IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 500

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing attention to the fact that youngsters be put under high pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. In fact, it is widely believe that the rising standard in education is the major issue which make students become more stressful. As far as I am concerned, there has been a highly problematic issue, and it raises the question in relation to its problems and potential solutions to deal with. Therefore, some main points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.

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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?

Nowadays, teenager crime have been increased and some claim that it is contributed to violence in televisions, movies and social medias. In my view, it may be one of the reasons, however, it is not the main cause of juvenile crime.

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The flow chart illustrates the stages of sugar making procedure. Overall, the process involves seven steps which can be grouped into two main phases: sugar canes collecting and input processing.

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

A common belief is that children of today’s society are facing huge academic pressures. Their competition is not with the children sitting next to them or in the next class. It is at national and international levels. Parents have high expectations for their child. They want them to excel in every field. Every parent wants their child to go to the best school of their city. These days, the school bag is heavier than the student himself. Moreover, considering the standards of education and competition today, after the school, they have to go to private coaching too. Thus they are left with no time to relax or engage in enjoyable outdoor activities.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions

Irrefutably, the rate of juvenile delinquencies is burgeoning in some part of the nations. In fact it is the result of many reasons which will be discussed in the latter paragraphs with some remedies of these problems.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task。Write about the following topic：Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed，rather than to work for a company or organisation。Why might this be the case？What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed？Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience。一Write at least 250 words。

It is true that people increasingly prefer having their ovwn business to being employees of enterprises or corporations in the present day。The possible reasons and negative consequences of this trend will be analyzed in the following paragraphs。This matter can be attributable to several factors。First of all，people are likely to aspire to work independently，which does not require them to abide byfcomply withte companies'rules。For instance，those who have other commitments，such as childcare，ca...

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in d past. what do u think is d reason behind this what are d effects on individuals and people around them.

sleep is essential for the body, and mind to function properly. In recent times,people sleep less than they use to in the past decades. This essay will be discussing the reasons for this and the effects on individuals and people around them.

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Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improvw this situation. Discuss both view and give our opinion.

Have you ever think about how you spend your free time and who you spend your free time with?

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Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Presidents, ministers, senators, representatives, stateswoman, statesman, politic, technocrats

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Some employees are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualification. Do you agree or dis-agree that social skills are as importat as good qualification for success in a job?

In companies, owners are showing more focus on social skills along with the qualification while hiring the employes. I completely agree with the statement that communication skills are a a must for an employee in order to reach to a a good position in the company. In this modern era, communication skills play the main role in the field of business (or) jobs. when you are going for a job interview an interviewer first looks for skills after that will see the education qualification. Firstly, if you are working in a company as an employee you must possess social skills it is a essential requirement. Because in office we need to deal with many people in different kinds of work. So in this ,regard good skills will help.

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Most people think that the truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?

Nowadays, there are a lot of news channels all around the world which assist people in being aware of events and incidents around them. But we should not be too reliant on news channels as to newspapers because they sometimes spread rumors for the benefit of a particular group.

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Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?

Many countries and regions around the world frequently experience a shortage of water resource, and this has become an alarming issue as the global water demand rises. While there are several causes of the increasing water consumption, nations and citizens should take certain steps to tackle this issue. The surge of worldwide water consumption can be explained in a number of reasons. Firstly, population explosion is the major contributor to the growing water use. This, in particular, is severe in countries which could not manage the birth rate such as Africa. Secondly, as the global population rises, industries and factories have expanded their business to meet the consumption demand, discharging more sewage to natural resources, and eventually endangering water reverses. For example, in many developing countries, small farms still pump unprocessed wastewater directly into lakes, rivers, or oceans, which contaminate water reservoirs used for water production. National a...

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Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Music suffered changes over the years and it´s been questioned if it has a negative or positive impact on the young. Not only modernity reflects the society we live in, a world controlled by technology, but also has an influence on the development of a person´s identity and character. Therefore some believe that this new style could have a negative impact while others observe it as a positive effect. It´s important to consider the two opinions in order to understand the profits and disadvantages.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

I am Aman Asati. I am writing you concerning about the job posting, in an Australian magazine, to live with your family for half year and take care of your six-year-old child.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this contemporary world,music have totally changed people's life.It is believed that music can play a significant role in gathering all kinds of individuals in terms of culture and age.I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Obesity was once considered a disease of adults; however, it is being increasingly common among children. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done to help children stay healthy?

Obesity is mostly portrayed as a disease that could happen mostly to adults but now it happens to children as well. There are some possible reasons for this phenomenon, for example, eating behaviour of fast food for the family with kids and less physical activity for children nowadays.

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Write about the following topic: In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a form of entertainment. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this whole wide world,people used to buy necessary products as per their purpose.Whereas,before few decades,as we all see a huge amount of modernization coming into the market humans buy stuff according to their mood as well as entertainment,they buy products when they feel of going to shopping.This development has advantages as well as disadvantages but we will focus on both of the factors in this essay.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans illustrate southwest airport now and after development in a year.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

With the rapid development of the food industry, many manufactured food and drink products which contain high level of sugar have being into people’s life. I do not believe that increasing the price of sugary products is an appropriate way to encourage people to have less sugar intake while some think it’s right because sugary products cause many healthy problems.

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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

Few topics are more important than learning children to speak a foreign language. However, the importance punishment of children always be controversial. Nowadays many people have an idea that their kids should increase their skills such as learn a foreign language expect their mother tongue before children start school. I can not be denied that. In this essay we will discuss a few reasons for my opinion in detail.

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