IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 319

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some youngsters are be with their smartphones longer time everyday.The post COVID change in education to online flatform could be a major reason for this, however addiction to social media may prone young kids to be with thire phones all the time.In my opinion, this is a negative development and resons are analyticaly presented in this essay.

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Some people see sport as no more than a leisure activity, others, however, believe that it is important for society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are contradictory views about whether sports have their contributions to the society or they are forms of entertainments. Both schools of thought will be discussed, followed by my own opinions.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government's responsibility. What is your opinion?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether making an investment in the medical care and educational system is of the essence for the governor. While some claim that the lawmaker ought to cover the expense,the opposite makes a statement that there is a lack of consensus regarding whether it is the government's accountability. I would contend that the authority should splurge money on them but they don't pay it completely.

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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

In light of the rapid development of society, being competitive is one of the beneficial traits for us to survive. I believe that this good trait has a positive effect on both individuals and society.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns ad cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, it can not be denied that e-shopping results in every one of the stores in urban areas and cities shut down. Personally, I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I will clarify it.

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In their advertisement businesses emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this?do you think it is positive and negative development?

Business companies generally stress in their advertisement that their goods are new in several ways. This is because they use it as a business strategy to sell and I personally believe that it is a positive development both for the company and the consumers.

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Some people see sport as no more than a leisure activity, others, however, believe that it is important for society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From the ancient Roman Empire to the modern society, sports has been a part of the human history. It has witnessed the civilization and it has developed into different levels with the aid of technology.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that one of the most important issues of today's society are very concerned about is the development of children. The question of whether doing outdoor activities for children's development than playing computer games is a controversial one. From my personal standpoint, I totally agree with the former idea. In the following paragraphs, I would give some reasons to support my argument.

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Learning English is important Do you agree or disagree ?

English is a global language. There is a view that studying English sometimes is not important for people. While this can be beneficial for people who want to study abroad and who want to work a good job, I believe this difficulty studying English is sometimes high value and it takes a lot of time.

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Some people think that schools should invest more money in technology, such as more computers, while others think more money should be spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

automation has become a vital part of all facets of our life, in the modern world we can not imagine our lives without technology it is impossible to imagine our lives without technology so that some people suggest spending increasingly on computers, but some are in favour of spending on teachers. However, I will shed light on both views on whether more money should be spent on teachers or computers and will give my opinion.

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Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face teaching?

It is argued that A.I will take the place of teachers in the future. This essay totally disagrees with this statement because computers have not been fully developed to provide students with sufficient support they need and online courses can be a viable choice to replace traditional classroms.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration below depicts information about alters in Grange Park in 1920 and most recently.

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In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

The differences in the roles of mothers and fathers can vary across different cultures and societies, and they often stem from a combination of historical, social, economic, and cultural factors. Here are a few reasons why such differences might exist:

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Whether Families today are closer than they used to be

Family over everything they say; but how many of us truly comprehend the meaning of family ties? Personally I don't agree that families today are closer than they used to be for alot of reasons. Firstly; growing up as kids in a one bedroom apartment in a Nigerian christian home, me and my two siblings will wake up in the morning to Mummy leading morning prayers. After that comes series of regular morning routines which we all did together with pleasure, playing and enjoying every minute of our childhood.

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The images below explain the process of how pollutants from modern life becomeacid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain.

The given diagram illustrates the acid rain process that has caused contamination in the environment and the food chain.

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Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music has been a crutiall tool in history on culture exchange and international communication, and it will constantly playing its role in time to come. Therefore, I agree with the statement wholeheartly.

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The images below explain the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain.

The given diagram explains the way in which the process of pollution causes acid rain and its impact on the environment and the food chain.

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Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do vou agree or disagree with the statement?

Nowadays, governments have to spend money on railways rather than roads. Some people assert that the installation of a new railway is more crucial. I support this idea because the installation of the railway is more helpful in promoting the suburban area's economy.

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people argue, that smartphones should be banned in public places, the same way as smoking. I completely disagree with this statement.

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In most sucessful organizations some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor,other people say that other factors are most important. discuss both views and give your opinion

In today’s world, there are individuals who maintain the conviction that the link of supervisors and employees through communications plays a vital role to confirm successful organizations. In my assessment, the prevailing trend leans towards other potential elements which pose a crucial part to be significant operations.

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