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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The majority of the people try to achieve success through their career or education. Where as success is different for a few other people. This essay will discuss, how success is differentiated among different people, followed by that it will discuss my opinion on success.

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“Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer”

There is no denying the fact that parents are the backbone for their kids and they have the significant influence on them. Some people, however, deem that playing with childrens have better effect rather than reading books. From my prespective, I believe that reading in the childhood is not effective as much as enjoyable activities.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

Nowadays, doping has become a major issue in the realm of sport, affecting athletes all over the globe. Not only does it have disastrous influence on the health of those who take such pills, but also it puts their careers at risk. To address the problem, I firmly believe that strict control must be provided.

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The government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care. While many people think that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While some people believe that the government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care, others argue that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Both point of views and reason why I agree the former statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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many people think that interviews are not the best way to assess the suitability of a candidate for a position. To what extent do you agree or disagree? agree = lie, limited qualities disagree = proved it works, ideal q to discover personality& qualities

meeting candidates is a common way to choose an employee. In this report, I will go through the merits and demerits of this method, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advantages of this for their study outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's era, some students who graduate from school want to travel or work for a period of time rather than going immedately to university. This action has some pros that will outweigh the cons. This essay intends to express advantages of travel or work before starting university.

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Some people think that in the modern society, individuals are becoming more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have argued about how human life is in the modern days. A group of people believe that human beings have become more independent these days, but others think that humans are more dependent on their kind. The following essay will discuss both opinions, but in my personal view, I believe that people have become more independent nowadays.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits Individuals rather than society. To what extend your career do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the university should be paid the full cost for study by students due to their advantage not for the public. This writer argues that students must be spending money to afford their full fees at the university rather than just pay half or free.

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The number of old people is increasing. Some think this will cause problems for countries while others believe old people still have value. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is true that there is an increase in the population of elderly people. While the assertion that issues for countries would be caused has many advocates, others hold the view that they can give us value. This essay will discuss both views and I suppose to stand for the latter due to those benefits regardless of the logic behind the former..

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Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. What are the causes and solutions of this problem?

Some countries have a huge number of criminals among urban citizens compared with rural dwellers. This is mainly because of plenty of foreigners and the high cost of living. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with urban offenders.

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In their advertising, businesses usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

Currently, some companies announce considerably their products that are new wave in the market.The writer of this essay believes that if these products are unique, the businesses can attract more individuals to purchase,moreover,this trend can also be an optimistic development due to economic growth.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent on each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many individuals think that nowadays are more rely on another guys. Other people consider about human have turn into autonomous trend. This essay would delve into discussing the two perspectives as well as stating my support for the the latter one that people believe today more young tend to the independent trend.

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Some educational experts say that children have to do homework. However others say that homework does more harm than good.

Numerous educational experts emphasize the importance of homework for children. However, there are also individuals who aruge that homework lacks benefits for them altogether(완전히). This argument(debate) has been ongoing in modern society since we started to consider(seek) more efficient ways to teach(educate) students. To consider this divergence, it is necessary to realize how homework affects children’s lives.

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Virtual reality be used as a tool for therapeutic interventions and mental health treatments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advanced development and innovations of technology has brought a significant transformation to medical treatment modalities notably for the virtual reality as a media for therapeutic interventions and mental health procedures. I agree with this viewpoint for the following reasons.

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these days many families move abroad for work.some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. others beleive that it make their life more difficult.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Moving to another place can be a challenge for many families and their children. I believe that there are many negative and positive aspects of immigration. The most fight in this process is for youngsters. Recently, the rate of moving to a new land was raised. I guess we will observe the level of travel will be growing in the future.

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The ,aps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville from 1980 until now. In general, it appears that the city has become a much more modern city, with some welfare services and amusing facilities which in past it was surrounded by walls and had gates, nonetheless, all of them have been removed accordingly.

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Nowadays, the quality of life in large city is decreasing. Why is this happening? What can be developed?

There is a common concern in this day that life quality in metropolises is declining. The reason for this stems from the high cost of living. In light of this, it can be addressed by government subsidies on amenities.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because unversity education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals think that we should pay all costs for our education because benefits individuals of university education more than society. I totally agree with this statement. The reasons I will explain in this essay.

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students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education be nefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More people think after studying at universities, students will earn money for themselves instead of benefiting society, so there are arguments that students should pay money for the fees. In my opinion, I disagree with that, follow this below to know the reasons why I think that.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other.Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern decades, many people believe that people are more rely on others while others think that they live in a place which is autonomous. In this essay, this writer will discuss both views and think that they depend on others rather than become independent.

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