IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 14

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage

In this global world, a number of countries are dependent on visitors for earnings. However, If they are not properly managed they can bring many issues which need immediate action. But we can not deny that they have both benefits and demerits. According to me, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

n today’s rapidly developing world, science plays a fundamental role in shaping modern life. I strongly agree that the primary goal of science should be to improve people’s lives, as it contributes significantly to human health, well-being, and sustainability.

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Most morden families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What is the solution?

Nowadays both mother and father can be involved in financially supporting their family and as a result, children can have a deficit of parents's attention. This essay will explore what reasons behind it including the absence of their own housing and gender equality, and will suggest possible solutions as government support.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

While many believe that earning a high income should be a higher priority when choosing a career, I argue that other factors, such as personal interest, job satisfaction, and work-life balance, also require higher demands. If not, the job provides us with negative emotions or significant stress. Hence, I mostly disagree with the statement.

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Nowadays, it is considered that art and music are the integral core of all communities. While, some argue that today creative fields are not a big necessarity in modern society, others completely oppose this statement. I also disagree with the former statement and in this essay, I will explain the reason for this matter.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Due to the learning benefits and also having better job prospects after graduating, learning various subjects besides the main ones is preferred among some university students. However, due to wasting time and high costs, some suggest that all of the student’s time and energy should be allocated to learning their own lessons and getting a degree.

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Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The idea of including meat in an individual's is considered wrong and unethical by many. There are a plethora of reasons for this school of thought. The upcoming paragraphs will explicate those reasons along with my opinion in conclusion.

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+ 5mins Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a univer¬sity should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own know¬ledge or experience.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes that uni¬versity education serves. However, whether they should mainly provide job-related skills or pure knowledge to graduates has caused heated debate. My view is that practical skills should be the main focus of universities.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

A number of animals are approaching extinction while a certain figure in the animal kingdom is labeled as endangered species.

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Because most information about culture and history can be found on the internet today, museums are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, because of the development of technology, data is being updated on the internet, which makes storing information in museums not essential for citizens compared to the past. This essay agrees with the replacement of storing information in the museum by the Internet since it enhances the accessibility of the information and is complimentary for everyone.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many think that ecological issues will deteriorate, that it will be impossible to live on our planet and the humanity will look for other planet where it would able to continue life. I completely disagree with that opinion due to it is not possible that environment will worsen so that we will lose an opportunity to live on it and there are no such predictions by scientists.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

First of all, when young people learn about parenting early, they will understand how important it is to take care of a family. They will learn that being a good parent means giving love, support, and time to their children. For example, if students learn how to deal with stress and how to communicate well, they will be better parents in the future. Also, these lessons can help young people become more patient and responsible.

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Some people think learning history in school is important others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no denying the fact that schools include a wide variety of courses nowadays, including science, life skills, art and physical education. While it is a commonly held belief that historical subjects are considered significant for general knowledge, there is also an argument that suggests concentrating more on courses that are related to life. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, some parents have chosen to educate their children at home instead of sending them to school. While this approach offers several advantages, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapaers or books because they will be to read everything they want online without paying. to what do you extent agree or disagree with this statment ?

Due to the advancement of technology, it is being said that newspapers or books will become extinct as they will be available through internet services without any cost. Considering the future, I fully agree to this notion and will state my hold in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loos of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals argue that the most critical environmental issue we face today is the loss of specific species of plants and animals, however, some say there are more pressing environmental issues that require urgent attention. This essay will explore both perspectives and provide relevant examples.

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Question- Buying tickets on the internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this outweigh the disadvantage.

These days, it has been a growing trend to purchase plane tickets, perishable and non-perishable goods also books by using technological devices. This trend has many merits and demerits. However, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, which I will discuss in this paragraph.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep What are problems caused by lack of sleep? What can be done about this lack of sleep?

It can be noticed that there are more people suffering from not having enough sleep.The writer of this essay believes that this issue is attributable to stress and a long time using smartphones,however, this problem can be tackled by following the body's biological clock.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphsise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern times, marketing solely focuses on convincing the customers, that recent products are novel in a certain manner. Even, though this could have a positive effect on the sales, it could also negatively impact the overall outcome. I neither agree it as positive nor disagree as negative. In this essay, I will explain it with examples and justify my viewpoint.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

International tourism has become a key contributor to the economic growth of many countries. While some people are concerned about its negative impact on local communities and the environment, I believe the advantages of international tourism far outweigh the disadvantages.

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