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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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GOVERNMENTS SHOULD FOCUS THEIR SPENDIN ON PUBLIC SERVICES RATHER THAN ON THE ARTS ( EG. MUSIC AND PAINTING). TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

There is no denying the fact that the government department is more interested in the arts , for example, museums, antiquities and even ancient houses. While it is a commonly held belief that concerning in public services are more important than concerning in arts, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that we should care or interest in public sections because they will return or come back useful and have many benefits for us in the future.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What’s the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part-time jobs?

n many parts of the world, teenagers are encouraged to take up part-time jobs alongside their studies. In my country, however, this trend is still relatively uncommon. Most teenagers here focus primarily on their education, with limited opportunities for part-time employment, particularly due to cultural expectations and academic pressure.

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Topic: Tourism brings economic benefits, but it can also damage local cultures. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals believe that tourism, despite offering clear economic benefits, can harm local cultures and traditions. This essay will argue that the advantages of this practice, including job creation and infrastructure development, clearly outweigh the disadvantage, namely cultural erosion.

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n some countries, very few young people are willing to do unpaid community service ( for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching spots to younger children.) What problems might this cause ? What do you think is the best solve these problems

In some communities, some individuals are ready to work in unpaid community service (for example charity work and improving the neighbourhood or helping individuals to train in sports.While there are some reasons for this, the situation can be improved by different ways .

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While some educators argue that coursework and continuous assessment better reflect a student's capabilities, I firmly agree that formal examinations are the most effective way to measure academic performance. This is because standardized exams ensure fairness and assess critical thinking under pressure, both of which are essential indicators of student competence.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that kids nowadays play violent games. It is a held belief that it is the cause for increasing crimes and violence around the world, but there is an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, l totally agree 100% that the young crowd today is the reason for violence.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. what might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Most of the time the people who lives close to where they belong often spend much of their lifetime there. Because they have a deep connection to the place where they grow. That area holds a specific meaning to them this includes their homes and cities.

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Some people think that students should study only science and technology subjects. Others believe that students should also learn other subjects like history and arts. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that studying science and technology is more important than history and arts, while others say that students should also study history and arts. In my opinion, I believe that we should study science and technology only, and I agree with this because we can learn from Google searches since we are studying technology.

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Many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

As the result of constant harvestation and industrialisation over the centuries, activities that humans undertake every day are causing a detrimental effect on the lives of animals. This essay will discuss why overpopulation is the leading factor and suggest a solution to alleviate the extinction of animal species, which is by implementing stricter laws.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly, people nowadays live in a competitive environment; therefore, it is important for students to equip themselves with more expertise. Whereas some pupils want to learn more about other subjects while studying their major, others reckon that it is more essential to focus on their main subject in order to obtain a certification. I am in favor of the latter statement, and the reasons will be thoroughly elaborated on as follows.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more import environmental problems. Discuss both these views and gieve your own opinion.

The increasing number of private vehicles on the roads is becoming a contentious issue in today's world. Some people suggest that to improve the flow of traffic, the government should provide public transportation facilities, free of cost , for the whole day and night throughout the week. I partially agree with the notion of offering free commutation services. This essay will further elaborate my opinion to the suggestion with supportive arguments before providing a conclusion.

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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true. What is the function of newspapers.

In today’s information age, the role of news in shaping public opinion is more critical than ever. Many believe that truth in news reporting should be objective rather than subjective. While this is an ideal goal, not all news is completely true. The function of newspapers goes beyond simply reporting facts; they also serve as a platform for analysis, debate, and public engagement.

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In recent years, plastic pollution has become a significant environmental issue affecting marine life and human health. What are the main causes of plastic pollution, and what solutions can be implemented to address this problem?

There is no denying the fact that plastic pollution has become a significant environmental issue affecting marine life and human health. While it is a commonly held belief that, over the past few years, there have been more environmental problems, such as plastic pollution, which has a harmful effect on ocean life and mankind. There is also argument that opposes it. I consider that we must try to reduce pollution and find different solutions to stop the spread of diseases and the impact on health and water.  To begin with, solid waste of various types has been a big challenge. In other words, when they are burned, they cause air pollution. They also destroy the environment and harm animals. In addition, the proximity of factories and waste sites to residential areas can lead to serious health threats. It also has an influence on land and marine environments. For example, it may result in CO₂ emissions after being burned.  Another point to consider, many solutions should be proposed ...

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It is sometimes possible to pay somebody to do things you don't want to do, or don't have time to do, for example, household chores or looking after children. Is this a good way of providing work for others? Should people do these things themselves?

It is possible nowadays to hire someone to do your chores or watch your kids while you are busy with something else, this should be considered as a new way of providing job opportunities , and Humans must focus on the more important aspects in their lives that need the most of their attention.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In modern society, freelance is quite common among the mass. The reason and consequence of this phenomenon can be explained as follows.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that living in a country where one must speak a foreign language can lead to both serious and practical difficulties. While some oppose this notion , I strongly support this opinion, as language barriers can cause misunderstandings in emergencies and complicate everyday tasks.

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Some people consider playing sports is beneficial for schoolchildren. Some, however, believe sport activities also have some drawbacks. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of children playing sports.

Society believes that schooling students gain advantages from being involved in sports, while some emphasise that there can be several detriments as well. From my point of view, I have a balanced view regarding this situation.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays, numerous people want to be self-employed instead of working for a corporation or firm. This essay will first demonstrate why such a preference can exist, so for this, people do not want to work in a pressurised environment, and do a job freely, then some disadvantages of being self-employed, like it can lead to becoming an introverted person and being less interactive with others.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is a well-discussed topic that non-native speakers may face tangible social and practical problems while living overseas. While some people strongly believe that speaking in another language does not have any impact on an individual’s life, I truly reckon that knowing a local tongue is not enough to feel free in an foreign territory.

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"Nowadays, many students are highly motivated to gain knowledge for their future careers. To what extent do you agree that motivation or strong foundational knowledge plays a more important role in academic and professional success?"

Nowadays, many students strongly gain knowledge for future work . In my opinion, this issue can be solved with proper education and independent effortsThere is a motivation to study that can stem from both internal and external factors. Internally, a genuine interest in the subject matter, a desire to master a skill, or a belief in personal growth can be powerful drivers.

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