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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some might argue that the governments should mainly support the healthcare sector over the other essential ones. While I agree that the governments should put the healthcare development as a priority, I believe that they are required to take care of other sectors in parallel due to their influence on the health system.

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The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram illustrates information about the structures and mechanisms of a hot balloon. Overall, the hot balloon has three main proportions including the basket, the rope and the envelope. In addition, the hot balloon flights up with hot air, which is made from a mixture of propane and air.

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You recently bought a new vacuum cleaner as a present for your wife. But, unfortunately, it turned out to be broken. Write an email of complaint to the store = explain what you bought and when = explain the problem you have in details = tell what do you want the store to do for you

I am writing to inform you that your store sold me faulty equipment.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps depict a port named Porth in 2000 and how it resembles the present time.

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Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）

People have different views as to whether sport is just a kind of hobby and do not essential for society. In my opinion, despite there is a drawback for sport, I firmly believe that it brings about many more benefits.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as parks and squares, Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is it is important to all villages and cities to have a parks and public places. It is undeniable that public places and parks become an essential part of our life. However there is no absolute agreement as some people find beneficial, while others consider everything associated with population of the region.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people think that our live must spent with out some changes. Other view is the with changes will be good things. It is undeniable that changes in our live become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether should prioritize stability or welcome transformation.

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Nowadays, there is a greater focus at all levels in education on science and business studies rather that the arts. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Indeed, modern education programs have shifted their focus on subjects related to science and business. Other disciplines such as the arts are losing the interest of students and universities. In my opinion, this shift on focus responds primarily to the market’s demand.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.dicuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people you decided to do this

Taking a gap year between high school and university is increasingly popular among young people in some countries. This period, often used for work or travel, offers both advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A paparazzi is a person who takes photographs of celebrities. Capturing photos of famous people wherever they go which may feel like invading their privacy but few community think that this should stop. At the same time, some others think that it is just a chance to make money by selling those photos. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I would like to give my opinion as this behaviour will result in exposing their private life.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?h

It is controversial whether some sports and global sporting competitions with the use of violence should be broadcasted on TV or not. I partially agree with this, for they are more likely to promote offensive acts among young people, who often cannot tell the difference between right and wrong, regardless of the fact that the violent sports encourgage people to respect one another.

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Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV as well as from international sports competition. what is your opinion?

According to some people sports involving such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from Television as well as from intertnational sports competition, I partially agree with this statement. Many things have positive and negative effects on people.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument whether youngsters should be active in voluntary actions in their leisure time. So both juvenile and societies could take advantages from this practice. I am in favor of this theory and I will discuss the reasons as below.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news event. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantage?

In this modern era, the development of social media has been controversial regarding the pros and cons of such technologies for individuals. While the invention of the internet brought a phenomenal benefit to humankind, others believe that its drawbacks are ineluctable.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

There is no doubt that today a large number of people across the world are facing famine despite the developments in the agriculture sector . There are a number of causes of this but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.In this essay , I will elaborate on the causes as well as the possible solutions to this issue .

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent on free time activity of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, the education of the young are being emphasised a lot. Some people think an increased amount of government money should be spent on the free time activity of young people. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will be complete able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The trade of published papers and books will slow down in the future because all of them will be read online without any payments in the future. To some extent, I agree that printed books and papers are going to alter their online version, but the process of traditionally producing books and papers may have been done to save a long tradition.

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More people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think that the government should increase the price of fattening foods to address this issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the significant consumption of fatty foods on the increase, more people are suffering from overweight issues, or worse, obesity. Some believe that the government should intervene on the price of fattening foods to discourage people from consuming and tackle this issue. While acknowledging the reasons behind this, I argue that this strategy might put a financial burden on underprivileged individuals and be inadequate to address the problem.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for evryone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience.

Presently, various local dialects are facing extinction due to the growth in popularity of English, as many schools choose to neglect them to focus on teaching English for their students. In my opnion, learning English is still an essential task in contemporary society, however, efforts should be made to prevent local languages from disappearing.

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some people say that education should be the responsible of the government but others think that it is responsibility of individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been controversy about whether education should be controlled by the authority or individuals. I think individuals and the government should share the responsibility as both play an important role in educational promotion. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.

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