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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle. Which of these do you prefer? What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?

Travelling is the most important thing in today's time some people travel by car while some people travel by bicycle.Different communities have different preferences.I prefer to travel by car.Both cars and bicycles have their own advantages and disadvantages.We will look at both advantages and disadvantages in the essay.

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The topic is to describe the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment statuses based on the provided bar chart. The chart categorizes leisure time by full-time employment, part-time employment, unemployment, retirement, and housewives for the years 1998-1999. The task is to write a report for a university lecturer, summarizing the information shown in the chart in at least 150 words.

The bar chart illustrates the average weekly leisure time enjoyed by men and women across different employment statuses during the years 1998-1999. The categories include full-time employed, part-time employed, unemployed, retired, and housewives. Overall, it is evident that men generally had more leisure time than women in most categories, with the exception of part-time employment and housewives, where data for men is either absent or negligible.

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A lot of people in college are doing academic study. We should encourage them to do a vocational course. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, most students have been engaged in academic study. However, many believe we should focus more on vocational courses. Although academic study provides a fundamental knowledge base, I firmly believe that vocational courses are the best way to concentrate on an individual's profession.

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Many people around the world spend the majority of their free time at home watching TV shows. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

The majority of people around the world waste their free time by spending it at home and watching television shows. In this essay, advantages and disadvantages of this controversial situation will be discussed, and my personal opinion will finally be given.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern world, technology has created a big impact on the generation. Some people believe, Nowadays the vast number of young people's population is higher than the old generation people's count. While it is true every topic has its own advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will explain the various advantages of the topic and demonstrate why they hold great significance compared to disadvantages.

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Nowadays, people always throw the old things away when they buy new things; whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects the phenomenon leads to?

Recently, unlike in the past, more and more people tend to buy something new instead of fixing the existing one and prefer to get rid of it. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and also explain some of the issues it is likely to create in recently behaviour.

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Should museums should be free, OR some entry fee should be there. Discuss both sides and opine.

The entrance fee for the museums ought to be deemed after considering the importance of museums. Although free entrance can benefit people, it may cause some financial problems in the museum.

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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The issue of academic specialisation is debatable, as some people encourage learners to focus only on subjects that they have interest in, while others believe thats students should learn all school subjects. This essay will discuss both sides, on the one hand, exposing teenagers to all subjects may cause work overload management issues, yet on the other hand concentration on a specific subject of interest will boost the child's confidence and guarantees success and good grades. I will explain fully why I support the idea of one area specialisation.

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Some people think we should do more to prevent crimes, while others believe that we can do little for this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The discourse on criminal prevention has sparked debate among academics and policymakers. Some advocate for proactive measures to curb illicit activities, while others assert that such efforts may yield limited outcomes. This essay will elucidate both perspectives before presenting my viewpoint.

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#Essays #Task2 In some countries younger people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own experience.

In this contemporary era, it is argued that teaching job is not being chosen by the younger generations nowadays. I believe this is happening because most of them have started studying professional courses and opting for highly paid jobs rather than teaching. Inorder to improve the diversity in the job market, the government should introduce some additional policies to attract youngsters towards this profession.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society?

In recent years, shopping has turned over to become an enjoyable activity and fun. However, people think there are two sides to this activity a positive and a negative side. In the following text, I will explain both views and share my personal opinion.

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Some people think that children should start at a very early age. But others believe that should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Joining school at a very young age is a very common thing during this time.Some people support this action while others don't.I think children should start going to school when they are old enough.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is predicted that nobody will be interested in purchasing printed newspapers or books as a result of the advancement of technology and, that they can read anything at any time without having to spend any money, personally, I think that this is totally true; because it is faster to search for a book or a newspaper, and they also will save their money.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In some nations, individuals tend to use Western-style attire instead of traditional dress. In my opinion, this a result of globalization and this change ends in reducing the importance of cultural heritage which is a huge demerit.

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People want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. Reason? Is it positive and negative?

The sales of branded wardrobes, cars and other items have been increasing over the period due to the spread of advertising as well as offered quality. Although branded clothes, cars or other things affect the sales of local products, their quality and the comfort they provide to people are also important. Therefore people choose fashionable clothes.

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? and is it positive or negative development?

In the current era of industrialization, there are many people who live in some countries that take long hours to work, which gradually become a trend in the citizens of some countries for a range of reasons. Furthermore, I would argue that the drawbacks of it outweigh the benefits.

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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart illustrates the process of human resources recruitment for a company. Additionally, the flow chart presents the details of the 13 steps.

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Computers are widely used in education and teachers now play a less important role in the classroom than ever before. Do you agree or disagree?

With the development of technology, more and more programs functioned in the classroom took advantage of computers for the educational purposes. This creates an intense debate about whether the role of the teachers has become less crucial or not. As for me, I strongly believe that the electronic devices cannot replace with the human's job at schools because of their huge support in the orientation and emtional sectors.

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Modern buildings appear in large numbers, but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present days, limited land availability made buildings established in modern saving-space styles. In contrast, many people argue that traditional buildings are better than modern ones. I partially agree that traditional buildings will appear more cultured, hence the modern building has a value of environment conservation.

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there are some people who argue that a person’s value will be judged based on social status and material possessions, while others think that it is better if we consider a person according to values such as honor, kindness and trust

In this day and age, there are some people who argue that a person’s value will be judged based on social status and material possessions, while others think that it is better if we consider a person according to values such as honor, kindness and trust. To clarify this issue, I will present my opinion about both the above views in the next paragraphs.

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