IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 694

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems do this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Big organisations have huge marketing and promotion budgets which helps them acquire a lot of customers for their products. This causes a lot of trouble for local businesses. This essay is going to present the issues that the local companies face and how could we motivate people to buy from these places.

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Even though globalization has some very positive effects, we cant forget its negative effects. What are the disadvantages and advantages of globalization?

Some people believe that globalization affects to the worldwide economics only in beneficial way, and its drawbacks are infinitesimal and we should forget about them. I totally disagree with that, and in this essay I would like to recount why.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

With the changing times, travelling has become an inevitable part of human life. People are becoming more travel enthusiast to run away from their busy and hectic routine life. But recent trend suggests that number of people going on holiday to abroad is increasing and in future this trend will extend to next level.

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With the pressure of today's people to succeed academically, some people believe that non academic subjects at school(like physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is an essential part of everyone's life, it can be academic and non-academic. Some people think that regular subjects are more useful in today's era. However, some populace believes that physical education is included with main subjects as well. I strongly agree with the latter statement and will discuss my points in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree?

Juvenile students could have a dire effect the behaviour of their classmates. To prevent this, a proferred solution would be the separation of these students from other stiduents with more positive attitudes.

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People today can use internet to learn the life and culture of another country, so it cannot be necessary to travel to other country. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

With the growth of cyberspace, it has become possible for a person from any part of the world to watch and learn about the traditions and lifestyle of any other place far away without actually travelling to the place. However, I completely disagree with the statement as in my opinion travelling serves a completely different purpose.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the modern era, pupil mostly spenting a time on their phones or television to watch any movies or web series but in some extent that movies creating a bad impact on younger generation. That is the reason that, some people wants to the government should control on the violence movies or television series to stop the crime in world. It will be discussing in next paragraphs.

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To succeed in business, one needs to know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that having mathematical skill is necessary in enterprise. I partly agree with this statement.

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People are usually confronted with huge amount of advertisements in their life from competing companies. How do you think the advertising industry influences people? And what measures can be adopted to counter the risks of disastrous effects?

It is known that individuals are burdened by numerous promotions on platforms such as the television, telephone applications and social media. This has come as a result of competition for customers from a number of enterprises like KFC ( Kentucky Fried Chicken), Jumia online shopping and Cafe javas. In my perspective, I believe that these adverts have a negative impact on people. In this article, I intend to elaborate these demerits and outline a few solutions to counteract these dangerous effects.

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People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

Many people attend institute or college after their high school years for several reasons which they choose by themself. I believe that the most common reason why people attend institute or college to have new experiences in life , to prepare for a development, and to develop the ability of their personality.

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Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.

Police, as protectors of his people, should do what they can, and use whatever means they can, to keep people out of harm‘s way. But in the UK, police are on duty without carrying a gun, which is a very bad idea. They are handicapping themselves.

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Some people believe that residents of rural areas face lesser health complications than those living in the urban areas. Do you agree with this statement?

Few individuals think people living the village areas have better health than people residing in cities. I completely agree to the above statement on staying in the rural places are better than urban. I will be highlighting the points to support my stand.

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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and would cause a loss of culture.

English has been used widely in different parts of the world as lingua franca and has accepted as the official language by multitude of countries. There are a group pf people who believe that having such language is essential to minimize and possibly eradicate the language barrier among people from all over the world, while other oppose this notion as they think that this action results in diminish of culture and identity of people from diverse backgrounds. This essay will illustrate my opinion of favouring the cruciality of having one language as formal language for the world.

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Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

Wildlife is very important for our ecological system, but some are the extent of getting extinct. Firstly, discussing the advantages of building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species followed by it's disadvantages.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, museums are playing an effective part in presenting history to the people. In our society, there are various museums who charge from public but, on the other hand, few are totally free for individuals. I think, charging people for entrance to museums is not righteousness with people. However, personally, I believe that disadvantages of charging are more than advantages. This essay will provide reasons.

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I am writing to express my interest in the position of Civil Engineer, and have enclosed my CV for your reference.

I was offered the role of a Junior Engineer in a Private Consultancy Firm, where I worked for more than a year in various projects in the areas of Estimation, Drafting and Site supervision with the help of the technical software skills in AutoCAD, REVIT, STAAD.PRO and Microsoft Excel.

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schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through the Inteenet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The approaches of education in traditional schools are trending to disadvantages.More and more people choose to stay at home and learn from Internet.This is possibly a viable method but I don’t agree that is the best way to get knowledge.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Although , Mankind believed that the early foot on the moon was an achievement to Mankind. I support this statement to a large extend for some reasons. My position is argued further with the explanation. Out of all the bases, the foremost one was the immense fortune of Mankind which brings endless opportunities to explore. To elaborate, It brings hope of a new place to colonise and expand. Considering the population of he the world the area is not enough to accommodate. Nevertheless, the first move towards the neighbour planet gives us also an opportunity to meet the extraterrestrial people if they exist. Furthermore By extending our boundaries to step forward, it brings the inhabitants location to learn and diversify by experimenting and nurturing in a better way. Additionally , I believe in case of doms day or nuclear war the first shelter to the human species would be non-other than the moon .This is because of day-by-day conflicts between first world cou...

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In the last century, The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, some people think it has made little difference in most people’s daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Art is is very important to the country.it should be protected and funded by the Government.To what extend do you agree or did agree?

Craft is an integral part of our society.In order to protect profession, the Government should support the artist to achieve their goals.I agree the statement that , all types of art forms should be protected and an inventor should pay some amount as a reward.

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