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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this ?.

In some regions of America, a curfew seems to be imposed although it has not beenimposed in Japan for many years. There should be from background to impose acurfew and this essay will discuss the pros and cons of it.  First of all, curfewsmay not be imposed in safe areas. Safe areas mean that the crime rate is low.If teenagers go out at night in an area in which there are many crimes happening,they would be involved and be in danger. Because they do not know how to protectthemselves from th...
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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this ?.

In some regions of America, a curfew seems to be imposed although it has not been imposed in Japan for many years. There should be from background to impose a curfew and this essay will discuss pros and cons about it.
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Today using energy from natural resources has become more frequent in both first world countries, as well as in third world countries. Some people opine that the consequences of this trend will be dangerous for energy security others believe that this development is good for the environment and also cheaper than other sources of energy. Although the former opinion has some strength in it, in my opinion, this development is very positive.

Some people believe that using natural energy for domestic purposes is very detrimental to the security of natural resources. The way we are using natural resources, a time will come when this resource will start decreasing because of its usage. This will result in environmental changes, and its consequences will be quite devastating for the earth. For example, according to the report published by AeroZip, the resources of water are decreasing, and in the year 2050, we will lose 30% of its resources.
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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

I consider that, as ahuman right, health services shoud be available universally and free. In Brazil, for example, health care is a constitutional right for every person and it is a State's responsibility to provide health services through economical and social policies that promote preventive care, protection and rehabilitation. However, that is not a reality in many regions of the country and even in different parts of the same city.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When in comes to the environment, each and every person living in it contributes to it. Living in a civilized society, one has to adhere to certian morals, values and laws in order for a society to function normally. That means one should dispose off his/her own trash regularly and also segregate individual components into recyclables and non-recyclables. But beyond that it also means one should be mindful of others' needs and look out for one another while taking others' perspective into account. For example, if an individual's neighbour has certain disabilities, instead of dismissing them, one should be proportionately mindful of them and be helpful. One can only grow when there is mutual trust and respect with one another. While every individual has to play his own part in society and imporving his/her own environment, an individual can only do so much. Governments on the other hand, have a lot more power.
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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

Nowadays, world everything has become more easier than they were in the past. The number of people who are suffering from obesity speedly increases all around the world. There are many reasons could be put but most striking of them are technology developments and unhealthy diet. Furthermore, the effective solutions are considered as developing the sports at the schools and trying to consume healthy foods.
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been observed that agriculture sector is being neglected by the oung generation, even though GDP of the many nations primarily depend upon it. The main reasons for this are the insecurity and less profit margin. Fortunately, it can be resolved by making this profession more attractive with the help of governing authorities.
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Do you Agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money ? Give reasons for your answer

There is currently a contentious argument over whether well-known artists should earn less money than it uses to be or not. I agree with the opinion since all the money spent should be used to come forward for society's issues or even because it can be a bad influence on common workers.
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Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle with it?

Undeniably, entertainment today's generation is more enticing than before, it could make the kids stay longer sitting then watch, than going outside to play. In this situation,we will discuss what is the cause of this.
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Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree?

With the development of urbanliazation,the living spaces and living standards for wild animals are decreasing sharply.In order to protect the living environment of wild animals and make their living standards more suitable,concerning experts and researchers have been making lots of efforts.In the meanwhile,a bulk of money being spent on it was neccessary.However, another effect that urbanliazation brings about is population increasing,the vital issue we are facing with.Quite many people urge that we should spend more money on control the increase of population rather than helping wild animals.I am fully disagreeable with that kind of opinion.
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Some people say that students should be given more homework.Others say that children should be free to enjoy their youth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that students should be given more homework.Others say that children should be free to enjoy their youth. The discussion of this topic has revolved since time immemorial .
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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, soft skills always be noticed by many schools because of it’s conveniences. In my opinion, I choose other side. Schools should concentrate on curriculums, student could study skill when they have been with their family and friends.
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Junk/Street Food is the most affordable meal for the working class. But health problems due to rampant and uncontrolled consumption are being compounded. It has therefore become imperative for governments to impose a higher tax on them. To what extent do you agree to this arrangement by the government? Give your opinion.

Street food is very popular amongst working professionals, but heavy consumption of junk food can also lead to several health hazards. Hence, it is argued that the government should introduce higher tax reforms to control its consumption. I do not agree with this fact and believe authorities should not interfere in this matter. This essay will discuss relevant reason to support my opinion. Firstly, professionals usually have a very hectic life and therefore, street food is a convenient option that compliments their busy schedules. Furthermore, it is extremely convenient for them because it is time saving and affordable. Moreover, food preference is a personal choice and adults understand the repercussions of unhealthy eating habits. Hence, it is not fair that state authorities impose heavy duty taxes on street food vendors. For instance, increasing taxes on local food stalls will lead to a price rise not making it an affordable option for middle class workers. Secondly, ...
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Some people think it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It has been argued that the public need to wear a uniform at their work. I totally agree with this statement as it gives quality and respect to all employers equally.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Stating any issue exactly is a significant factor to reflect any mental connection with each other. From my perspective, this proposition is completely true.
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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

The given diagram illustrates the suggestions for wave-energy machine locations and demonstrates how the electricity is generated using it.
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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, education often accompanies with electronics devices, and it does not forbid all kinds of violence. Thus, some people believe it exerts a deleterious effect on children’s behaviours. From my perspective, I think there is not only detrimental impacts, but also some educational meanings. The following essay will prove my statement by discussing a negative influence on children’s mental health and behaviour and a positive educational result.
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Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?

It is widely considered that committing traffic offences should be highly punishable and people violating road transportation rules should be penalized. In the discussion further, I would like to highlight my agreement with this decision of discipling individuals on transportation rules. I would also like to throw some light on how lenient ordinance could lead to road accidents in our day-to-day life. The main reasons for traffic offences being careless ,low attention span and lack of time. In recent days, people are not paying attention to the highway mandate. Statistics show that, In almost all the cities, the mishaps on the road are caused due to the disobedience of traffic code. For instance, In my country, India, which comparatively does not have a firm set of the directive on the carriage by road, accidents have been quite common. The newspapers are flooded with information about motor accidents as well as the "Hit and run" cases. There is no strict action taken in mos...
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some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common in the society that people do the judgment about an individual’s culture and personality from his or her appearance. Due to some of the psychological facts and despite of the brain complexity, some of the subjective matters would be appeared in a person’s choice of clothes. It is agreed that the judgement would be accurate most of the times. As the case of study it would be useful to consider both neat and clean garnet and colorful appearance.
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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Many people believe that there is inappropriate and unprofessional advertisements used recently in society. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this approach, nowadays, some methods of advertising become unacceptable, especially when geared toward children.
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