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In the recent times, the only way to see pieces of art or historical artefacts was by visiting public museums and galleries. Nowadays, people can admire them on the internet. Group of people consider that such public places like galleries will not be need because of the internet. I disagree with this opionion, such places as galleries and museums should exist for financial and entertainment reasons.
Since the technology has been improved rapidly, it makes our life more convenient. It is suggested that communicating via email is faster and easier than writing paper letters and that paper letters no more needed. I agree with that statement, because delivering the information by email saves time and resources.
People's opinions differ as to it is whether or not advantageous for countries to have citizens gaining a huge sum of revenue. While it is argued that governments should restrict extraordinary salaries, I personally believe that it is beneficial for both society and residents.
Commonly, Some people believe elderly belong to be a leader while others think that younger has a better leadership. However, it can be measured how to find a good leader with some indicators. From my point of view, older people have a great capability to become a leader rather than the younger ones due to their experience and wisdom.
Nowadays many people say that playing computer games can affect children’s mentality, and the way they react, and I agree with this, by just looking at the numbers of children staying in home and doing nothing rather than “gaming”.
In the contemporary era, there is an ongoing debate wheather money and position get maximum priority or not. I strongly believe that consumerism results in a classification between rich and poor on the basis of possessions and power.
It is believed that English is going to be the most spoken language in the world. There are both benefit and drawback regarding this issue. People all around the globe will be connected, and they will strive to improve their English language proficiency in order to obtain a better prospect. Having a language that is being spoken by a majority of global citizens will decrease cultural diversity.
The two pie charts compare six types of different contributors to high school graduates applying to their desired colleges over two decades (1982-2002) in the UK.
In this modern era, science and technology play significant role in development of community, because each and every area are attached with technology. So some believe that, students get more financial support from authorities as compre to the students in other fields like literature, management, etc. If asked, I diagree with this statement. I will give my inclination in ensuring paragraphs.
It is argued that it is best for children development to have an independent school while others believe that going to school is essential for them. I tend to think that each of the ideas has its own benefits which will be elaborated more in the following paragraph.
It is argued that it is best for children development having independet school while others believe that going to school is essential for them. I tend to think thank each of ideas have it own benefits which will be elaborate more on the following paragraph.
In the modern world, many students who are studying in college prefer to work part-time jobs, and I think that it is very good ,and it is very beneficial for students. So, this essay will discuss how is good for students who are working ,while they are studying in college.
Increased intake of sugar causes debilitating effects in our health. Many people believe that the governing institution of a nation should have power to control sugar consumption, while some citizens think that it should be the responsibility of an individual to manage the intake of sugar levels. This essay will discuss both points and I personally believe that each person should be disciplined in their food intake.
Nowadays, the main priority of the governments is to offer a safer transportation system in a cheaper rate. As railways are known as favourite for commuters in short distance and long journey as well, I personally think that, more money should be spent on railways comparing roads.
Nowadays, sports are something that everyone follows. According to some people, sports professionals are role models for the young generation and have a positive impact on them. However, others think that the on-field and off-fieldfield behaviour of athletes can have negative circumstances on young people. Personally, I believe that the former statement has more merits than latter one.
Even Though it is widely believed that using modern gadgets have negatively impacted the younger generation’s literal abilities, I disagree with that common perception that I will present other point of view to perceive the subject in this essay.
Since the invention of the internet, people's interaction preferences have changed significantly. Nowadays, they will be able to chat, and speak conveniently; shop through different websites with the cheapest prices. As a result of these opportunities, they prefer to comminicating online to speaking face-to-face. These features of the cyber platforms have changed individuals lives positively.
Nowadays, a major percentage of the global population lives in cities. As a consequence, the main issue facing many large cities worldwide is overcrowding. In the remainder of this essay, some causes of this phenomenon will be explored as well as possible alternatives to address it. Both migration from rural areas to urban areas and the lack of jobs in small and mid-sized cities, lead the list of factors driving the overpopulation in megacities. Firstly, during the 20th century large migrations from the countryside to cities occurred and these happened for different reasons. For example, in Colombia, due to the civil war many people left their farms and moved to cities. As a result, the urban population increased dramatically between 1990 and 2000. Another key factor, is the insufficient number of jobs in towns for young people. As a consequence, these individuals relocate to large cities’ industrial areas. In order to mitigate the overpopulation issue is possible that governme...
In the course of human history, people have been trying to increare their information in all aspects of life to survive. Like getting information about how to accumulate food in the past to how to step on the Mars now. By the same token some people are of te belief that sharing information as much as possible, would be good, while others claim that some information should not be shared becuure of their impertance. I would say both arguments have valiety, but I would lean toward the former.
Nowadays, Some people believe that educating children that has unlike abilities together advantage all of them, while others think that kids should be tuaght differently based on their intelligent with special treatment given. Personally speaking, it would be more benefitials in a wider aspect of educational and innovations if intelligent children group together as they have the same interest, and may improve the world in the future.
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