IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 501

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Write about the following topic: In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a form of entertainment. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this whole wide world,people used to buy necessary products as per their purpose.Whereas,before few decades,as we all see a huge amount of modernization coming into the market humans buy stuff according to their mood as well as entertainment,they buy products when they feel of going to shopping.This development has advantages as well as disadvantages but we will focus on both of the factors in this essay.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans illustrate southwest airport now and after development in a year.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

With the rapid development of the food industry, many manufactured food and drink products which contain high level of sugar have being into people’s life. I do not believe that increasing the price of sugary products is an appropriate way to encourage people to have less sugar intake while some think it’s right because sugary products cause many healthy problems.

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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

Few topics are more important than learning children to speak a foreign language. However, the importance punishment of children always be controversial. Nowadays many people have an idea that their kids should increase their skills such as learn a foreign language expect their mother tongue before children start school. I can not be denied that. In this essay we will discuss a few reasons for my opinion in detail.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There have appeared endless discussions over the application of computers in education. Whether using computers for teaching at schools is beneficial for students or it has more harmful influences on them is still a controversial question raised by different professors. Personally, though it is true that this has both advantages and disadvantages, however, I strongly believe that its positive points easily outweighs the drawbacks due to several reasons. First and foremost, what should be put in priority is the strengths of this means of education. It obviously provides the teachers with many conveniences in their operation as the computers connect directly to the Internet. They could use the proper teaching tools that help to explain to the students about the lecture more thoroughly at ease with the network connection. Moreover, as the era of technology continues to unfold, most of the industries start to involve the usage of computers ranging from white- collar work such ...

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lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause. what measures could be taken to overcome these problems.

It is Frue, water is basic of every living things. Without no one can Live in this these days there is need water earth planet. According to the major is that Shortage of fresh water and it is also de increasing this world. are uncountable day by day with this causes water. The Solutions of problem not easy Statement there reduce of fresh this major with the government way. but contribution of communities. and we Can Solve there are it According with this Statemen many causes why water is decreasing day by Lay. first reason is that why fresh The Polluation. If we See in Communities areas.

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Some people believe arts subjects such as literature and music have little importance in schools today. To what extent do you agree with this?

In this modern era , many parents are encouraging their children to learn science subjects like mathematics or physics rather than arts domain. Some people believe that arts majors are less important to study in schools .This essay will discuss more details about both benefits and drawbacks of studying arts majors.

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In many countries, it is common for people to consume fast food. However, some people believe that fast food has too much influence on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people opine that in countries it is common for people to consume food and some people believe that fast food has too much influence on our lifestyle and diet. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Music suffered changes over the years and it´s been questioned if it has a negative or positive impact on the young.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Nowadays people are more conscious about animal´s rights and wellbeing and many of them believe that zoos have no purpose in today´s world. It is often affirmed that zoos are meaningless to our society and it has been questioned whether they provide benefits to people and animals, or should be closed. Some people view zoos as cruel prisons for animals. Why is that?

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1. Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays we are exposed to many cultures and ways of living due to the growth of technology and globalization. Some people think that a person´s culture is strictly connected with the place they were born. Other´s believe it has a little impact.

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Is The murder of Dee Dee Blancharde a biased case?

In 2016 Gypsy Rose Blandcharde was sentenced to 10 years of jail time at Chillicothe Correctional Center in Missouri for second degree murder of her mother Claudine Dee Dee Blancharde. Gypsy has been said to have leukemia, asthma, vision and hearing impairment, muscular dystrophy, and seizures by her mother Dee Dee. She would be fed through a feeding tube and was given SEVERAL medications that she never needed. She had the mind of a 7 year old, never had friends or had any close interactions with kids her age. She lived with her mom, Dee Dee, who was mentally ill and a hoarder. Dee Dee had a mental illness, Munchausen syndrome by proxy, which made her fake Gypsy’s disorders in order to receive attention, money, and sympathy for living with and caring for a sick kid. Soon after they had moved into their new house in March 2008, Gypsy started connecting the dots and found out what her mother had been doing to her. She found out she could walk, wasn't allergic to sugar, and w...

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Firstly, studying the science of food has some advantages. It might improve students’ life skills. They can prepare food it is themselves also less dependent on their parents. Some of them may go to live alone to separate from their parent, so this cooking skill is very useful for them. And if you are small, you can help your parents by cooking with them. Having knowledge about food can assist us in many dangerous moments such as survival. For instance, when you are stuck in a forest and your emergency food is run out. At this moment, you have to cook something to eat, and this life skill that is the most important which is not in your notebook. Knowing about this plant can help you check if it’s toxic or eatable. So that, the science of food should be added as a subject in a school. Besides, learning about not only the science of food also many many things around our life can relax us from the stressful lesson in class.

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Today many parents force rhier children to study all kinds of courses in the early age . What are the reason behind this.? What effects do you think this practice would bring to gbs children?

My name is Shuning GUAN (Nina). I am writing this letter to support my application of the Master of Management -- Business Data Analytics program at University of Windsor for the fall of 2022. It is my intent to attend Odette School of Business, and University of Windsor is my first choice.

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Foad says that teaching adults is more fruitful than teaching kids in that it helps with your personal growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use personal experience and references to strengthen your arguments.

We all consider our teachers as our first role model in life, but when we decide to be a teacher there are plenty of options to consider in order to choose this job as our main career. We mostly start it by teaching young learners and as we get used to it, it seems difficult to look forward to teaching adults. Meanwhile, Some experts believe teaching adult is more beneficial that teaching kids. The main question here is that whether teaching adults would help you with your personal growth or not?

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more excercise and spend more time with their family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.What are the causes o this and what are some solutions

It is often argued that in the past, people were very happy and healthy in their lives and invest their time more in family and friends. However, nowadays they are isolated and suffer from heath causes. In this essay, I will explain the reasons and solutions to curb this problem in the coming paragraphs before reaching a solid conclusion. To start with, there are a plethora of reasons behind this situation. First of all, people are most isolated and busier in their life. In this modern era, all individuals invest their time to focus on their careers rather than spending time with their loved ones. So, in the end, they have left no one to share problems as a result of this , they fall into depressions. For example , in the UK, 50% of successful business people are in depression because of loneliness. The second reason is that human beings are living in the virtual world. People have been stuck with their social media. ...

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

English is a language which accounts for various usage in global citizens' life, from business to manufacturing. It is said that studying English in English-speaking countries is the best way. However, it is not the only method. In my personal view of point, both are acceptable arguments.

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Cinemas are good, others say wrong. Discuss both these views.

Therefore, from a career development perspec6ve, studying such set of courses provides one with an invaluable addi6on to a career and puts her/him in the forefront of the ﬁeld, paving the

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some people say that teaching adults is more fruitful than teaching kids in that it helps with your personal growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use personal experience and references to strengthen your arguments.

The first thing that I found is that One of the most proven differences between adult and young learner classes is “ class management”. Although kid’s classes seem to be more fun and kinesthetic, in adult classes you are not supposed to spend a considerable amount of time on explaining about the classroom rules. Meanwhile you have more time to teach and assign interesting tasks. This might help you not to get work burn-out which is a great concern for many of us since after a while we migh...

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Ahat are the reasons of increasing pollution and how can be solved it ?

Rising in pollution level has become great concern for every country.There are different reasns responsible for this issue, however it can be tackled with the assistance of government and people.

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