IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 83

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that, nowadays, most women have full-time jobs as men, so logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for eg. through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s world, technologies have rapidly developed, allowing people to have more comfortable life, particular, smartphones can connect to others more easily, but sometimes is not safe and may be tagged by companies or some applications that we permitted when installing apps without being unconscious. In my opinion, I believe that has drawbacks than benefits and I will explain below.

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The best for the government to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport per day, 7 day a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The greatest for the government to figure out the issue of traffic jams is by supplying no-fee public delivery each day, 7 days a week. I completely disagree with this opinion.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last years. Discuss the causes and effect of this issue disturbing trend.

Over the last year, the proportion of childhood obesity in western country has risen almost 20 percent. The main reasons are influence of fast food and social media. This essay will discuss all posible causes and aftereffects of this negative trend.

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Recreational drugs should be legalized and there should be no punishments for people who use them. To what extent do you agree

There is an opinion about making recreational drugs legally and removing the fine for the users. I definitely disagree with this argument for several reasons which will be explained in this following essay.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,it’s indeed that a lot of old structures need to refurbish which involves a numerous of expenditure. thus some people think this budget need to construct new buildings as well as infrastructure. I disagree this issue of old status is not improtant any more.

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Some people think that older employees contribute most to the success of a company. Others think that younger people play a more vital role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that old workers can have a bigger contribution to the company's success, while others argue that younger ones are more important. Although the proficiency in technology of young workers makes them ideal employees, I believe that the skills of old employees can help more in order for the company to be successful.

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It is a positive thing that people who are in senior management positions in companies have much higher salaries than other employees in the same company or organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays senior leaders in an organisation have high remuneration compared to other staff in the same company. I believe that it is essential for business development. This essay will delve into my viewpoint with relevant illustrations.

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Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another. In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? Why is history important to society?

From the past, all cultures have recorded their history in many ways throughout time.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

It is true that human activities have caused detrimental impacts on plants and living creatures. While some claim this trend is too late to be rescued, in my perspective, there are still many steps that can be taken to improve this situation.

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Some people think that economy progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors,do you think are most important?

It has been argued that these factors are the proper index for a country's success.

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the grap below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK summerise the informatio by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.

The given line graph illustrates the variation of domestic access to cd players, mobile phones, home computers and internet in uk homes in percentage terms from 1996 to 2003.

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The family has great influence on children’s development, but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people assume that Families always affect kid’s future, however, the outer world influence children more. In my opinion, I disagree with this point of view. I believe that the natural family plays a more important role in kids’ growth.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

The crime rate grows annually and that is a fact. It can be burglaries, robberies, mugging, et cetera. There are different causes of that and some ways to prevent the number of cases connected with a criminal activity.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the way in which the leather goods are made for selling.

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Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be beneficial to society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are opposite arguments that education is aiming for the readiness of individuals to fulfill the community’s purposes or only restrain to their personal objectives. In my opinion, education actually covers both aims, and this essay will discuss further about it.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Migration of people from rural to urban area has become comman worldwide, which results into the low number of people in the countryside. This essay will demonstrate that this is overall negative development because there is less farmers and farmings lands are being converted into industial zone.

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Some employers offer their employees subsidized memberships of gyms and sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and more effective at work, other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and present your opinion.

In some companies, managers think they have to create some clubs or gyms for their employees and could help staff to reach the aim of the company and employees more than work. on the other hand , in science of managing some argue about it is not a good idea and it can help to raise of make goods.in this essay i try to discuss two ideas and the end i speak about my idea.

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Completing university educationn is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There are split opnions regarding theways of getting a best job. Some people believe that education gettting from universities is the best way to get a job, whereas, another group of thinkers support that the most importatnt aspect to have a highly paid job is experience and skills in the feild. However, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both opinion would be discussed.

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Several cities around the globe subscribed the idea of vertical development for residential buildings, others promtote independent houses in larger areas.

Several cities around the globe subscribed the idea of vertical development for residential buildings, others promtote independent houses in larger areas. I believe that providing taller residential apartments is the best way for the development of cities as ample reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay will delve into my viewpoint with relevant illustrations.

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