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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime.

Actions against Criminal Law seems to be increasing all over the world, particularly among teenagers. In this essay, I will give the main reasons for this appearance, and provide possible solutions. One of the major causes is that a watching movie which is one of our most favourite habits presents violent scenes in most cases. These scenes bear in youths minds that criminal actions are a part of our daily life. For instance, crimes against ownership were increased by 10 per cent after broadcasting the movie named Ocean-7 eleven years ago. Moreover, advertising consumption of alcohol affects teenagers’ choices and encourages overconsumption. They might lose easily their mind control after drinking hard drinks and likely commit crimes. A third, the general study program of a high school, approved by the Ministry of Education, doesn’t include courses such as what the crime is and how to avoid actions against an offence of law. That’s why students cannot fully understand how cr...
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These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher prices?

There is no doubt that consumption of organically cultivated food is good for people’s health, and this is one of most important reasons why people prefer organic food over / to conventionally grown food. I think it is important to consume organic food even though it is expensive.
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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some parts of the world, the elders instructed the youngsters that they can attain any goals when they work hard for them. The given message can be beneficial in certain situations, but there can be drawbacks to some people.
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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Other thinks that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of the greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The supplied bar chart highlights with regard to the information of the production and consumption of electricity in units of billion kWh across ten countries in the year of 2014.
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Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past.what are the caurses and solutions of this problem

Various changes take place in the current globalized environment, where each platform starts to change par with the modern requirements, therefore these changes lead to having an impact on different elements especially on teenagers.Today current generation become more disrespectful and less polite towards society and elderly people.Therefore I am strongly agreed with the above statement.Following are factors that cause changeschanges in the landscape of the generation.There are
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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays there is a tendency to have a year break after completing school and starting to university. Taking a year off gives some advantages to young people, there are also some drawbacks of it. To commence with, it gives enough time to young people to decide a profession for their future carrier. Sometimes, choosing future profession looks such a tough task for young people. Hence, young people can decide a profession within a short period of time and make a proper decision which avoids r...
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A big salary is more important than job satisfaction

Every job comes with its pros and cons. It is argued that having a big salary is more important than being satisfied with your job. In this essay I will argue that having a big salary actually has way more disadvantages than job satisfaction.
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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy

It is argued that social media marketing can manipulate and influence people to buy items that they want us to buy. This essay totally agrees with the statement. I believe that social media knows how to advertise certain products to make people interested in buying that product. And somehow knows what we have been interested in.
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In some families there is more than one television in the home,with each family member even having their own TV. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one TV set per home.

In a part of families they have more than one TV in their living place,some of their family members even having their television with themselves.
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Many countries today are experiencing problems associated with noise pollution ( excessive noise pollution above a normal background noise) what are the cause of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected?

Nowadays most countries facing major issues with too much noise in the environment. This essay will discuss the problems associated with epidemic and find some solid solutions to solve this issue.
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Letter inviting my childhood  friend to visit Canada.

February 1, 2022 The Visa Officer Immigration, Refugees, and Citizenship Canada Govt. of Canada. LETTER OF INVITATION – Ms. Nita Gopalakrishnan Nair Dear Madam/Sir, Myself, Ami Rushi Ghadawala is submitting herewith a Letter of Invitation in support of a Temporary Resident Visa (Visitor Visa) Application for my childhood friend Ms. Nita Gopalakrishnan Nair (Date of birth: December 08, 1983), to facilitate her temporary visit to Canada. I am a proud Canadian citizen, residing at 5, Morningmist St., Brampton, Ontario, L6R 2A5, Canada; with my husband Rushi Rakesh Ghadawala – who is also a proud Canadian citizen. I have been associated with TD Canada Trust bank for more than 15 years and presently working in Private Banking division of TD Canada Trust bank. My husband is an aerospace professional, presently working with Magellan Aerospace – Winnipeg as Manager, Business Development. My household has four (04) members, including myself, my husband, and my in-laws. I have been kno...
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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children.Do you agree or disagree

There is an assumption that constant use of computers by children might have more disadvantages than advantages. I partly agree with this statement because computers can influence young children badly in different ways; nevertheless, I think that daily use of computers may develop plenty of skills.
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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others think that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are mixes kind of believed exist in the current society with regard to the career development.Few thinks that it is totally good to kick off their own professional career after completing their whole study, However on the other hand certain people think that it is better to kick off their professional career just after the school.These are two extreme two kind of believed,where those having their own pros and cons.In my opinion I am strongly agreed with regard to entering the university studies and then start up their professional career in their desire field.
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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

70% of the human boby contains water, where we have to drink atleast 2.5 liter of water on a daily basis.However as a custom we can observe that many people all around the world drink sugar based drinks on a regulary basis.According to the recent research paper released by world leading beverage company that their annual customers increased by 12% compared to last year which was a clear indicate of this norm.
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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic

People nowadays are more obese than ever before.in this essay I will discuss about the reason and solution to this problem. it is obvious that obesity is in people are complicated. Firstly,these days people eat a lot of fast food in their life which have led them to overweight. for ,Instance people are busier then ever before they go for a job early in the morning and come back home at late night from the workplace.so instead of cooking , they buy food from outside and some of them try to s...
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Some people think that the government should provide funding for arts . Others, however, believe that the money should be spend public health and education. Discuss both view and give you are own opinion.

Now a day's, public health and education rely on the countries economic condition. People's concern has arisen about whether the government
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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

The digital report has created a great impact on readers habits.Some groups believe that most people opt for newspapers as their main source of getting information rather than reading news on the internet. I completely disagree with the statement and In this essay, I support my opinion with examples.
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many people like to go on holiday abroad,while others believe it is better to visit places within their own country. discuss both views and give your opinion

Certain individuals are of the opinion of spending their break period in a foreign agrarian while some set of people enjoys staying back in their homey in other to explore exciting site around them. This essay will agree with having vacation spent abroad as my opinion because it gives oppourtiunity for relaxation and enjoyment and also it adds to ones knowledge. Meanwhile, both views will be discussed with explanations and relevant examples. Firstly, using ones free periods in a familiar environment gives room for more exploitation and conserve money in that person will be able to view as many area as he or she can at a very low cost compared to the bill of going outside the provincial.The time one will spend in planning to travel abroad would have been used to hit some other zone around.For instance, during the festive period,i had a huge time for myself to stopover at various spot that i have not been to in my neighbourhood with little charges and this, made me be able to ...
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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

It is often said that boarding schools are an excellent option for students. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who argue that boarding schools are a better option for children claim that children can easily learn to live independent, and it is the best place to gain academic qualifications. It is well-known that many boarding schools have a discipline at the boarding such as morning and night routine. Many strict routines and rules teach children discipline. For these reasons some people advise that boarding schools are the suitable places for children to study. By contrast, those who argue against living their children at boarding claim that parents will lose control over their children. They spend most of their time at schools; therefore, parents will not know what is happening in their children’s daily life. For exampl...
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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Crime among young people seem to be rising in many countries. The causes of this appear to be focused on two areas, and a number of solutions also appear to be possible. Perhaps the major factor is lack of parent upbringing of their children. Most crime committed by young derived from their parents who do not respond well to the needs of their children and provide little affection, support. Some parents also make very few demands on their children. This go a long way in their behavior at the societies at large. Another cause is lack of job. Most part time work tends to be poorly paid, with the result that those people and their family members need to meet the finding a way to provide their daily needs. Turning to the possible solutions, obvious step would be taken by parent to restore moral values to their children. This can go a long way of crime reduction. If we took this step it would reduce a crime of young people a long way. A second remedy might be for the State shou...
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