IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 692

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Lately, rapid rise in abortion cases has bothered majority of the people and few people thinks that miscarriage should be legalized but some of them are opposing this notion. In this essay I will be presenting both the views and conclude it accordingly.

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Legal action against ‘false, confusing,’ social media posts about govt, law enforcers: home ministry

The Ministry of Home Affairs today issued a statement forbidding citizens, both at home and abroad, from spreading "false, fabricated, confusing, and inciting statements about the government, military officials, police officers, and members of different law enforcing agencies" on social media.

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Public transports in many countries have improved. People should use public transport to support pollution control initiatives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

The public transportation system of the 20th century is more rigid and safe as compare to past decades and still many countries trying to improve this more. In this essay we will discuss the various benefits of using public transport on our environments and how this will help us in reducing pollution.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

We are living in an era where internet is an essential part of life and online purchasing of goods and commodities is now normal way of of life for people. There are certainly some advantages as well as disadvantages of it but in my opinion, the disadvantages are not that significant to outweigh the advantages of the said issue. I will be tackling my position in this essay.

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Lettering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with some people think that steeper fines is a best way to deal with this problem to what extent do you agree

The two pie charts reveal, the consumption of energy in an average Australian house and the effects of greenhouse gas emissions by this energy usage.

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All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a company, everybody goes to work at the same moment and leaves the work nearly at the same time. Working hours of the employees are the same and effort that is spent nearly the same. If all the employees spend the same time at the office and spent nearly the same efford then why would the number of vacations differ? In a fair working enviroment, number of vacations should be the same for all employees.

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Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, studies are so important that people can easly know about the present world. Without studies the studies nobody can find a job but some pupil thinks universities are better than to learn car mechanic or buliders job. I am explaning both of the point of view with my opinion.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

A drastic increase in the number of individuals who do not get enough time to peform some exercise due to their workaholic schedule has sparked the controversy about its impact on their health. I can attrubute this issue to a number of factors. In this essay, I will present an overview of these reasons and suggest potential solutions.

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Some people believe that school children should be asked to work individually in class. Others believe that working in small groups is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

That every student in school should carry out his daily work by himself without depending on others and avoid working in groups is a subject which provokes enthusiasm as well as stark opposition, and at times the two become somewhat blurred. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate, which we will discuss here.

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Some people believe that the fittest and strongest players and teams are always successful. While others believe that success depends on mental ability. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is believed by few people that the healthiest and strongest atheletes and sporting teams always taste success whereas on the contrary, few also believe that success depends on mental ability of tue athelete and the team members. This essay shall discuss both the above mentioned views and I will put forth my opinion at the end of the essay.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Educated people are future of every country. Nowadays study abroad is a common phenomenon everywhere in the world. Students from various countries travel around the world for a study. It has some advantages and drawbacks.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer

Sleep is a mandatory requirement in our lives to stay healthy. Almost all creatures, on earth including humans need to sleep. Our whole body functions depend upon a good night sleep. Unfortunately, in today world, due to the technology and work stress a lot people are not getting proper sleep. This causes very severe health issues and in some cases they will be life-threatening. This essay will discuss the problems that cause lack of sleep and what we can do to avoid them.

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Some argue that what most impacts a child’s future life is their experiences before starting school while others think experiences as a teenager are more influential. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

People have different views about the ages of most implications for a child’s development in the long run. While a successful life of a human is a lifelong process of physical, behavioural, cognitive, and emotional growth, I am also convinced that from early childhood to adolescence is a crucial time where development changes are happening that can have profound and lasting consequences for a child’s future.

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Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many successful nations lifted their country's economy by keeping in mind the certain environmental factors, while other conflicts that these are the two separate things which are impossible to resolve at a time. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and therefore will give my opinion.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Certainly, shopping are penetrating into our daily life and we can see them everywhere. People have a myriad of views about shopping as they can affect us both positively and negatively without our notice. Although there are advantages of shopping, they are outweighed by the disadvantages.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

More and more individuals believe that advertisement promotes people to spend money on those substances which we actually are not necessary in our daily lives. However, other people believe that advertisting lists out the innovative and useful characteristics of those new products which intend to enhance our quality of lives. In this essay, personally I would agree that advertisement brings more benefits than drawbacks in our daily lives.

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Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today’s world has reached the pinnacle of development. This generation is enjoying utmost comfortable life due to advanced technology. However, people have started exploiting nature with the extensive use of modern technology and it is hampering the environment adversely. Thus, I strongly believe that most people do not care enough about the environmental issue.

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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

According to the survey, the wide variety of animal species found todayare very low when compared with the ancient times. Studies state that only one fourth of the wild animals are present in the whole world which are available in the forests and muezium. Protecting the animals is our responsibility and one most act accordingly for it.

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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at schools others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time .Dissuse both views and give your opinion.

In recent decades, the world has become more connected due to advancement in communication technology. Some educationist has put their proposal to take international news as a subject in schools.However , others consider it an unfruitful action.This essay will not only highlighted while concluding this. Commencing with , there are myraid benefits of taking world news as a subject in schools. One of them is improvement of their general knowledge. In order to get information at global level when students take world news as mandatory subject, it not only boost their knowledge but also give them significant details about whole earth. Apart from this, although , understanding of international news has been seen difficult for young minds , it is an encouraging factor which would be inspired to youth and they take parts in global competition. For instance, sports news, until they learn these news in details they will not broden their horizon. On the other hand , some drawbacks o...

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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at schools others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time .Dissuse both views and give your opinion.

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