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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Job opportunity issues are controversial. Discuss both viewpoints.

Vietnamese (Native), English (Fluent) Develop novel and efficient machine learning models to process the large‑scale dataset PCQM4Mv2, which contains more than 3 million molecules Optimize deep learning models to reduce the computation cost by 10% ‑ 20% Improve the architecture and setting of existing machine learning models for graphs to boost the accuracy by 5% ‑ 10% Implemented the Yolo V1, an advanced model for object detection, to detect various objects such as cars, motorbikes, and traffic lights on a provided real‑world image dataset Improved the implemented model with recommended tricks to boost the accuracy to 96% Analyzed the model performance and analyzed types of objects that can create difficulties for the model to detect Implemented the Siamese Net, a well‑known Computer Vision model for Object Detection, to track real‑world objects in a provided video dataset Optimize the implemented model to make it more efficient and reduce the inference time by 15 Devel...

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Although, more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remian the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a modern trend, in which people prefer to have access to the news from the internet, while elderly people believe that paper-based is better. In my opinion, technology has changed our life and facilitated many things such as reading the news wherever and whenever you want. So, I believe that reading news online can be the easiest way to stay updated and fresh announcement.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Currently, a huge amount of waste is generated by the people all over the world, which is a serious threat to the environment. This is due to the increase in number of single-use plastic which is not bio-degradeable. Government needs to ban this type of plastic and should focus on creating awareness among the public and start promoting products which are sustainable.

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Watching tv shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular. Why is this? What effect does that have on society?

Watching TV is popular nowadays and also it is helpful to get the information about surroundings. However, sometimes it influences the people in wrong way. In next paragraph I will discuss how it is going to affect the society.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The table beneath indicates where the money came from and the charts show how it was spent by the police departments in 2017 and 2018.

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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extend do you agree?

Some people argued that Genetic engineering is dangerous and it should use to be limited. there several effects on lives. But we can see the brighter side of Genetic engineering. Therefore, I will explain the advantages of Genetic engineering in the ensuing paragraphs.

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In many countries, the level of crimes is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it ?

Nowadays unlawful activities have become quite common. Such misconducts lead to vulnerablity in the society. I firmly believe that there could be various reasons for this. I would discuss some potential causes and the preventive measures by which this situation can be avoided.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In some parts of the world, people hire personal trainer instead of doing regular sports and attending exercise classes to improve their fitness.In my opinion , this is a positive trend ,and the following paragraphs of this essay I am going to tell some reasons for this development and whether this is a positive or negative development.

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One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you think governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem

These days, politicians who govern different countries often talk about an important question regarding overpopulation since they have to find policy strategies to to face up to this.

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children.

Television is a great discovery at science which eventually had vast expansion in the current era. Considering an important part of human's life. Television had many impact on children, and are too much addicted to it. Excessive attachment to T.V for children have disadvantage and looking to the other parts there are advanage too.

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PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGE DOES PLASTIC DO TO ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

Nowadays, plastic is world’s greatest scourges facing by humanity and other living organisms. Day by day uses of plastics has become increase, but individuals do not understand about environment pollution cause by using this man-made plastic. In this essay, I will discuss about damage does plastic do to environment and also discuss about the solution that should done by human-beings as well as local authorities.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on Do you agree or disagree?

We are presently in a technology era, and owning a computer is a necessity. A computer has made surfing the internet easier and faster. We can easily look up information on our computers in our own homes,unlike the days when we had access to computers only at cafes which limited time spent on the computer.

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Most countries allow 18year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age.Others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 years.Discuss both views.

One of the highest controversial issues, today relates to whether or not the teaching of foreign language in primary schools and in the kindergarten should be obligatory. I strongly agree with this view due to several reasons as follow

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

The table represents the information about subway systems in London, Paris and Moscow. It compares the total track length, number of stations in operation, and number of daily passengers among three major European cities.

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In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this siruation true in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Of course, this is understandable that job description and also favourable skills experiance huge change in past decades. Many years ago, a man (a father) Should know how to fix the home stuff, how repaired a car if it was necessary, similarly if a girt did not know how make a clothes or making bread , indeed she was unqualified for mariage.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Due to the rise of social media, we are seeing more than usual amount of advertisements in our day-to-day lives. Even though they are informative and tell us about some new products, we end up spending on lot on unnecessary items and services which increases our debts or decrease our savings which could have been used towards something important.

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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, people have the habit of buying ready-made foods if they do not want to cook something on their own. However, I completely disagree that these types of products will replace the traditional way of preparing food.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is unequivocal that people hold different views about the means of getting the news. Although some people maintain that newspapers are the best way to learn news, I hold a belief that people can learn news better through other types of media since these methods are easily accessible and more economical compared to the conventional newspaper.

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In many countries schools have several problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Students behaviours and they attitude on schools with other conterpart and also teachers is essential matter which requiers specific attention from parents and in addition schools authorities. The foremost, we should determin what reason cause this kind of acting from pupils. regardless some minority of students who have spiritual problems and they Should See traphist so they can work on their action, I personally believe that the majority of children who cause difficulties in schools are coming from families who has not provide safe and reliable envirnment for their kids. children understanding is much more than parents imagine, they realize every things consequently if they feel can not share their thought with adult, so they starting being unpleasant in Socity. Undoubtedly, different family background, vary child breeding, introduse completely varies kids to Community which behave by their own moral rules, this is acceptable until they do not Show strengh and also distr...

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Parts of today’s society believe that giving permission to children to make their own choices on daily situations (food, clothes, entertainment, etc…) can easily lead to the formation of selfish individuals who only cares about themselves. However, others think that making decisions about circumstances on their own is essential. Personally, I strongly approve of the second idea.

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