IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 110

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays most parents leave their children in the childcare centre their preschool age, due to their busy timetable at work, and think that they can give them the best education and important skills. However, kids are getting the feel of attention and love when they are under the supervision of their blood relatives.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Companies currently emphasize that their goods should be modern in certain methods in their advertising. I think the key factor driving the statement is advanced technology, and it results in an isolation for the people over 60 years old.

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Some people believe that the main purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society. Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal wishes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by significant number of humans that the main role of studying is reaching personal wishes or whether to be an advantageous person for people in society. In this essay, I gave some shreds of evidence with examples.

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Some people believe that parks should be free to enter. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often assumed by some people that park authorities should not charge entrance fees. Although some people might agree with the statement, I completely disagree. Not only because money generated by these facilities could be used for maintenance and staff salaries but also because this revenue could be used for improving facilities in parks.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bar. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that particular criminals should be punish with societal jobs that do not pay them rather than putting them behind the bars. In my point of view, I totally agree with the statement, as this recommendation will enhance people's behavior and help the country in terms of both cleanliness and finances.

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Some people do not like repetitive routine, such as simple food while others like it discuss both views and give your opinion

Every human develops different habits in life, and due to this, few individuals try to vary their meal plan while others hate this kind of change. In this essay, I will elaborate on both the aspects of this matter.

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It is often thought that an increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. To what extent do you agree or disasgree ?

There is no denying the fact that some parents are baying for their children a large number of toys to play with. While it is a commonly held belief that there are advantages to buying a lot of toys for your children, there is also an argument that are disadvantages for the kid having a large number of toys. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On the one hand, a large number of toys will make children's minds more active. In other words, they will play and create a small world in their minds. In addition, more toys will make them using mobile phones less than others. For example, if they have toys they will not be playing on the phone. On the other hand, there are many disadvantages like having a lot of toys makes them cannot realise the value.it is also possible to say that, maybe they will not take care of their toys because they have a large figure of toys and if some of them break kids are not being sad. Moreover, when these chil...

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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that currently governments are focusing their investment toward public transportation instead of adding new roads. While it may be more useful, we also need to consider that it may not be able to solved the traffic jam problems soon. Nevertheless, I support the idea to develop mass transport.

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Many people spend the whole day at a computer and don’t have much time for exercise. What problem does this lifestyle lead to? How can these problems be avoided?? Give reason for you answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

A lot of individuals are busy with their PCs, and do not have opportunity to workout. Such sedentary lifestyle culminates in isolation and health issues. However, from my perspective, not having time for moving is just an excuse. I wholeharedly believe that everyone can create at least one hour to walk or exercise.

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It is often argued by many that historical objects should be returned to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is universally acknowledged that ancient objects are unique and exclusive and illustrate history and ancient culture .In this regard they are protectively retained in highly advanced museums. Recently, maintaining them in another region has sparked controversy regarding whether historical objects should be returned to their original place. Hence, this essay will discuss my negative orientation towards this statement along with supportive reasons.

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The plans below show a bookstore in 2000 and the bookstore now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given maps illustrate the alternative of a bookstore in 2000 and now.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I completely agree with the statement that the most important purpose of science is to improve human life. Science not only helps us understand the world around us but also creates practical solutions to the problems that humans face.

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Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside, while others think that life in the city is more beneficial for children’s development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that a rural upbring is more beneficial to children’s overall development, while others believe that urban environments offer children greater development. This essay will discuss both views before presenting my own point of view.

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Nowadays many people choice to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Recently owning a business is the most popular choice in many countries although it comes with a high cost. The downside is less than being employed.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that finishing a course in university can guarantee them having a good job. Meanwhile, others believe that experience plays an important role in landing a job. However, I believe that hand-on experience if far superior than completing a course for some reasons that are set out below.

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In many parts of the world, children's were very different from today. What do you think weather adventages or disadventages of life for children in the past?

In every country on the planet, there is disagreement around the topic of kids' growth. With regard to this topic, few consider, nowadays, juveniles are changed a lot. According to my perspective, these changes have more cons than their pros and provide some relevant grounds.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opini

It is believed that people are learning the other languages just for travelling and working purposes. While others cliam that there are other reasons for learning foreign languages like personal interests in foreign language and culture and education in foreign countries.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situations?

The majority of individuals who work as a doctor or teacher are migrating in other countries rather than staying and working in their own poor nations. In other words, these days, more and more professionals are leaving their countries in order to gain more money or achieve welfare in some developed countries. It is obvious that this decision creates a lot of various difficulties. In this essay, I will explain some of these problems, and also I will propose several effective solutions.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy thing we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is a common belief among people about the importance of advertisements in making people buy goods. While some tend to spend a large amount of money on unnecessary things, some ads can have a significant impact on making others buy recent products that improve their lives. This essay will argue that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teachers in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The advancement of technology has profoundly impacted various aspects of our lives,including education. There is a growing debate on whether technology will eventually replace teachers in the classroom. While, technology offers numerous benefits, I firmly believe that it cannot entirely replace human teachers.

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