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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries, the umber of animals and plants is decreasing. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

A large number of nations around the world have witnessed a universal issue of losing their natural biodiversity as the number of plants and animals has reduced significantly. In this essay, I would evaluate some of the causes that lead to the manifestation of this problem before proposing some measures that could effectively reduce its severity.

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Describe another language that you would like to learn

I must say that I’m a language geek, I mean I’ve learned 3 languages so far but there’s this language I’ve always wanted to learn for so long, which is Korean. Like Chinese and Japanese, the Korean language has its own alphabetical system, and uses a variety of characters in its writing, which is totally different from my mother tongue - one of the Latin languages.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more eldrely people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, numerous countries are witnessing increased longevity, leading to a population of larger elderly people. While some agrue that an ageing population poses difficulties for the government, others believe it brings a host of social benefits. Although the older generation may impose a burden on healthcare systems, this essay contents that, despite the obstacles, the social benefits including experience and economic contribution far outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people believe that pop stars deserve to earn more money than performers of classical music. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The pop-versus-classical debate is one that many music fans are no stranger to. For some, pop chance deserve more financial rewards than their classically trained counterparts do, but others disagree. Before my personal opinion could be delivered, it would be essential to analyze both perspectives in question.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together.others say Olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some believe that the Olympic games are wonderful occasions that connect community from different countries while others believe that the Olympics are an unnecessary expense and the fund should be better used for other purposes. This essay agrees that the Olympic games are fantastic moments that nation from various nations join together rather than allowing payment spent on other demands

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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree?

A controversial discussion point is whether teamworkwork plays a pivotal role in life rather than working alone. This writer believes that working as a group can foster higher productivity and social skills.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuess both these views and give your own opinion.

For many years majority of students' desire to study a broad university curriculum that covers various subjects and its opposition to the other group of leaners whose preferance lies in having a focused study on their chosen qualification, has been the central topic of many heated debates. Having carefully examined the logic behind both perspectives, I, personally, believe the best path lies some where in between.

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Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the issue of online friendships lack depth while in-person connections are true friendships has gained significant attention. In my point of view, I consider myself as an advocate of this idea.

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At present times, the population of some countries include a relative number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that today's global community ratio indicates a significant increase in the younger generation compared to aged crowd. The majority of folks are in favour of this development due to its number of merits. However, some of the folk highlight its demerits first. In my further paragraphs, the advantages and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.

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Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university. Is this positive or negative development?

These days, competition is increasing in order to enrol in universities. While it has a positive side so it is a chance to adapt to competitive atmosphere in the future but this trend can have a negative impact on people who have never been in the competitive environment.

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At present times, the population of some countries include a relative number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

many countries have sophisticated statistics to compare the number of citizens between the older and the younger generations. From my perspective, I agree with this notion as there are plenty of merits that will give us more than demerits and my supporting reasons will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As the world becomes more incredible with its technology, I believe that the median standard of public health tends to increase, rather than decrease, as many people believe in this notion. In my opinion, the advancement of technology has brought and will certainly bring people's health to the next level, as there are so many interventions people can do related to this matter, and I will elaborate more on the following paragraph.

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Some people think that countries should produce food their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that regions should manufacture food for their own dwellers and reduce the amount of food which is imported. While this

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Schools should stop using books for teaching children as they find them.boring and use films tv and computer instead . to what extent do you agree and disagree?

There is a controversy over the matter of whether if books, as the main resource of education, should be replaced by films and computers; however, I agree that utilizing film and computers for education is beneficial and I will explain the reasons here.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

These days, many people, in some nations, pay more attention to research the historical story where they live. There are several reasons contributing to this interest, and there are various ways that people can find the incidents of their habitants.

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It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate over whether schools should bear the responsibility of instilling good behavior in children, alongside providing formal education, is a perennial one. While the role of educational institutions in a child’s moral and behavioral development cannot be understated, I firmly disagree with the notion that schools should be the primary agents of this aspect of upbringing. Instead, I advocate for the primacy of parental influence in shaping a well-behaved child.

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Topic: some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play\ with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the children of having a large number of toys?

Nowadays students have a lot of methods to prepare for the exams. While doing as project on the most popular means of preparation for exams among students in Zetland, I have found some data with the results of the opinion polls presented in the table. The aim of my project is to analyse the information.

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Dou you think advantages of working from outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a controversial debate over the matter if workers are better to work remotely or they should be present at office. Many people argue that working from home is advantageous; however, I hold the conviction that there are also some demerits.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much data as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some report is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Some people believe that it is good to share as much data as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some report is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. This essay will elaborate on the variety of these sentences and why people think so.

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Some employers believe that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that companies are prefer candidates with strong soft skills compared to their achievements of high level degrees. In my perspective, I partially agree with this notion and will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs.

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