IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 77

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Band 6+: At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays in some countries, the population includes a majority of young adults, compared with a number of older people. In my opinion, I consider that a bigger number of young adults can bring about more advantages for a country compared to any problems they might bring.

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Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some humans believe that more attention and too many opportunities are given in the protection of wildlife.Nevertheless,individuals can give them more chances for creatures.Firstly,this essay will suggest people care about wild animals and birds,besides,they do not kill or they do not use them for commodities.Secondly,the population who are interrupted by nature or wildlife system,maybe,it is causing the bad conditions.

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Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

To begin with this very essential to our young generation is to be able to considered their likely job. I totally agree with this statement. Some people having problem with their arduous work. It leads to stress and suffering. They tend to success. Down below I will describe about this situations.

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parents should spend more time with their children by helping them doing their assignment. agree or disagree?

Many believe doing children's homework together with parents is solely way to have better bond between them. I highly disagree with this notion, spending time by assisting them working on their homework is not the only way to get better relationship between guardians and kids.

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some people believe goverments should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads are the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traffic congestion is a great concern somes cities around the world. While some individual opine on constructing train and underground rail , other argu that more larger streets one of the best ways to control traffic system. This essay will discuss how metro train is so important and why more broader roads are suitable way.

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The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. To what extent do you agree

It is fact that global warming is a threathing issue around the world. But this is not a best solution for the authority should minimise money on local environmental problems besides increasing funds for preventing global warming issue. I totally disagree with this statement because these

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More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?

Nowadays, many people believe that the meals which cooked by themselve are health and cheap, but they still choose buy meals from restaurants or venders. I will discuss some reasons and solusion below.

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People who have original ideas provide must greater value to socity than the once who copy others do you agree or disagree.

It is believed that people who has original ideas should be recoganised than the personnel who copied others creativity. I completely agree with this view as ample reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay will delve into my viewpoints with relevant illustrations.

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It is predicted that robotsare going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

In my opinion, robots will be useful in the future therefore they will take the place of humans. I am also convinced that it could be positive and firmly negative.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Eventhough, the rich nations provide financial funding to poorer nations, it doesn't resolve their poverty issues.This essay strongly agrees with that statement because governments of poor countries misuse the financial aid for their own agenda, and undeveloped nations lack required knowledge to take appropriate measures which can lead to their economic development.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

These days, the advancement of technology contributes to the change of how people interact with each other. These changes can be seen in many forms and I completely believe that they move towards a better improvement.

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Some people think that it's important to spend a lot of money on family celebration (e.g. weddings, birthdays). But some people say that expensive celebrations are a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In the past and nowadays many people spend a huge of money to celebrate a relaxing day. It is bring about working hard. By all means, every country has this type of people. Even though some people think that is a to give a thrill

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In many countries, it is common for families to own and run their own businesses. Some people think this is the best way to run a business, while others consider this a potential source of problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Globally, there is a constant debate whether it is more beneficial for relatives to own and operate their business. In this essay, we will discuss the two opinions before closing with my own point of view.

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Some say the best way to deal with public health issues is to invest in developing new medicines. others say that a better way is to promote a healthy lifestyle. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that the optimal way to treat health conditions of people is by investing in new medications, while argue that promoting a healthy practices is a better approach. This essay will discuss how new drugs can help in treating untreatable diseases and why I think that a healthy lifestyle is a better approach in improving the overall wellness of people.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In these time, becoming increasingly free and paid museums. I reckon, it is more useful I mean benefits for government. It is too much advantage to community's pocket. For example when people go to the museums and all staff request few cash for access to museum. So, that situation more beneficial for community.

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The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

All animals are the living creatures and they have emotions like a human beings . Being a living thing they have right to live in their homes called jungle and no individual has privilege to kept them in the cages . I agree that zoos should be banned for the welfare of animals.

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Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

there is a school of thought that famous people can attract public attention to problema, while others opine that their involvement may undermine the gravity of these issue. This essay will shed light on both viewpoints.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

In recent years everyone try to find and work very well paid job with minimum working hours, which is almost impossible. People try to reach a balance between their work and social lifestyle, but only few of them are able to manage work and social life. In this essay I will argue some major causes of this problem and possible solution.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It becomes a common phenomenon that lots of teenagers choose to socialize online rather than having face-to-face meeting according to many research. The reasons behind this social issue could be included in some facets and several measures could be taken.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is an ongoing issue regarding the period when children learn a foreign language. Some people argue that learning another language when the children are young has adverse affects on the children. On the other hand, some assert that learning a foreign language is good to kids.

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