IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 79

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both therse views and give your own opinion.

In contemporaries times, the majority of employees intend to work for fixed corporations, while others assert that it is better to change jobs if needed. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in favor for the latter notion.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time as it is beneficial for the community and teenagers as well. To what extend do you agree with the statement.

Some individuals are of the view that teenagers should be required to do community work without any remuneration as this could be beneficial for the teenagers and community both. I do not agree with the statement and my views are in the following paragraphs.

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Pressure on the school and universities store and is increasing and students are forced to to hard work when they are young do you think it is a positive or negative development

Nowadays, tremendous interest in learning and teaching has rise the pressure on educational institutions. Thus, requesting students to do a lot of work at school and their home. In my opinion, l truly agree that we need to take quick action towards this matter.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

in today's technological world, an individual's lifestyle has changed in various ways, especially in terms of interaction. this essay will discuss the positive and negative effects.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, lots of museums where most ancient features are preserved are establishing. Purpose of all museums built is help to people recognize and have knowledge about history. Whereas, some museums require cost to visit it, while other museum facilities are free. In this essay, i will discuss about pros and cons of requiring admission to enter museums.

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Junk food advertising has a harmful effect on society and should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays people are increasing the past food eat. It has a negative effect on society so people must understand that it is a side effect and that should limited. I totally agree with this and I will discuss it.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Learning a language in the early years of school is said to be beneficial to students whilst other people believe that languages should be introduced later on when students have acquired knowledge of other subjects. I am of the view that a language should be one of the first subject to be taught in the early years and to be perfected as the years of learning progresses.

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Some people think that technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others argue that the opposite is true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, technology has become easily accesible for all the individuals. Propenents believe that the rise of global digitization has increased the gap between rich and poor while the opponents argue that it brought people closer to each other. I believe that the latter opinion is true and think that it is one of the things which connects individuals together.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, mothers go out to work while the fathers prefer to be at home and take care of their juveniles. There can be many reasons of this and people may have varied opinions on the topic. However, my own perspective is uttered as under. The modern era brought a plethora of positive and negative changes that were needed. Although, the reasons for the said happening are not that simple. One of the reasons could be that after giving birth, the women are fed up of their schedule. So in order to have a change in their daily life, they opt for a job and as the baby is needed to be looked after, it is done by the male patent. The other reason may be the wave of feminism that is breaking the patriarchy and consolidating a novel matriarchy. Moving to the positive side, if the fathers are staying at home then the mother is relieved of the daily chores and it is also necessary for their proper recovery from the traumas that they might have experienced during the painful days. Apart from that...

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we live in a society who is a step to lost the contact between us.

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In order to solve traffic problems should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of suchal a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

To manage the problems with regards to the traffic, individuals who own private cars must pay tax to the government which will be used to enhance public transportation. In this essay, advantages and disadvantages of the solution will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that learning new languages for pupils are crucial to improve life skills and gain new knowledge and they can help them in various aspects in their life.While a commonly held belief teaching childrens new language in first schools year are significant to imporve their skils in many aspects,There is also an argument that learning new langauge in elemntery school can become more difficult for kids.

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The most importaint aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The science is one of the most important lenses of our world, revolutionazing the way we live our lives. It is believed to be the upmost priority of scientce should be to make humanity better in terms of living conditions and its future. It is my contention that although there are a numerous objectives listed on the agenda of the field of science to be implemented, improvement of people's live should be prioritized with the upmost significance.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modren life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages overweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the current busy schedule individulas are preferring to consume ready to eat food. One of the major benefits of this senario would be saving time. Although, this trend saves alot of time, I believe there are more drawbacks because this will negatively impact their health.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home

Modern world has changed dramatically since the invention of internet, which brought a lot to our every day life. For example, you do not need to spend hours to get to your office, you just need to get out of the bed, put on your shirt and turn on your device. Of course such changes can not enter out lifes without some people arguing wheather this is acceptable or not. So, we are going to discuss pros and cons of working from home.

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Professional sports person are often idolized by the youth. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?

My data from my survey support my hypothesis. My study explores how using a mobile phone during multitasking activities, such as browsing social media or listening to music, affects reaction time. However, when people use their phones, they cannot focus on other things, and their reaction time will be lower. Phone influence affects people's reaction time. This study by Pavelka (2019) showed that the team that passed the test with a phone had a lower score than the team that did not use a phone during the test. It showed that social media can go down in reaction time. Another study was educational, with my results and support my hypothesis from Monke (2012) demonstrated that when you use a device, it can influence reaction time. His experiment proved that using a phone affects reaction time. Students reaction time was faster when they did not use their phones because when they used devices, they were distracted and could not focus on their work. His experiment showed that if particip...

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvatages?

In today's digital age, technology plays an important role in humans' life. It is believed that social networking sites help people contact other friends and getting news . This writer argues that the benefits of technology to get in touch with relatives and update the the latest news outweigh the drawback of overloading information .

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2- Playing computer games only has negative effects on children To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, computer games are an integral part of children’s lives. Some people believe that computer games only negatively affect kids, while others disagree with this idea. I totally agree with the statement, and in this essay, I will explore various dimensions of the issue and provide an analysis of its extent to support my position.

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Write two paragraphs. Paragraph 1: Compare Shanghai and Los Angeles. • Don't try to describe every detail. Identify the most significant information. Paragraph 2: Say which of the five cities provides the best environment overall, and why. • Present the various factors in order of priority and try to describe them in your own words, rather than using the descriptions in the table.

Los Angeles and Shanghai have a little range of considerable differences. The population differs by 1 million people to the advantage of Shanghai. While the level of criminality is 5 times higher in Los Angeles. However, we can also admit a lot of similarities between these two cities. Basic service provision is about 100% in both places and levels of ambient noise is similar either.

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In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying fact that the phenomena in the next few years, all self-driven vehicles will be converted to a drive-less version, as the passengers will be carried to any place they wish for is ubiquitous across the globe due to its importance. Majority of folks are in the favour of this statement due to its number of merits. However some of the people highlight its demerits first. In my further paragraphs, advantages and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.

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