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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Write information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisions where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate two distinct processes: the lifecycle of salmon, which involves various stages of growth and migration, and the series of steps involved in transforming animal hides into finished goods. Both processes are cyclical in nature and involve transformations across multiple phases.

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Cheaper food is now available because of greater use of fertilizers and improved machinery. This improved production, however, can be harmful to individuals and the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Discuss, including examples from your

Increased use of fertilizers and machinery in farming is harmful for mankind and communities, therefore, it is a commonly asked question that we must allow this to happen or masses must oppose it. In my viewpoint, I agree with the latter notion and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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All the people in a company should be treated equally and provide with the same number of holidays in a year or people doing different jobs enjoy different amounts of holiday time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The importance of holidays in worplaces have been a topic of different discusions nowadays. Many people agree that leasure days should be equal for everyone, without take in account employment activities. However, there are others who consider vacations ought to be granted depending of the role that folks are performing in society. This essay will explain the two perspectives and why I support the later option since some jobs require different work conditions.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible ther familia in scientific research, business and the academic world, Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few people think that it is not harmful to share information, related to any field while others argue that information is precious and should be kept hidden. This essay will discuss these standpoints in detail and will explain why i believe that data should not be shared freely.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but only spaces available for building them in the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

The demand of new houses to live has been increase due to the risen of population in many countries. The number of availabe spaces for building a new residencial area only occur in the countryside. I argue if this problem could not be be solve immediately with a suitable solution, this might lead to a long-term issue.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is sometimes believed that taking risks in eighter personal or professional lives can be so advantageous that the negligible drawbacks of this may be dominated by its booming outcomes. Although taking risks is potentially an effective approach to growth and success, I don’t firmly agree that it is always the most practical choice.

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Once children starts school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As a toddler lands his feet for the first time in the school, The teachers have more impact rather than his parents, regarding their intellectual and social development. In this essay, I will totally concur with this statement.

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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Teachers are considered to have more impact on children's social and intellectual growth than parents when they start their learning journey. While I agree that teachers play a very crucial role in kids' development, parents definitely are the most influential figures.

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Many people think that children should start learning a foreign language at a very early age. Others believe that it is better to wait until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no denying the fact that learning new language is crucial. While it is a commonly held belief that there is a conflict between people for what is the best age to learn foreign language. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve search situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this essay I am going to discuss that, relying on a poor and unappealing job causes a shortage of money, on the other hand, I will advocate that it is better to try and improve the overall situation.In my opinion, I strongly agree that creating and hustling to improve the situation is a good cause.As you will update your life situation for sure your life will be comfortable in various ways for example, your family will have a comfortable life, your kids will get into better academic institutes.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

With the growing population, the need for new food sources has increased. One suggestion is to use insects as a food source. However, some people argue that eating insects can negatively influence our health and environment. This essay will introduce the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to be in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effect on individuals and people around them?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is why people sleep less than they used to in the past. It’s becoming more common problem which is found in the majority of the population. There are some reasons why people in our generation have lack of sleep and in my opinion these disputes should be solved.

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“Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion”

Nowadays, societies are gradually becoming more individualistic. Unfortunately, this applies not only to individuals but to governors who appropriate from this tendency when making decisions over the public health system. But, surprisely, a large proportion of the community agree with the idea that health assistance should not be given for free. In this essay I will point out my opinion about this issue.

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1-Should a visitor to another country follow local customs, or should the host country welcome cultural differences? Discuss and make sure to give your own opinion.

Whenever tourists enter a country, they should choose between following local customs or maintain their own culture abroad. While I prefer to adapt, this essay will discuss both of the arguments.

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‏Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree

‏In recent times, there has been a frequently discussed issue of whether parents should punish their children when they commit any mistakes, or whether they allow them to have freedom to deal with actions. I agree that children must take opportunities to be responsible for themselves. This essay will explore this phenomenon in more detail, supported loy relevant exomples.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effect on a children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The impact of television, video, and computer games on children has been widely debated. Some believe these forms of media can be beneficial, while others argue they have negative effects. This essay will discuss both views before offering my opinion.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

An increasing production rate of consumer goods has clear negative implications for the environment. Some underlying reasons for this phenomenon are overconsumption and rising carbon emissions, and remedying this situation requires initiative from both governments and individuals.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, adverts are considered to be the most effective method used by companies, while others say that they are overused. While advertisements help to attract new customers to the company, I believe that their intrusiveness and ubiquitousness have made them untrustworthy.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

Due to deforestation, urban expansion, and illegal hunting, numerous animal species are becoming endangered as their habitats are destroyed, with some facing the risk of extinction. This essay will discuss the importance of safeguarding animals and suggest measures to mitigate the problem.

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Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people prefer to take a gap year after high school to enter university for travelling and getting experience before getting degree. In my opinion, the merits of this trend surpass the drawbacks. Firstly, this essay will demonstrate how this decision brings benefits such as being skilled and having well budget before starting new academic way ,in turn, and followed by negative sides of this trend such losing a interest into study.

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