IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 497

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music is an essential factor of every nation. It is argued that music can be considered as the reason of keeping us united no matter what culture or age group. This essay agrees with this idea and discusses the reasons.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Now a days competition among children is at very high level like olympyad and many other exams depending on different countries. There are different competitions on State/province level, country level and world level. So, every high level competition leads to encouragement in each and every child who ever is participated. When ever any child is participated in any competition then after that competition they found themselves a step ahead rom other children, every competition creates a positive vibe in that child and it increases the confidence level. But competition is with from your own friends is not good. If there's a competition then it must be at high level.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Issues related to the global government are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that having one government today should be offered to the world today. Despite the fact that this trend has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks. This essay will explore how the disadvantages of having only one government outweigh the advantages.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

Since technology becomes low-cost and people around the world have better access to it, there are more workers from home. Also, there is a great amount of children who are studying at home. In my opinion this is a negative development, as it can lead to depressions and it can cause a drawback of their daily physical activities.

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This essay is going to discuss both consequences and my own opinions.

In this new generation, a creative advert is not a new thing. Instead, how to advertise is important. With a technology, cyber can be accessed by everyone. And the internet is accompanied by kaleidoscopic advertisings. Nevertheless, more and more advertisements are claimed that theirs are the first invention of the world. There are truly several benefits behind it. However, there are also some drawbacks. This essay is going to discuss both consequences and my own opinions.

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Modern technology is being used more and more in different aspects of our lives, such as education. Do the advantages of using technology as an educational tool outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the era of internet and the evolution of hardware and software technology, yielding technology to serve education has become a reliable option to count on.

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The continued ride in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Increasing number of the world population is a more serious risk for earth than plastic pollution and increasing temperatures. Countries such as India and China have already put strict laws to control their citizen count as these are the fastest growing nations.

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The continued ride in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Increasing number of the world population is more serious risk for earth than plastic pollution and increasing tempretures. Countries such as India and China has alredy put strict laws to control their citizen coundown as these are the fastest growing nantions.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-aged children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is known that nowadays kids spend too much time on playing computer games or beeing occupied with their mobile phones than twenty years ago. There are different opinions, which result in a discussion whether there should be more Physical Education classes instead of more academic subjects.

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today the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that plentiful sales of popular goods benefit the power of advertising even if they don't meet the real needs of the society.To my way of thinking i can easily support this concept with some examples from the reality we live in.

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Some people hold that the development of modern science and technology leads to environmental pollution and energy shortage. What do you think?

The advancement of technology and science has brought a huge development to human civilization. However, Some people think it leads the environmental pollution more dramatically. This essay is my personal opinion on this point of view.

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Some compaies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having umifom? Are there any benefits of having uniforms for the stuff?

In this this day and age, many companies force its its employees to wear a a certain kind kind of cloths cloths as they are working. It can be argued that workers should be free to choose what they want to wear. However However , I take the few that setting a special a special cloths cloths for the employees in any company company is essential due to the things it can prevent such such as thifs thifs and the miss concentration of some stuff stuff . To begin To begin with , the uniforms make the client client knows how are the workers in the company company . In other words In other words , it would be obvious for anyone come to the company company who are the responsible responsible in the place. To clarfiy clarfiy the importance, if the recerpion's recerpion's employee leave leave its place suddenly for any reason, and a client client come come to the company company where everyone wore different cloths cloth...

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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household chores. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give relevant examples.

The flow chart illustrates the stages of instant noodles production. Overall, this is a linear process that involves 8 different steps before the final product is delivered to the store.

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Many companies use advertisements to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or a bad thing for society.

Effective advertising persuades consumers to buy a certain merchandise by convincing them that their product or service is necessary for daily life and is used routinely by celebrities. As a result, although advertisements may be fundamental for economic growth, many people including me believe that they promote consumer culture and increase financial pressure on families.

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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meeting. Do you advantage of of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, online communication has been pervasive, especially during the pandemic rather than face-to-face meetings. I wholeheartedly believe the cons are more than cons.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are no doubts thats now-a-days students have to work harder in order to gather good grades as well as to achieve better future. Many believe that if pupils can study in a group it will help them to ace in their respected subjects. Whereas, others oppose in this line of thinking and prefer to study alone. If I have to pen down my opinion I will agree with the statment that studying with others can be more effective and I will discuss forthmore in the upcoming paragraphs. In today's wor...

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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Individuals have great opportunity to observe and learn manifold things at workplace as they meet various type of people there. It is belief that being friendly at workplace is not necessary because most conspicuous thing is only on performance as well as productivity for everyone. I am completely disagree with this view point and the reasons will be discussed below.

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People today generally have better lives than people in the past did. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

life nowadays is certainly different than in the past.Even though some people will prefer the past,I totally agree that life is much better now especially because of technological advancement and other modern developments .This essay will discuss more on my views.

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Today more people are traveling than before. Why is this case? What are benefits of traveling for a traveler?

In this contemporary era, due to technology revolution people are traveling more as compared to past. There are various causes for this action along with the numerous advantages it carries In this essay I would like to elaborate on factors like professional requirements, traveling medium options and education as some of the reasons for this recent trend. Culture exchange along with adaptability are some of the positive impacts that traveling has on the traveler.

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Some people think that uniform at school is unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that uniform has substantial impacts on children. Firstly, the uniform has its own benefits , as it makes the equality in students and they live as a group in the school. To elaborate , fully dressed up in schools eliminate the discrimination of the poor and rich students. Consequently, children cannot face distinguishing feelings that are related to their social status. They can enjoy and learn their education without any hesitation. For example, some students who belong to te poor families do not feel embarrassed in their school.

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