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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, economic education has been a major issue in many parts of the world. Some believe the school should make a mandatory financial subject, while others would argue that financial study does not need to be included as a compulsory subject. However, I agree with the former view that the school must teach financial subjects for student's future.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Child obesity is a challenging dilemma in the modern world these days, especially in western society, where the proportion of obese children has grown by almost 20% in the last decade. This essay will elaborate on several main culprits of this issue and propose some outcomes of this problem.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look like after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and. Are comparisons where relevant.

The blueprint presents the current area of Southwest airport in relation to how it will appear in its updated version next year.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school, Do the advantages of this outweight disadvantages.

Children are more receptive to learning a new language at this stage.

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Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Learning about other countries and cultures is something interesting. What is the way to achieve this study?, and how to learn about it? There are arguments about those ways some say they can learn from books or other sources instant of travel. This essay will discuss both points of view and will be explained.

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Most companies use interviews as the primary method to elect a candidate for a job some people think that this is not the best way Do you agree or disagree ?

Applying for an employee has a range of ways including interviewing. Many employers in companies use this arrangement as a main way to choose a applicant for a job. However, some citizens believe that it is not optimal. In my point of view, I lean toward the former due to the convenience and the accuracy of the approach.

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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear.

In our modern life, a myriad of humans believe that E-books are popular than print books. I am inclined to believe that e-books have many advantages over paper books, and for this reason, a lot of people are using e-books these days. One of the main reasons for this is the extinction of the records of print books.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Careful consideration must be given to whether or not having too many elders is beneficial for society. From the writer's perspective, the drawbacks of postponing economic growth and financial pressures on the government far outweigh the benefit of establishing a strong community.

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Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area, others prefer to live in many different places in thair life time?

Nowadays, people have different preferrences choosing fixed or stable place to live and work. Some prefer to stay in their born city lifelong time and others are inclined to experience diversified life by changing living areas. In this essay, I will examine both sides of this different life style to seek a conclusion.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

One point of view supports that advertising persuades us to buy products and services while,the other says people don’t pay attention to ads,as most ads are not of use and we see them everywhere.

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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

A controversial argument has arisen between two view, the first viewpoint believes that old people are beneficial, while the other one disagrees with that. In this report, I will go through the merits and demerits of having them, and then allow me to conclude my point of view.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Language is the best way of communication. However, it is seen that many languages have disappeared in this modern era. There are people who believe that it will be convenient if there are fewer languages across the globe. I also support this opinion to a greater extent.

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Some people say that the Government should break down all the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that every country’s monuments and historic sites are their heritage. Surprisingly, there are some who feel it is less valued and want the government to pull it down. In my opinion, these are the greatest assets of every country and deserve respectful attitudes by citizens.

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In many countries it is mandatory for school children to wear uniforms. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant from your own knowledge or experience.

The policy of mandatory school uniforms is a contentious issue, prevalent in many countries worldwide. This essay will argue that the advantages of this policy do outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

There is an opinion that the parents have spent a great deal of amount for their children. One of the biggest portions of the money in first years of life is spent on leisure activities and play items. Obviously, there are both positive and negative effects on it and family’s members should be carefully in purchasing.

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is always suggested that it is a tough task to ask children to spend time reading. I believe this is because reading is not interesting to them, and setting a family reading hour every day and joining a reading club might be helpful methods to solve this problem.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

Nowadays, children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Smartphones are the most used inventions nowadays, and every teenagres, even children have one. Children see smartphones as an important thing they need in their life, they believe it is a great source for entertainment, as a useful object, but smartphones also has negatives along with it. There are always benefits and negatives on something.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Due to the limited budgets of the country, the government is responsible for allocating them for activities that are important and should be immediately developed. Some people consider that the government should not spend money on the arts they are not the most necessary issue. This essay will elaborate on the reasons why I disagreed with this view.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Whether the official tests are the best way to evaluate the level on student’s knowledge has become a debated topic. When some people argue that it is the only way, others advocate the more holistic approach, where projects and dissertations should be considered. I totally agree with the aforementioned, and in this essay, I will claim that assessment system should be based on constant monitoring and not on formal exams only, to encourage more effective learning and avoid side effects of stress.

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What measures can be taken to control controll violence among students? Provide three solutions with good reasons and examples from your reading, experience, or observations to support your point of view.

Schooling violence is one of the most persistent problems in educational institutions. For me, there are three approaches every school can follow to create a safe studying environment for their students.

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