IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 106

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Caring of children is believed to be an essential job in any society, because every human should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents to some extent. I agree with this opinion

Caring for children is believed to be an essential job in any society because every human should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents to some extent. I agree with this opinion.

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Some people think that university students should specialize in one subject, while others think universities should encourage students to learn a range of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

University is one of the most fundamental factors in student education. Some people argue that universities should only focus on specific subjects, while others are of the opinion that these points should cover a wide range of subjects. I agree with the second line of thinking.

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in many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and by food produced all over the world. Do ypu think this is positive or negative dvelopment? give reasons for yur answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlage or experience.

If you want to make Chinese noodles at home in London, you can easily buy Chinese products in your local market, which is the result of Globalization and Global trading. So what do you think, is it a negative or positive development? In my opinion, it has mostly a positive impact on our lives, but of course, we can't ignore the negative sides as well.

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Some people think that mental health is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions

In some discussions surrounding success in sports is the most critical factor in mental health, while others argue that in physically it holds greater importance. I assume that mental health plays a more important role than physical conditioning. Having a strong and fit body is important for performance, but mental strength and well-being can also make a big difference.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

The right to vote is the foundation of democracy. For decades, freedom fighters across the world moved mountains to have this right against the monarch systems. However, the latest trend shows that not enough people are exercising their right to vote. Although the age ranges vary and spread across all groups, it has been noticed that younger people are neglecting their right to vote.

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Children find it difficult to pay attention or concentrate on school study what are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

It is universally acknowledged that concentration plays a critical role in education. Unfortunetaly, recently, it has been a concern that the level of students's focusing on subjects at schools has significantly declined. In this regard, this essay will discuss the causes of this problem and propose practical solution as well.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many individuals think that it is necessary to spend a moderate amount of money on railways instead of roads. I strongly disagree with this statement, because it is essential to have decent roads inside of a city, otherwise public transportation will be in danger. In this essay, I will argue about why I disagree about this announcement.

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If a product is good and meets customer needs, then people will buy it, and advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)

The discussion over whether advertising is unnecessary if the product meets customer expectations. In my opinion, we cannot deny that good quality of the product can lead to the higher purchase of buyers. However, I believe that the use of advertiser is still the essential tool to promote their products widely.

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Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that higher authorities should be aware of every conversation happening through smart devices for the security reasons, while others claim that, this is personal information and people should not have access to this without consent.I will discuss both views further with relevant examples.

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International travelers can cause problems in the countries to which they travel. On the other hand, international travelers can bring real advantages with them. Do the problems international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?

From some people's perspective, tourists can be rude, too vulgar, or probably just wrecking havoc wherever they go. Yet, most people still welcomes them with open arms. This essay will elucidate both the reasons behind those negative sentiments and what kind of benefits tourists will bring.

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Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extiction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, deforestation has been a prime issue which might contribute to placing all kinds of living being on the verge of the extinction. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with this statement as all of us are witnessing adverse transformations in the Earth.

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Many people are change their jobs Advantages and outweigh the disadvantages of this view?

In recent years, there has been a growing trend of young people frequently changing jobs throughout their careers. This shift in employment patterns is driven by various factors, including the desire for better opportunities, the search for personal fulfillment, and the impact of evolving job markets. While there are both advantages and disadvantages to frequently changing jobs, the benefits, such as personal growth, skill acquisition, and career flexibility, generally outweigh the drawbacks.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people are facing health issues, and numbers are rising rapidly. Hence, it is said that hospitals are not able to provide treatment at full potential because of an increasing number of obese people. And it is believed that this problem could be solved by teaching the benefits of a healthy physical lifestyle. I disagree with the statement as there are other ways to tackle this issue.

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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, people have highly discussed those whose work has been a turning point in the progress of the whole world. It is argued that their big impact is grounded in an unbalanced life fully dedicated to their jobs rather than other less-formal fields. I believe every person should spend their time evenly in both work and non-professional activities.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s society, the number of people choosing to read ebooks increases rapidly throughout the years. This trend leads to the question whether the advantages of using ebooks outweigh the disadvantages. I strongly believe that e-book should be seen as a positive development of technology.

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Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Although people can cook at home, lately more people prefer to purchase food rather than cook. This essay will try to explain the advantages and disadvantages of this topic.

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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to my comprehension, both teachers and parents play a crucial role in developing a child’s analytical skills and social morals. Children are highly impressionable, closely observing and absorbing the words and behaviors of their elders, shaping their outlook on the world.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

In certain parts of the World, the number of people with obesity and other health issues related to digestion, rises with a critical speed, due to the accesses and adorableness of fast food meals. Therefore, a number of people think that it is necessary for the government to increase taxes on this kind of food. I partially agree with this opinion, and in this work, I will support it with tied arguments.

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Should governments spend more money on space exploration? Write a one-sided opinion essay to answer this question giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Investing more money in space exploration has become crucial for the governments. However, this case is costing the authorities a huge amount of money, and work. In my opinion, governments should not allocate funds on space because the greatest need is in education and exploring the empty landscapes on the earth.

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Some people think that advertisements take great effect on the economy, and others think that they excel more in social impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my view, advertisements serve a dual purpose that affects both the economy and society. It is challenging to prioritize one impact over the other, as they are deeply interconnected. Economic growth can lead to social changes, such as improved living standards and access to information, while societal shifts can create new markets and consumer needs, feeding back into the economic cycle.

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