑ 10% Implemented the Yolo V1, an advanced model for object detection, to detect various objects such as cars, motorbikes, and traffic lights on a provided real‑world image dataset Improved the implemented model with recommended tricks to boost the accuracy to 96% Analyzed the model performance and analyzed types of objects that can create difficulties for the model to detect Implemented the Siamese Net, a well‑known Computer Vision model for Object Detection, to track real‑world objects in a provided video dataset Optimize the implemented model to make it more efficient and reduce the inference time by 15 Devel...

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Although, more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remian the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a modern trend, in which people prefer to have access to the news from the internet, while elderly people believe that paper-based is better. In my opinion, technology has changed our life and facilitated many things such as reading the news wherever and whenever you want. So, I believe that reading news online can be the easiest way to stay updated and fresh announcement.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Currently, a huge amount of waste is generated by the people all over the world, which is a serious threat to the environment. This is due to the increase in number of single-use plastic which is not bio-degradeable. Government needs to ban this type of plastic and should focus on creating awareness among the public and start promoting products which are sustainable.

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Watching tv shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular. Why is this? What effect does that have on society?

Watching TV is popular nowadays and also it is helpful to get the information about surroundings. However, sometimes it influences the people in wrong way. In next paragraph I will discuss how it is going to affect the society.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The table beneath indicates where the money came from and the charts show how it was spent by the police departments in 2017 and 2018.

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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extend do you agree?

Some people argued that Genetic engineering is dangerous and it should use to be limited. there several effects on lives. But we can see the brighter side of Genetic engineering. Therefore, I will explain the advantages of Genetic engineering in the ensuing paragraphs.

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In many countries, the level of crimes is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it ?

Nowadays unlawful activities have become quite common. Such misconducts lead to vulnerablity in the society. I firmly believe that there could be various reasons for this. I would discuss some potential causes and the preventive measures by which this situation can be avoided.

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