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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that athe circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivationfor committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that every crime should involve punishments strategies which are fixed, while others argue that the overall circusmtances of the crime situation including the individual motivating for committing the crime should be considered regarding punishment decision.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A majority of people want that the advancement in science and technology should focus positively on improving the lifestyle. On the contarary, there are individuals who don't agree on this. According to them with the growth in science in various fields is the leading cause of climate related issue and that in turn is affecting the envionment. I strongly agree that with the title statement and we as a soicety should always focus on the greater good and work together to achieve them. This eassy will focus on the positive and negative aspects of advancement in science.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods (food, clothing) results in damage to the natural environment. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Our environment is suffering due to the rise in consumption of goods such as food and clothing. While these are both necessaties in life, it is crucial to study the negative impact they are having on our Earth. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of this damage and try to provide some solutions to handle it.

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Completing a university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting exercise and developing soft skills are more important . discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent times, there is no denying the fact that pursuing education will increase job opportunities in the future. At the same time, improving other skills significantly enhances job opportunities alike, there is also an argument that getting experienced and developing skills to be more practitioner in your career is important as well. Before presenting my opinion, this essay aims to discuss the both point of view.

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Nowadays young people are more inclined towards mobile phones and Internet. Some people say that they should not use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Mobile phones and Internet have changed the way the world communicates. Nowadays it is rare to find someone not using mobile phones and Internet. Young generation nowadays are getting more addicted towards using mobile phone and Internet. Some believe that they should avoid using it more and more. I agree with the statement that youngsters should avoid using mobile and Internet in excess.

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Some people think that parents have an powerful influence in child's life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The is no denying the fact that some individuals beleive parents got strong impact in kid's life. While it is a commonly held belief that external impact outside home has more influence to child's development, there also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that outside the home plays significant role in child's life.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the pressure on teenagers to excel academically has increased significantly. Consequently, some argue that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and culinary arts, should be removed from the school curriculum to allow students to concentrate solely on academic work. I strongly agree with this view, as it could help students develop essential skills like critical thinking and writing, which are vital for their future careers.

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Some people believe that studying history is very important and we must study the past to understand the present. Others say that it is useless and should not be studied at all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To have the knowledge about the history is essential for every nation. Few people think that it is crucial to teach individuals about historical events while others disagree and believe that it has no significance and should be avoided.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A great part of the society believe that the Olympic games improve the bonds between countries, others, oppositely, consider that all the efforts should be put in other ASUNTOS. From my perspective, the event is an excellent opportunity to

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Trung

In the contemporary era, education has always been of great importance in every nation. Currently, educational methods importance in every nation. Currently, educational methods are often a topic of debate. While some people believe that students should focus on scholarly subjects which helpful for their future jobs. In my view, non-academic subjects, such as music and sports, also deserve to be taught.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Vy

In this day and age, education plays a significant role in society.Therefore, the curriculum is a matter of great concern to all.While some argue that schools should focus on teaching compulsory subjects that will help students succeed in their chosen careers,others believe that field of art and physical subjects are also valuable. Two aforementioned opinions will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.

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Many cities around the world are facing issues due to overpopulation. What does this cause, and what solutions can be implemented to tackle these challenges?

Population's rapid growth has been caused several difficulties in urban ereas in all over the world. I believe exploring the promblems that is caused by this subject, can assist in finding suitable situation to resolve it.

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There are now detailed reports about crimes on TV and newspapers. Some people say that crime details should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Reporting about crimes on Television and social media is a contentious issue debate nowadays, where some people believe that crime details should be banned in media. I firmly disagree about the view, due to people should be informed about crimes issue regading to increase awarness. This essay will examine some key points why crimes reports should be detailed on TV and newspapers.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In recent times,most of the people use of alternative forms of medicine due to they are believe in effectiveness. However, this method is ineffective as well as worst impacts on peoples health and may be dangerous. I am agree with this given statement because of using of alternative forms of medicine is not acceptable for peoples health.

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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer companies are leaving their countries for developed countries for better paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issues.

For the past few years, a huge group of professionals like engineers, doctors and IT are migrating to well known and civilized countries. Seeking for better job opportunities and enhanced lifestyle. In this essay, I will tackle the issues and possible solutions for this.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the overpopulation consider as important problem that happened in many places such as the major urban centers in several countries around the world. However, this problem has diverse reasons that caused in, so the people and govemment should find a solution to decraese this problem.

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The world of work is changing rapidly working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the cause and solution.

In the past few decades, there has been a noticeable in retirement plan in middle age group. Working conditions are quickly changed in the worldwide. Individuals decide to change their position or company frequently because of a higher income. Increase annual salary will solve this problem.

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Due to poorer countries experiencing a “brain drain” they are seeing many professionals such as doctors and teachers leaving to work in more developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this situation?

Brain drain is a condition where high educated move to develped country for some reason, this conditition became a contentious issue debate, where this situation usually happen in developing countries. This essay will examine some key factors why many professionals like doctors and teachers are leaving their original countries and try to suggest some possible sollutions.

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In many countries around the world, shopping has turned into a form of entertainment rather than a way of getting what people need. Discuss the reason for this trend. Is it a positive or negative development?

In numerous nations worldwide, the purpose of shopping has seen as a entertainment activity instead of what people actually requires in their daily lives. In my perspective, this trend leads to negative development which i will elaborates with it caution behind it in the following paragarphs.

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Universities should accept equal members of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Gender equality has been a topic of debate over the years. Some people believe that there should be same amount of male and female students in all subjects in order to achieve gender equality, while others argue that it is unfair to set quotas in subjects just based on gender, rather than interests and ability. In my opinion, I completely disagree on gender quota in university courses.

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