IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 86

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people prefer to carefully plan activities in their free time others think it’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your answer?

The majority of humans choose planning their free time with useful actions, but other part do not consider it as essential.

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Many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. Why? Advantages overweigh the disadvantages?

Changing the job is a hotly debated that divides opinion. There are some arguments that many youngsters tend to quit work after just a few days of work. In my opinion, despite some reasons behind that, it still brings more drawbacks than benefits.

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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In modern society, advertising had become an integral part of our everyday life. From billboards to pop-up advertisements on devices, we are constantly surrounded by marketing messages. I tend to think that such a tendency has both positive and negative sides. Nevertheless, I believe that if advertising are used for the right purposes, their benefits outweigh their drawbacks. I advocate strongly with my own view and I am going to provide some arguments, which will confirm my position.

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In today’s world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantage of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

These days certain individuals all over the world, people are using their own smartphones. I think to use them it right way more and more prons. In this essay, I will discuss about it

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Some say that watching television among children has detrimental effects on their growth while others say otherwise. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views

Watching television has become a hobby for today's generation which is thought harmful for children's development and some people believe it is beneficial for them. I discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs and agree with former view.

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

The second main reason why this ban is warranted is that it helps those addicted to

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The number of international conferences in three cities. 1965-2010

The line graph highlights data about the quantity of international conferences in some particular cities between 1965 and 2010.

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Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people in current period easy to apply and give by credit card. Meanwhile, other people can not able to pay their debts back from their experience. The writer will explain about benefits and drawbacks of credit cards.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

In several countries, females are permitted to take maternity leave from their occupation during the first month after childbirth of their baby. The writer will explain the benefits and drawbacks about this statement.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Human life expectancy is increasing due to advanced modern medicine, and people can live longer. Is that a good thing or a bad thing? I believe it has more demerits than merits, and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.

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Many young people today spend a lot of time playing electronic games. Is this a positive or negative development?

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer to playing electronic game has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of children online games, it can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer to overweight or unhealthy have increased significantly. Although there are several agree of the government has the responsibility to solve this problem, it can have some disagree as well. In this essey I will try to discuss both positive or negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Over the last few years, global warming has become one of the major problems that people should pay attention. While cutting trees and hunting animals are claimed to the main reasons behind this issue, there are several effectivr solutions of this problem.

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Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

There is a type of group which think that buses, undergrounds and other public transportation should be free, mainly in megacities. Obviously, it will be pleasure bonus for habitants but we should consider other aspects such as decreasing of service quality and increasing traffic jam. It means drawbacks overweight benefits.

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The government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care. While many people think that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The majority of people think the government is responsible for financial support and taking care of old people. Some of the other things the nation should earn money to take care of themselves when they are getting old. I will discuss both views and I give you my opinion.

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More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into work everyday. The result is increased traffic congestion and damadge to the environment. What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distance to work?

Increasing number of employers in city areas are travelling to work from their village's everyday results in growth of traffic and increases environmental pollution. Creation of low rental housing projects in urban areas, and increase in the road tax would be good initiatives to overcome this problem. Thus in this eassy , the writer intend to ellaborate above ideas,in detail.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People determining their career path at the beginning and continuing are more likely to have a rewarding working life instead of the others who change their occupations regularly. From my perspective, although patience in a career path is one of the keys to success, the experience of trying various jobs will acquire desirable working life

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In some countries an average employee is legally obliged to retire at the age of 55 or 60, while in others, like Japan, people can work until they are physically and mentally fit to perform duties. what is the system prevailing in your country? until what age should people be allowed to countinue in salaried jobs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Around the globe, in few countries professionals have specific age-criterion to exctract from their designation, whereas; in some states working people are free to continue their professional life until they feel intellectually and physically active, and still capable to concentrate on their job tasks such as in Japan. However, in our country this criterion is differ in both private and public sectors. In this essay, pertinent causes with few examples will be explicated regarding, which age should be strict for the rumeneration vacancies in detail.

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Some people think a crime should always have a fixed punishment like life for murder, while others believe you should take the circumstances of the crime into account. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A handful of people carry the opinion that having a fixed sentences for certain offences such as murder is the way to go. However, there are also others which opine, arguing that the nature of the offences committed should be taken into consideration as well. In this essay, I will delve into discussing both sides of this coin and provide my view.

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research shows that bussiness meetings discussions and training are happening online nowadays . do the advantages outweighs the disadvantages

in current days , the organisation meetings and teachings are now done virtual and there are merits and demerits of using online platform such as it is easy and quick to conduct a meeting , it hinders some of the ideas and practical skills if needed irrespectively.

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