IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 399

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people spend a lotf money on hosting birthday paries, family functions and other celebrations. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, due to social media such as Instagram, people want to show off their lives. So they usually purchase luxury goods and spend a host of money on holding all kinds of parties. I want to consider both benefits and drawbacks and say my own view.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

here is a debate going on whether it is fair and justified for sports professionals to earn more money than people in other important professions. There are a lot of professions which are overpaid, but in my opinion sport professionals are not one of those.

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In the furture , nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extant do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The phenomenon of physical paper will be replaced by free online reading sources has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I totally agree that those products of paper such as newspapers and books will become trash.

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In some countries, museums charge people for admission, while in some other countries, people are admitted into museums free of charge. Do you think the advantages of charging admission outweigh its disadvantages?

I believe its positive effects could be bigger that its negative effects. In my opinion, it is depending on the different countries and situations. If the region are well-developed, then letting the museums become commerce could be fine. Nevertheless, if the society are in poor economic conditions, I do not think charging people for admission is a positive development.

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SOME SCHOOL LEAVERS TEND TO GO TRAVELLING OR WORK A PERIOD OF TIME BEFORE GOING TO UNIVERSITY. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Children’s academic performance is given top priority to most families, and if it is essential for children to study art has become an important concern for parents and society. From my perspective, art is an essential subject for children at school even though it may inevitably sacrifice the precious learning time.

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Some people think that children under 18 yrs old should receive full time education. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

I am writing this to confirm that Harwinder Singh Deol is my brother and I would like to invite him to visit me and my family here in Hamilton. From 1 March 2023 to 31 March 2023. Flight bookings will be confirmed as soon as his visa is approved. The purpose of his visit is for holidays, to meet my family and at the same time experience the summer season here in New Zealand.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In today's era of technology, no one wants to become an employee and work under someone else. Perhaps, they want to become their own boss and work independently. This is because of increased work pressure in jobs. Although, this has worked for several people who resigned from their job, there are still some uncertainties with it.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

At present, a group of people preferred to do self-work, rather than to do under any company. There are many reasons human do it and it has many demerits also and will discuss relevant points along with precise examples and back up my view.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your option.

Now, In this global era, It seems to be really true that the conversation of neighbours could be diminished because of television. The reason is that Tv would provide more exhilaration for people. In this manuscript, I would elucidate these points on why people are madly involved to watch television and provide a clear conclusion.

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Throughout history male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed my female leaders, it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is strongly viewed that during past times, masculine leaders caused corruption or negative arguments in opposed to feminine authorities that could maintain the tranquility among their governed areas. However, I completely disagree with this essay statement and believe that the development of any nation depends on person abilities rather than their personal identification.

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some poeple work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think thst it is better to work for different organisations. discuss both these view and give your opinion.

Many people spend all their lifetime working for the same company. In the contruary, we can find people which always alter their organisation.

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countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is an upward trend in the modern world about being much more global. Nevertheless, society try to examine of whether this trend has advantages or not. In fact, human being should keep going in this way due to being a global citizen and establishing more reachable facilities to everyone.

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how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The given graph compares the ways of utilization of noxious garbage in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the UK.In general, there are five methods of this process.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries the ownership of peoples' home an important matter.In these countries is very important to own your own home rather than renting it. It might be indifferent for some, but or these people it matter.

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It is a good thing if senior management workers in a company get a much high salery than other workers in tha same company. Do you agree or disagree?

is not stranger to see that the senior management corps usually receive the highest payment than the youngest one, and the answer to the question "is it right?" cannot be an easy yes or not.

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Some individuals who make a lot of money are more successful. While, others believe that individuals who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both views and give vour opinion.

It is often argued by few masses who make a chunk of money are more victorious. However others opine that

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You and your family are living in rented accommadation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with rhe condition of some of the furniture.

I hope you doing great. I am a tenant in one of your accommodations. I am writing this

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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The first line graph shows the percentage of households that own three different types of electrical appliances over a period of one hundred years and the second shows the number of hours spent per week on household chores during that same period. Overall, ownership of those three appliances increased and the amount of time spent on chores decreased.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

A portion of people believes that adventurous sports should be restricted while others say that an individual should have fully right to practice any game without restriction. I agree with the latter idea as the risky sports help you dig out your potential along with that keep you healthy and fit.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely argued that accepting any adverse situation in one’s life is the best alternative, while other assert that the better way is to try and make situation better. This essay shall discuss both the views, however, in my personal perspective people should always try to improve their situation rather than leaving it at god’s hand. The primary factor why people believe accepting the situation as a best option is their belief system on destiny. Some people have so deep and blind trust on their luck that whatever they get is assumed to be destined irrespective of their effort and dedication. Secondly, a lot of failures in one’s life leaves no other option than accepting what comes to their lives. Some times many people fail even if they try achieving dreams a number of times. For instance, there are number of students pursuing Chartered Accountancy who have gave up their attempts and started career on different sector. On the other hand, there are certain group of peop...

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