IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 492

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Students who finishes high school opt to work or travel for a year prior to starting university studies. This has been encouraged in some countrues. This has many advantages as well as disadvantages.

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In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays most of the world population is adopting western style fashion. The purpose for doing this is to make ourselves comfortable and that’s a good thing. However, on the other side there is a negative impact of this on our current and upcoming ,generation because we are losing our tradition and culture.

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Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think that changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

The pie charts below illustrate the mean percentage of nutrients which will be unhealthy if over consumes in typical meals of US citizens.

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Today more people than ever are travelling around the world. Some people believe that such travelling helps to broaden people’s minds, while others think it just confirms their prejudices.

Nowadays, travelling to many different countries is becoming more and more popular. It is possible to find flight tickets in very reasonable price, which makes more people able to travel regardless on their financial status. Many people think that going on trips to different places helps to extend people’s views on certain aspects. Nevertheless, others believe it just assure their tendentiousness.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

It is argued that the most effected way of increasing public health is rising the amount of sport facilities by some people. However, others think on the contrary way, that it would not give much impact, thus, it should be found other options as well. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion below too.

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it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. Tp what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children

There are many article and research papers we can found regarding this. My opinion is it is important to learn to the children regarding the difference between right and wrong at their childhood. But the punishment is not always necessary and as per the situation it may help them to learn.

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In some people’s houses there is not only one television in their home,with each family member even having their own TV.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

The advertising industry is one of the most important topics for producers. They insist on their products which are produced in a new way. Some of them lie in this way and this is not the right way of selling. Its cons are more than pros and I think it is a negative point for development.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Different people may have different choices when facing problems. Some people choose to accept situations they got and try to accept while others prefer to get through and make some changes. Everyone has the choice to decide for their own lives. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museum town hall and sporting facility is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that rather than reconstructing an old building that includes museums,town halls and sporting facilities,the government should invest in developing new public monuments.I completely agree with the notion which states that the Administration must invest in the renovation of the older public places.I would like to explicate both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People tend to view that only academic subjects are a key factor in a future career.However, others believe that students also should be provided both art and sports in order to have a greater physical and mental health.In this essay,I will discuss both views of this trend.

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Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong so that they can behave. Others say that teacher should only teach student academic subjects. Discuss both view with your own opinion?

Judge - 1 role model during growth 2 second important person

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a car?

Nowadays, the world has changed, and the auto has become an integral part of our lives. One of the main advantages is that owning a car gives the freedom of travelling. You can reach your destination wherever and whenever you want and you are not dependent on the schedule of public transportation. Also, it ensures to travel comfortably in many ways. In addition, a auto owner can carry heavy goods and items. Another advantage of a car is that it saves time and a car owner can quickly go to any destination where there is no possible public transport.

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Some people argue that it is the government's responsibility to transport children to school, while others believe parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some views, the government have to provide transportation for children to school. Other people think that this is parents' responsibility. This essay will discuss both sides of view to this question. In my perspective, the government should be responsible for this process, because it has more opportunities to guarantee safety for kids.

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In certain countries, unemployment is so high that some have suggested children should stop their education after primary school to learn skills necessary to join the workforce. Do you agree or disagree?

It considered that having a skill could be more helpful than a university degree regarding finding a job,especially with the high unemployment rates in the past few years.

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Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that listening to old people's thouughts and applying their advices is more worhty than getting it from young people. I couldn't agree more with their idea because I believe that old generation has a wide experience in life as they have lived longer.

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Since science and technology are becoming more and more important in modern society, schools should spend more time on teaching these subjects rather than on arts and humanities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Science and technology, in recent years, are becoming more and more essential. It is a tough table issue that which kind of subject should the campus spend more time on. I tend to agree that schools concentrate more on teaching science and technology rather than on arts and humanities.

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People sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason for this? What are the effects on them?

People are generally sleeping less compared to what they used to before. This phenomenon is caused by overwork and it results in general tiredness of the body for the majority of populations nowadays.

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With the vast increase in online resources today, libraries with print books are not a necessity for today’s society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Public libraries play an important role in the country's culture because they contain an easy and free source of information in all fields. However, Nowadays Computerized based resources play an increasingly important role in our life and some population thinks that libraries will lose their role. This essay will express that libraries have significant benefits that should be considered and some supporting examples.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Over the last decades, a system of values has completely changed. Namely, these days, some well-respected virtues from the past are worthless and others, more materialistic, characteristics started to matter. In this essay I will elaborate why I firmly believe that society today has destorted view of values.

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