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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate information about the change in the layout of a university's sports centre before and after the improvement. It can be seen that the building will expand and will have different types of facilities added.

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Some people believe that watching big events like sports and the Olympics on TV encourage adults to exercise regularly. While others disagree tzzhat there are other effective ways of getting them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some might argue that spectating huge sports events on TV will inspire adults to work-out more. Meanwhile, another argument state that there are many better alternative to motivate people to do physical activities. Personally, I am more leaning towards the second argument and I will explain it more in the next following paragraphs.

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The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technology crime impacts everyone around the world so governments have to protect their population from this issue. I strongly agree that the government must prevent digital scams because of the capability of technology and generation.

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Governments should spend tax money on public libraries rather than public transportation improvements. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In modern days, some approve the idea of investing tax money in general library use instead of citizens’ commuting needs. Although doing so benefits pupils by providing accessible knowledge, the obvious drawback can be seen is pollution from the increasing private means of transport.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after themselves.

Taking care of elder people has led to neglecting other chores and stress. These problems are attributable to the lack of time and the gap of generation but can be addressed by a conducive management of schedule and being identified with their circumstances.

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Scientists agree that people are harming their health by eating too much fat food. Some people think that the solution to this problem is to make people aware of the problems. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While nutrition nutrition experts have peer reviewed research verifying that a fatty diet erodes population health, there is not consensus around the notion that a public education campaign would be the most viable option. Proponents of nutritional education believe teaching a popluation addicted to fat will result in heightedned awareness of risks of eating unhealthy fats and provide healthier alternatives. Those opposed to educational campaigns assert that education is not enough because people from all walks of life, across cultures, benefit from a nurochemical response in the cerebral cortex when eating delicious foods. Instead, they posit, regulation and public policy are the answer. Herein the opposing positions shall be reviewed.

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In many countries, the qualities of life in large cities is becoming worse. What are the cause for this problem? What measure should be taken to tackle this problem?

In recent years, the quality of life in large cities has undoubtedly deteriorated. The primary cause of this issue is overpopulation. People are drawn to urban areas rather than the countryside for several reasons, including better job opportunities and superior facilities. However, this influx of people leads to negative impacts such as traffic congestion, air and water pollution, and a high cost of living, all of which contribute to a declining quality of life.

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HAPPINESS is considered very important in life Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In this day and age, gladness has become a broad issue for the general public. Some people argue that it’s complicated to describe as well as several wonder how ways to accomplish glee. I will shed my light on this view.

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Some people tjink everyone should be a vegtarian , becouse we do not need to eat meat to stay helthy . To waht extent do you agree or disagree

The world there are a lot of vegetarian individuals than nonvegetarian humans,so that type of community as well as dissolves and doctors said, that when society eats healthy food maybe they will live longer than humans who eat a lot of meals.When people eat a lot. meat leads to weight gain and obesity then affects the circulatory system and worst case it causes a person to have a short life span Depending on the method of cooking meat or beef products whether it is. If all types of food

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT INDIVIDUALS TODAY ARE MORE DEPENDENT ON EACH OTHER. OTHERS BELIEVE PEOPLE HAVE BEOME MORE INDEPENDENT. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOURS OWN OPINION.

IN AN EVER-PROGRESSIVE SOCIETY, WHETHER HUMAN BEINGS ARE BECOMING DEPENDENT OR INDEPENDENT IS A DEBATABLE CONTROVERSY AMONG THE COMMUNITY. IN LIGHT OF THIS, THE AUTHOR CONTEND THAT PEOPLE NOWADAYS TEND TO DEPEND ON HUMANS AND THINGS DUE TO GLOBALISATION AND TECHNOLOGICAL ADVANCEMENT, DESPITE OTHERS ASSUMING THAT SOCIETY IS MORE LIKELY TO BE INDEPENDENT IN ORDER TO DEAL WITH WORKLOAD.

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In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There was a time when knowledge was written in books but now it is put on the computer. This writer believes that maintaining for a long time and being easy to access outweighs the drawbacks of misinformation.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the advantages?

In many nations nowadays, the decision of parents choosing to educate their offspring at home rather than sending them to authentic education is continuously rising. While the author believes that learning at their own house can be beneficial for financial purposes, this circumstance might provide an inadequate learning conditions and a non-competitive ambient for children. It must be acknowledged that studying purely at home is causing children to be isolated from authentic study experiences. In other words, guiders who have no expertise in teaching may pave the wrong way for their offspring to grasp the mechanism of a particular subject, which is a threatening factor to many upcoming exams. As a result, students are likely to undergo inadequate learning sensory that is harmful to their study progress. For example, home teachers in France have no qualifications in teaching, thus leading students to participate invalid in studying. Another point worth mentioning is that home educati...

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Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, more and more people are able to approach the internet, leading to e-learning has exploded. With the population of e-learning, some people believe that physical classrooms are redundant. As a author of this essay, I totally disagree with this statement due to the limitation in communication skills and the lack of assistance during studying.

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students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rether than society. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the scholarship for university education is not necessary because of the useless for society. From this writer's perspective, it is essential thing because of the income tax for the individuals and promotion of the learners.

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some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public tranport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not funding should be allocated to roads and motorised vehicle paths rather than spent on public transport is a debatable topic. This writer contends that investments in the public transportation systems are much more necessary, for its cost-effectiveness and reduced the cost of long-distance travel.

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Today more and more people want things instantly ( e.g.: goods, service, news) Why is this? It is positive or negative development?

Today, there is an increase in the number of people who require rapid advantages. This is because people generally don't want to wait and instead focus on themselves. This writer believes that this is a detrimental development and will explain why in the essay.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g. goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development.

In an ever-progressive society, people nowadays tend to long for things constantly in terms of commodity news and services. In light of this, I contend that this status derives from the desire for time-saving. Moreover, this is a negative change due to the reduction in quality.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclng is for the goverment to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

It has been argued that waste management at home is not effective as it is not properly recycled. Some people beleive that this situation can only be improved only if governments take appropriate mesaures making it as a legal requirement. In my opinion, for effective recycling and management of waste, it is crucial to bind this social isssue with laws so that every citizen of a nation become aware of the imporatance and necessity.

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some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on piblic trasport systemssuch as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that funds should be allocated to developing roads and motorways rather than public transport systems. Personally, I believe both road and public transport systems play crucial roles in modern city society and therefore should receive equal investment.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent days, people have held different views about whether we become more dependent on others. While, some argue that people are more reliant on others than they used to. This essay believes that we are more independent than people in the past.

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