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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages giving children this message

In many cultures, the children are being told that burning candle at both ends will make all their dreams come true. Personally, I strongly side with this view and I believe insisting on this massage brings about so many plus pints for children.

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Whoever controls the media controls the mind. Discuss this statement and give your own opinion. agree = messages disagree = depend on activities

Nowadays, more people are using the social media, and a lot of them acknowledge that it, indeed, affect their way of thinking, beliefs, and actions. In this report, I will go through the proofs of this statements as well as its reverse one, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the 21st century, advancements due to globalization has affected all most all sectors through out the world. Accordingly, many opportunities have been created to bring people, businesses as well as regions together. Although, there are some criticism towards this approach, vast area of its pros can not be overlooked. This essay will support the current trends of globalization.

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At the present, the population of some countires includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

A balanced population consist of almost equal amount of youth and older adults. However, certain nations inculde majority of young adults compared with geriatric population. Although having ample youngsters bring tremendous advantages of the respective country, losing of older people have certain disadvantages that can not be overlooked. I will discuss both aspects of this matter before infering my constructive feedback.

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In the last few decades, there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the the media should have no right to privacy. To what extent do you agree?

One school of thought holds that celebrities do not have legislation in terms of private lifestyle. I accept that this perception is just somewhat justified, I assert that there are other factors that might logically lead to opposition.

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Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Evidence suggests that buying products is a growing trend and is a undeniable part of everyone in their daily life. Although there are a number of benefits involved in this approach, the drawbacks are by no means negligible.

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Student should pay full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people claim that learners should pay full money for their own research of getting from the government because it causes students benefits rather than the public. This writer put more disagrees with this statement and will elucidate in the following essays.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this current world, some people believe that sharing much information about academic things, business, and science was a good thing to do, while others think otherwise. From my perspective, there are truths for both of the views. The following paragraphs will clarify my stance.

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Nowadays more and more children acquire unhealthy eating habits. Why is this happening? What would be the solution?

There is a common concern these days that the eating habits of teenagers are unhealthy. The reason behind this is the overindulging in food, yet it can be addressed by creating a balanced diet.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. first= statistics, only benefit second= like that, communicate

An argument has arisen about the reason of learning another language, the first view suggest that the primary reason is in order to work or travel, while the second group says that there are various factors. In this report, I will go through both views and then allow me to share my point of view.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, newspapers are becoming less used with the advent of the internet. While it is true that newspapers have a have a less convenient online version, the world has some people who have not read paper newspapers yet.

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Student should pay full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that because a university education takes advantage of individuals more than society, students should pay enough for their own studies. This writer disagrees with this statement due to university education still manages their income from society and students should have more ways to pay for their study.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduces the ammount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the era of technology, social messengers are now used to connect millions of people ranging from our neighborhood to citizen from the other side of the world. Some people argue that these new forms of communication bring people closer, while others think they pull people apart as people nowadays rarely meet each other in person. In my opinion, I disagree that social platforms cause a lack of people's social lives.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, there are some ideas that learners should charge a full fee for their courses, due to university education providing profits for particular students than for everyone. I totally disagree with this statement and it will be discussed in this essay.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that learners should defray the full cost of their study, due to the university education has more benefits on students than the society. Personally, I totally disagree with this point of view.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, it is obvious that internet plays crucial role in humans' everyday lives. Some people argue the internet has increasingly gained its popularity and that the newspapers will be outdated. Personally, I agree with the statement since there are uncountable benefits that the internet could bring about. In the following paragraphs, the details will be elaborated before the conclusion is reached.

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with the developments of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situation what solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

In our modern world, new inventions and developments are being made day by day, such as social media which allows people to socialize and create a bond with others even if they do not step out of the house no matter how old they are. However, social media applications are not a substitute for face to face interactions. In fact, people who interact with each other usually want to meet up so as to further strengthen their bond. In that case, malicious people might abuse the innocence of usually the younger generation in this type of situation. This essay will discuss the possible solutions for this danger.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education helps the students to get benefits for their future and also they help their country to develop among other nations. Some people think that younger people are required to have a full-time education until they are 18 years old. In this essay, we are going to see to what extent people think about studying full-time for 18-year-old students.

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Some people think that uniform in schools is unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree?

People have different views whether the school's uniform is necessary or not to students. Some people think school' uniforms should be banned because it is unnecessary while others suggest that uniform laws in schools have many advantages for students. I partly agree with this statement that school uniform have a variety of merits for students, however there are also some disadvantages that we have to consider it.

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Describe a good advertisement that you think is useful You should say: - Where you can see it - What it shows - Why you think it is useful - And explain how you feel about it

Well, I do not like to watch ads anywhere but I cannot avoid as it is everywhere. While I watch shows on my phone, there are ads appears in between and usually I skip them but here, I want to talk about an ad which was catchy. There is a word used in that ad and it says "thank you mom". This adis related to a nestle company of choclate shakes. Therer is a mom behind a child in that advertisement and it shows how a maother encourages her child to play football and cricket. She motivates her child by giving her nestle choclate cup. Ofcourse the main moto of the advertisement to earn money for the company but it really gives a positive message that there is a mother who keeps on sacrifices for her child. When her child is playing in scorchy heat, she is besides her child to keep motivating her and when her child wins the match she pour her a nestle cup choclate. It is a useful ad because it shows that how important is to have a mother in life and it also shows love between a child and ...

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