IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 643

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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‘Is it ethically acceptable for this couple to choose to implant a ‘deaf’ embryo?’

In my ,opinion I agree with the law which states that an embryo that is created through IVF shouldn’t be implanted if they are identified as having any gene, chromosomal or mitochondrial abnormality. Linking it to the above case study, embryos recognised as having hearing abnormality shouldn’t be implanted.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting.

The charts below illustrate the proportion of the population ages in Yemen and Italy in 2000, and these portions of the population ages were also predicted for the year of 2050. The data is calibrated in percentage.

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Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given image illustrates the use of solar panels in order to generate electricity for homes.

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In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other age groups. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to solve it?

Increase in the rate of bad deeds among youths are steadily increasing across the globe. This essay will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs that how over-independence and getting huge pocket money are pushing them towards danger. Moreover, it will also suggest how the parents & adaptation of the counselling process could help in the resolution of this problem.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It is often believed that children raised by low and middle income parents are well prepared to handle issues of adult life compared to those from high social status. I disagree with this thought, because it is my belief that how one solves problems associated with adulthood depends on how they are groomed by their guidians.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's time, there is a belief that individuals are provided with a range of choices in various fields of life. I agree with this statement. To explain it further, I will be expanding on my point of view as well as opposite perspectives in this essay.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that people should first of all think about the amount of salary while deciding their future career or job. In my opinion, money should play only the second role when it comes to the profession. I think that no matter how much cash you have, it never makes you happy in life if you do not like the field you do.

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Some people say that children no longer need to go to school since everything can be learned online. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the world has been faced with a lots of issues caused by Covid-19. Everything has to get new plans to deal with it, including learning environment. Almost school in the world allow student to learn online at home. Distance learning is convenient but also has many drawbacks.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their to the countryside do you agree or disagree.

In my opinion, traffic and house realted issues could be resolved by shifting large companies and factories to the countryside. I completely agree with this statement as by doing so, comparatively it will be easier to control the increasing in a crowd level.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

In the last few years, parents thinking about providing their pupils good education in the schools has been affected really adversely. That’s why they started educating them in their homes rather than sending them to literacy centres. This essay will outline what has insisted the parents to provide homeschooling instead of making their child to learn in schools and explain the advantages of studying at home.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news.However,others believe that they can get news better through another media

Some people assume that newspaper is the best way for getting news,while others think that there are many other best ways to get the news.

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Many people are doing their shopping online on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping

With the development of technology, most people from all over the world can buy and purchase things through the internet no matter how far the products are. Many famous online market brands such as Amazon, Ebay, Taobao ,etc. Being able to ship overseas is the reason why people prefer to choose shopping online rather than shopping offline. However, there are also some drawbacks of that as well. And here are the pros and cons of doing purchase online. Firstly, about the benefits, it is a lot ...

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Many people are doing their shopping online on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.

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Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Several cities are restricting the movement of privately owned vehicles, and instead promoting citizens to use bicycles and buses. Although this shift will help to drop the pollution level as well as there will be an increase in physical movement, it will lead to over-crowding of public transport & elderly people might sometimes find it challenging. This essay will discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs why this is a beneficial approach.

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

A plenty of individuals are staying away from their locality as they are commuting towards the developed areas in a state for either educational or job purposes.This situation is an outcome of the lack of learning facilities and occupational opportunities in the villages.The aim of this essay is to elaborate on the reasons behind this scenario and to compare the pros and cons of this scene.

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Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

There are discussions whether children should stay with their family for a long time or they should leave as soon as they grow up. Rents and house prices have being constantly increasing, which forces people in their 30’s to stay at their family homes for longer. In this essay, I will discuss some advantages and drawbacks of this situation and why, even though, there are pros and cons, in my opinion is more beneficial to stay at home until you become a full adult.

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We should increase the use of local resources to protect our environment. To what extent do you agree or degree.

It is a matter of debate that human beings should use natural resources in order to preserve the environment. Personally I support the statement that mankind should make some efforts to maintain surroundings. The following paragraphs will clarify my ideas along with relevant examples.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the recent times, adolescents are more keen on talking on people online rather than meeting in person. This essay intends to delve into the reasons behind this increasing trend nad suggest some possible solutions to encourage teens to spend more time with each other by meeting them.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Population has being increasing over the years, and with that, there is an urge to create more space to accommodate the bolster in family numbers. The option of constructing in the countryside sounds as a good idea, however, it is not the only option. In this essay I will go through some pros and cons, to demonstrate why it is not ideal.

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Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A 'CELEBRATION' IS A FANCY WORD THAT CATCHES EYES OF EVERYONE, OLD AND YOUNG ALIKE. IT GIVES US A CHANCE TO MEET OUR NEAR AND DEAR ONES. THE MEMORIES MADE IN SUCH BEAUTIFUL OCCASIONS LAST A LIFETIME. MOST WOULD AGREE TO THE FACT THAT WEDDINGS AND OTHER CELEBRATIONS HAVE NOW BECOME A HUGE BUSINESS ACROSS THE GLOBE WHERE PEOPLE ARE WILLING TO SPEND A FORTUNE FOR THEM. THE LAVISH SPENDS FOR WEDDINGS ARE NOW SEEN AS STATUS SYMBOLS BY MANY.

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