IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 253

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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“Prevention is better than cure” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that protection from disease is more benefical to the society than treatment of sickness. I totally agree with this statement as the expenses for medical intervention is a burden on the economy, and healthy residence will be more productive with ideal health situtions.

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Nowdays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? what are the effects on society?

With an ever-increasing concern about how to handle the imbalance of choosing university majors globally, some individuals may have opined that this trend would result in negative outcomes for the entire society. This essay will, however, provide some reasons why I firmly believe that these circumstances will actually cause social problems due to some reasons.

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Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prisons while others claim they should be made to work in communities. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Lawbreakers are dangerous to the community. community have mixed opinion on the punishments offered to them. Some prefer sending them to the cell. While others prefer sending them to the community service. I personally prefer community service to prision.

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More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol and as a result, breaking the law. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

The addiction to alcohol and drugs has become a major concern among youth since they develop the habit of using them and consequently, do not obey the law. This essay intends to explain the two main reasons : unemployment and pressure from society and suggests some remedies to overcome this issue.

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More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is acknowledged that robots play a pivotal role in daily activities both in homes and workplaces. This is no doubt a positive breakthrough as it can foster productivity and efficiency in manufacturing as well as reduce the time spent on household chores.

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more and more tasks we do at home or at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negetive development?

There is no doubt that the topic of robots is a highly controversial one that deserves more extensive researches. This author is on the side of people who believe our tasks should be done by robots despite being criticized by numerous other people indicating unemployment as a strong burden for the national financial status.

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Many people think that living in the city is better than living in the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In modern society, life quality is always the biggest concern for each individual. Others argue that city life is better than rural areas. In my opinion, I think urban areas are the place worth living. The above personal point will be clarified in the following paragraph.

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The percentage of overweight children in Western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Overweight children are one of the big problems in the world, especially in Western society that increased around 20% during the last ten years. I think being overweight for children is very dangerous, which is usually caused by an uncontrolled diet that leads to some diseases and less activity. This essay will discuss causes and effects of overweight children.

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TOPIC 2: SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT SOME STUDENTS SPEND A GAP YEAR DOING VOLUNTARY WORK OR PURSUING THEIR OWN INTERESTS BEFORE STARTING UNIVERSITY LIFE. DO U AGREE OR DISAGREE?

From a traditional point of view, going to university immediately after graduating highschool was a common option. However, nowadays it is widely accepted that having a gap year before going to higher education is beneficial for various reasons, and I strongly agree with this idea.

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In some countries a high proportion of criminal acts are performed by teenagers. Why is the case? What can be done about it?

It is true that the rate of juvenile crime is high in certain countries. This writer believe that this is because of terrible parental upbringing and bad financial situation, while this can be addressed by the government providing free education.

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Rich countries should not employ labor from poor countries because they need the workers more. Do you agree or disagree?

The assertion that rich nations should refrain from employing labor from impoverished countries due to their purportedly greater need oversimplifies the complexities of global labor dynamics. I firmly contend that such a stance fails to consider the multifaceted benefits of labor mobility and overlooks the ethical imperatives at play.

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Young people are highly influenced by famous people, and they look up to them as role models. Is that a positive or negative development?

In our society, celebrities have a strong effect on youngsters. I believe that it may lead to adverse ramifications as they can have a bad role model and not be pleased with their lives.

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Most people believe that social media such as Facebook and Instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The vast majority of people think that social platforms like Facebook and Instagram have a negative effect on the individual and the society. I completely disagree with this because social network connects loved ones, enhances learning and creates employment.

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Some people believe that a year off between school and university could be advantageous for school leavers, while others disagree for many reasons. Discuss both sides of this debate. What is your own view on this?

The issue of gap year has triggered a heated debate. While It is said that taking a year off between school and university is detrimental for school graduates, others support this activity for a variety of reasons. There are arguments on both sides, which I will discuss here.

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It is believed that a year off between school and university could be advantageous for school leavers. To what extent do you support this view?

It is said that taking a year off between school and university is beneficial for school graduates, I personally agree with this statement to some reason, and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some people say that what children watch on television influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children spend watching television influences their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people present that TV content can impact children's behaviour while others maintain that it is not content but the amount of time children spend watching television that matters. From my perspective, although both sides sound reasonable, the latter one is more close to the crux of the issue. However, before setting forth my opinions, I hope to seriously discuss the first perspective first.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in professional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

For many people, taking risks is not just a decision but also a way of life.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In numerous places, new living areas are needed but the only land available for housing them is the countryside. some people feel that it is more significant to protect the countryside and not construct a new building there, in this essay I will argue taht more impotent to protect the county side and I will introduce which place is good to build a house.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?

Several cultures have the belief that children most of the time are unable to achieve anything they put hard work into. Thoughts like this can have some benefits and drawbacks.

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Being a celibrity –such as a famous film start or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Being a celebrity such as a film-star or sportsperson brings advantages as well as disadvantages. This essay will discuss whether being a celebrity is more beneficial or further problematic.

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