IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 597

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has access to the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful to the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree with the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weigh only the present facts and evidence as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to ,me it is only fair to exclude the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviours should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The probable growth of production across the world has been demonstrated by the given pie diagrams, which is determined by sector.

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some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

I personally agree with those who claim that the present days are the best period in the history of mankind to be living.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Obesity has become a growing & major concern in all countries. Poor lifestyle habits such as consuming junk & fried foods, lack of exercise are some of the prominent reasons for the growth in number of obese people in society.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than the world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some advocate the view that young children should be encouraged to have a deeper understanding about local history than global history. I totally agree with this opinion and will outline the reasons below.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

In the cutting-edge era, technology has become a essential part of everybody life. In past people were doing work manually and it is also confused lot of time. I believe that, the advantages of appliances are more comparison to drawbacks and I will also explain both sides of this notion.

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More and more plastic is polluting the oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve this problem?

From Tierra del Fuego in Argentina to the Icelandic peninsula, all countries around the world are facing now a terrible problem. It looks like we have not been too cautious about the way in which we have been treating our planet, and now it might be too late to reverse all the damage we have inflicted on it.

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in recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occuring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative ?

Family is a mixture of emotions and blood relations.Every one has a mental and physical bond with respect to their family.Over the recent years the structure has changed.A lot of families have evolved depending upon the count of the people in that family like nuclear family,extended family etc.The changes that are brought by changing of compsition of the family and their negative impacts will be discussed in this essay.

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government must control the amount of violence in the films to control crimes in the society.Do you agree or dis agree

A crime involves a lot of violence and the society is affected by the crime.Now-a-days we come across such situations where a lot of crimes are done based on the idea present in a movie.Some of these crimes are terrorizing.To what extent the amount of violence in films affects the crimes in the society is discussed in this essay and the necessary actions to be taken by the government.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In today's world, the use of technology is ever increasing. People in all over the world share the same information. I totally agree that contemporary technology is creating a single world culture. It is now much easier to communicate with people who are far away. Modern transportation, TV and also the internet are bringing to people closer together.

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Some people believe that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It has now become a debatable context as to whether environment concerns should be addressed on a national scale or it is better to tackle them on an international level. Some people think that different countries have different issues related with invironment, so it is a national matter; while in my opinion, it is a severe issue that can only be resolved with a global collaboration.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plan illustrates the changes made in Grange Park from its establishment time in 1920 to the present.

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Each year, the crime rate increases, what are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

The number of people living in the world, without doubt, is increasing and this results in many problems. One of the major problems is an increase in criminal activities . This essay will first discuss the main reasons behind this issue and then suggest some viable suggestions that can halt this growth.

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Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the recent years, it is commonly believed that the family life is being harmed by the high speed and the pressure of contemporary lifestyles. This essay strongly agrees with that statement. I believe that people are clearly having little quality time for family and they usually have arguments with each other.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contributes to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

It sometimes thought that the working time of adult accounts for most of their life, job satisfaction plays an important role in personal wellbeing elements.

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Some people believe that radio is the best source to get news while other think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views.

In this digital era, individuals are highly curious to know what is happening around the world.A section of society asserts that, wireless transmission device is the good source to aware about surroundings whereas, a few people says to understand the news deeply audio visual aid is required. This essay will analyse both the ideologies in the subsequent paragraphs with my opinion.

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Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teaching students with disabilities or mental issues is more difficult and even more important to support and develop. Which viewpoint do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?

In a conventional society, it is usually common to see people prioritizing their healthy children and providing them the best education. After their formal education, they are usually seen enrolling them for extra tution support. Although, opting for extra support in education is common , I think priortizing the specially-abled children for those classes is more important as they take time to process and learn when compared to the normal children. Parents & the management of educations institutions must take special care and efforts to make sure that all students who need more help are definitely given admissions for the tution.