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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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“The importance of family in a person’s life” . What is your opinion about this statement ?

In this globalisation era, family life has undergone such noticeable changes which transform the meaning of family and its roles. However, it is worth remembering that this basic unit of society still plays a vital part in human 's movement and development. This calls for the ideas about the significance of familly in each person's life, which will be discussed and analysed in this essay

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Scholarships are a great opportunity to gain the study you like. What are the main advantages or disadvantages of studying abroad?

It is argued that there are many benefits when people get funding from the government to study overseas. I believe that can make us have a new relation from outside and become intelegent.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, due to the widespread of globalisation, internet has been an important aspect in this modern era, most of the population, especially youngsters have been using it for the use of, for example, study and social. This essay will discuss whether or not improving internet access is more important for governments to invest than improving public transportation.

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Some people believe that anyone can create art, such as painting, pottery, music, etc. others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been suggested that some people present the view that anybody is able to create any type of art from painting to music, Whereas others believe that special abilities are required so that individuals can create a piece of art. I strongly agree with the former opinion.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern world, famous people receive too much recognition from the media. For this reason, some individuals dispute that these observable event may have some detrimental influence on young generation, where's others believe that it can be beneficial as well. In this essay, i will discuss both views while giving appropriate answer.

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Children should stay at school before 18. Agree or Disagree?

Children should remain in school until they are 18 years old. I firmly agree with this statement and believe that a formal education is crucial for a child's cognitive development, and extending it to 18 ensures an all-round development, furthermore, staying in school until 18 protects them from societal pressure and harmful influences.

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Today,more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the benefits and disadvantages for people who visit such places?

No one can deny that visiting gangerous places has become mor important nowadays although some people have different opinion and they think that it is not essentioal for us. However, it is good to say that everything in our life has advantages and disadvanteges.

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While some believe that the best way to learn about current events is through newspapers, others think that they can learn new better through other forms of media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that the most outstanding source of news is the newspaper, while others argue that different forms of media such as television, radio, and the internet are more suitable outlet of current affairs. While newspaper offers credibility, I believe that the TV, radio, and the internet are better source news because people can access it anytime.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A lot of money need to fix and look after old buildings and this fees ought to save up on luxury buildings instead. I tend to disagree with this idea because of the benefits of conserving old buildings on the economy, environment, pollution and people's health and it is more economical to conserve buildings, another point is that some old buildings are historic.

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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate regarding what kind of parents is good to their children. Some people contend that parents make rules related about study, the coming back home time in household. It is helpful for their kids to live themselves in the future. On the other hand, some people assert those rules just make children have a stress and it could cause conflicts with their parents.

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Some people believe that children learn better when they are placed in classes with children of similar academic abilities. Others think that children learn better when they are in classes with children representing a diverse range of abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Majority of schools place children in classes that are suitable for the child’s educational needs. However, certain people think it is appropriate to keep children of same academic abilities in one class while others think keeping kids with different academic abilities together is better, and I agree with this view.

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some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commmiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding an the punishment. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Due to the fact that the majority of adult's heydays is spent on work, job satisfaction plays a crucial role is their welfare. The reality is plenty of fators contributing to career contentment and in my opinion, providing this ambition for all people entirly, is definitely far-fetched.

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As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Changes in Social Behavior from Childhood to Adulthood: A Critical Analysis

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Some people think that advertisement between films is wasting time and some people says it has lots of benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.

While a faction of people holds the notion that advertisement between movies is worthless, others argue that it is beneficial for the viewers. I totally agree with the latter view as ample reasons present to substantiate it.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common belief that happening risks in both; professional and personal lives, is not important for people. However, there is a more persuasive argument that taking care of both risks in two different areas such as in professional lives and personal lives, it could be helpful people develop their problem solving skill for next waves.

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• What are the benefits and problems involved in introducing compulsory sport in schools throughout your country?

There has been an ongoing debate whether schools should introduce mandatory sport activities across my contry. The benefits associated with this decision are linked to several downsides, as I will describe in this essay, and I will highlight the benefits of it.

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some people ay that now we can films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. discuss both these views and gi9ve your opinion.

I live in moden area. Few people are rich and other persons are poor and medal class they are not afortable for their movie tickets to watch their film in cinema. Nowadays, somw family watch film in their T.v and mobile phone or tablets. Some mans see the film in cinema in once in a months. In thsi essay I will discuss in some pros and cons in my below paragraph.

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Government funding should only provide scholarships for best students. All other funding should come from student fees and private organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To commence with many educational institution spend much money on education which encourage those admission to get the best grades in various filled. All other funding should be provided by private organizations.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many countries today, the crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular, beacuse they not only provide audiences with the thrill and suspense to retain their attention, but they also serve as a relfection of societal values.

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Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of coffee and tea consumed in the last 4 days in five different cities in Australia (Sydney, Melbourn, Brisban, Adelaide, Hobart).

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