IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 73

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to shared freely.

Some people believes that sharing information is benefical to humans. Other believe that they should pay fee for reach the information because they may be too valuable. I agrre that sharing is helpful attidtude and. academical resourches are key to human development. However, this essay explains the both side of the argument.

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school children are becoming far too dependent on computers. this is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. teacher need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all cost and go back to teaching basic study skills. do you agree or disagree?

School teens dependent on using computers alot and that may affect alot of skills such as rading and writing so teachers need to stop using computers and go back to teach the basic skills of studying.Well,there are people who agree and others who disagree with this statement.

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Some people say that children should start learning a foreign languathge when they are 7 years old, but other believe that they should start when they are 18 years old. discuss both views and write your own opinion.

There are number of factors considering children to start studying foreign language. While some people agree that it should be taught when they are adult around 18 years old, I side with those who feel that they should commit to learn when they are 7.

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

Many family believe that having lots of money will give you the chance to help poor family.In my view being rich is not everything or not a reason to be able to do good things.However, in this essay, I will be explaining. Why I disagree with this opinion.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some believe that teenagers have happiest period of life while others state that adulthood brings more happiness, despite of greater responsibilities. Less responsibilities in teenage years and freedom of choice in adult years can explains these statements and my opinion is that, adulthood brings more happiness as you have more control in life.

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More and more students choose to move to other countries to have higher education. Do you think the benefits of going abroad outweight its problems?

A lot of students are choosing to study abroad and the number of students keeps increasing this does not happen with no reason. These days students are getting more intelligent, they make decisions with several reasons and they consider a lot of factors. If the students make decision to study abroad it would mean that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

It's important, however, to recognize potential downsides such as the risk of parents doing too much of the work, thus hindering the child's ability to learn autonomouslyIt's important, however, to recognize potential downsides such as the risk of parents doing too much of the work, thus hindering the child's ability to learn autonomouslyIt's important, however, to recognize potential downsides such as the risk of parents doing too much of the work, thus hindering the child's ability to learn autonomouslyIt's important, however, to recognize potential downsides such as the risk of parents doing too much of the work, thus hindering the child's ability to learn autonomouslyIt's important, however, to recognize potential downsides such as the risk of parents doing too much of the work, thus hindering the child's ability to learn autonomouslyIt's important, however, to recognize potential downsides such as the risk of parents doing too much of the work, thus hindering the child's abilit...

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The most important aim of science should be to improve the people's lives . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days , science has become a crucial segment of our lives . Some people assume that the core objective of technology should be to better the individual's lives . I totally agree with this idea and In this essay , I will support my opinion with examples .

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The most important aim of science should be to improve the people's lives . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days , science has become a crucial segment of our lives. Some people assume that the core objective of science should be to better the human's lives . I totally agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

people fell protoect is very important resones for their lives ,However. ther are alot countries which is losse this thing even thought the of governments efforts ,this problem has some resones behind it in my essay i will explore more to discuss it and in i would suggest some solutions .

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In my place, a new home are needed, but only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build a new home there. What is your opinion?

Accoding to my knowledge, I do agree to build home in countryside. I am living in surburb, but I feel like air pollution is serious. Oh countryside is a good place but not much space to be taken is fine for me. Accoding to my knowledge, I do agree to build home in countryside. I am living in surburb, but I feel like air pollution is serious. Oh countryside is a good place but not much space to be taken is fine for me. Accoding to my knowledge, I do agree to build home in countryside. I am living in surburb, but I feel like air pollution is serious. Oh countryside is a good place but not much space to be taken is fine for me. Accoding to my knowledge, I do agree to build home in countryside. I am living in surburb, but I feel like air pollution is serious. Oh countryside is a good place but not much space to be taken is fine for me. Accoding to my knowledge, I do agree to build home in countryside. I am living in surburb, but I feel like air pollution is serious. Oh countryside is a ...

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

In some nations, after post-high school graduation, young adults are encouraged to take a gap year to work or travel before starting their colleges. This essay examines the advantages and disadvantages for young adults who decide to take a year off before starting university education.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate information about the development of the harbor over a 20-year period from 2000 to 2024.

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Band-9 Samples: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer Say how you feel about his performance Give detail of your musical activities xplain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

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Topic: some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the children of having a large number of toys?

Toys have become a source of entertainment for children, and parents love to buy gifts for their kids, especially toys. While some people believe this is beneficial, I think there are also some drawbacks.

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The barchart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the duration of local, national and international and mobile calls that are taken in Australia within 2001 to 2008.

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In many countries it is common for families to own and run their own business. Some people think this is the best way to run a business, while others considered this a potential source of problems. Discuss both sides and Give your opinion.

It common in many countries sharing the own buusiness with families is the best way to run a business while another people considered this a source of potential problems .In my opinion it is a good run in a busuness to start withe suport.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, an increasing number of people are going to study for their degrees, while more and more people argue that they should be energized to do vocational traing due to the lack of qualified laborers: electricians and plumbers. I completely disagree with this statement.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Getting high salary to make your loved ones become wealthy and healthy is high listed in our life competition in 21st century. One says just being with them who is working is factor of happiness, while other thinks everything is based on money.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plans and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

It would not be deniable that human interventions have a bad effects on environment and climate all over the world. While some crowds claimed that these activities would not be altered, I agree with those who believe that some approaches should be implemented to help animals and plants.

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